Lord, I Don't Want to Work Overtime

This book is pretty good. If you want to go further, I have a few suggestions for the author to refer to. 1. Be clear about priorities. Don't just write a few chapters of a short biography without a celebrity appearing. There are now more than 200,000 words, but the main plot is still in its early stages. If you can't grasp the weight, don't write down each group portrait in detail. You have to consider how much the character will interact with the protagonist after it is created. 2. Don't whitewash every character. If there are characters who implement their ideals, there must be characters who are confused by power and money. There is no difference between the characters created by indiscriminate whitewashing, and the sense of reading substitution is very poor. 3. Describe the career system clearly. Don't write down every skill clearly. The skills of famous historical generals can be described in detail, but the skills of a random passerby must also be written. Moreover, the skills are not quantified and can only be distinguished by color. How destructive is it? How to measure the difference in skills between civil and military occupations? How to excel with strategy bonus, rather than literacy and judgment. 4. The characterization is too childish. The reaction of the boss poaching Cao should be to get more and more excited the more he digs, instead of wanting to compensate? First, there is no kindness, and there is a bit of natural resentment. Second, most of the plots of the Three Kingdoms itself are wars. War is cruel, not war games. Now that you have the determination to assist Liu Bei, you must work hard for the goal. No matter your personality is salty or anything, at least don't do the opposite. Third, Boss Cao's IQ is not up to the mark, the loyalty of the Young Rangers is not evident, and the transition to thick and dark in the mid-term is not reflected either. He is constantly annoyed and regretful. 5. The supporting roles cannot distinguish the key points. Basically, the supporting roles have equal parts now. Except for a few big names that I already know are the main supporting roles, there is basically no one who stands out, but each role has a lot of roles. 6. If the current development trend continues, one thing that may be very similar to the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms is that Liu Bei's assets were piled up too much in the early stage, so that it cannot be described in the later stage. It can be promoted equally to the world in the name of reducing civilian casualties. Do you need to keep a big base for man-fighting purposes? Therefore, to avoid this situation from happening, the development speed of several big bosses must be accelerated, and then Liu Bei will no longer be a soy sauce character in the subsequent wars. So how will his position change? It's impossible to have such a strong family background and let others ignore it. Play Chibi again. I need to think more about how to play the route in the future.

Three votes have been cast. The author's writing is good and his ideas are clear. Please add more details to your writing. . .

This Star Master has gone too far, Liu Xiu II? If you can't beat them, just cheat. There is no team that can't be killed by summoning meteorites. If there is one, then summon two.

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I have read Chapter 27 so far, please don't mind if there are any mistakes or omissions. Each transfer point is a bit... How should I put it, it seems unclear. For example, the most recent one (Zhang Fei fights Deng Mao), it felt like I had just turned the page, and I checked repeatedly, thinking that I had missed a page or a chapter (although it was explained later, but if I happened to be in a bad mood, I really wanted to cross it) Goodbye, for example (Protagonist and Boss Cao Chapter 27), the previous article said that I had to ask my father and master, and then, a provincial number... Just? ? The feeling I get is this: The protagonist wants to talk to Boss Cao, and Boss Cao asks the protagonist to ask his elders, and then Boss Cao's subordinates molest the protagonist? ? ? ? There are many more, so I won't list them one by one. In fact, should I explain them more clearly (completely reasonable and aboveboard), so that the author can add transitions within the original plot, I will feel comfortable watching it, and you will increase the number of words. Doesn't it smell good? The above, if my mental state is not good, or my mood is not good, I (only myself, not on behalf of others) will definitely be advised to quit.

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Volume 2 Chapter 14 I don't understand. So many big guys didn't expect an invasion in winter, and they didn't make any plans in advance. The response speed was even more shocking. There was no support for such an important place like Yanmen Pass for seven days, and there was no beacon tower. I don't understand.

I don't agree with Yi Zhongtian's interpretation of Cao Cao and Liu Liu in the Three Kingdoms, but I respect his opinion. After all, it is normal to interpret history with personal emotions. Who dares to say that he is absolutely objective? But Yi Zhongtian at least provided evidence. He explained clearly to you one by one where he based his interpretation and why he interpreted it this way. This is the basic quality of an academic person. Most of the people watching the show are adults. Don't you think about whether it is correct or not and just accept his interpretation? But now many people have read a few novels and read some personal interpretations of the authors, and then they start to blindly oppose so and so. If you ask them why, they actually don't know. Anyway, they just accept other people's interpretations and think so and so is hypocritical, so and so is cowardly, and so and so kills innocent people indiscriminately. Is this called an adult?

When I saw the part about searching for Lu Bu, I couldn't help but complain: Not long after the protagonist Chen Chen arrived in Bingzhou, he told people that the most powerful general in the world (Lü Bu) was in Bingzhou. However, there was no news for several years. ? ? ? I was confused. When the protagonist first arrived in Bingzhou, it could be said that there were not enough strong generals. The three governors, Dian and Wei, were not strong enough to go to Lu Bu. What about after taking Zhang Liao, after taking Xu Huang, even when Zhao Yung first came? So many powerful generals can't escape? Then you can't send someone to look for Lu Bu first? Don't you have anyone you can use? Everything has to be done by the group of advisers and fierce generals themselves? You can still make a living in this world, but if you can't save it, why don't you just wait to die? You also create the infatuated Lu Bu and the chronically ill Wei. Do you believe that no one on the protagonist side can cure Wei, even if the treatment is not good enough to extend his life? Even if it can't be cured and you can't live longer, if you show a positive attitude, will Lu Bu, the infatuated seed, not be grateful to you, and won't you consider asking him to serve? If you don't want to accept Lu Bu, don't deal with these things. It's a pity not to accept Lu Bu in the first chapter, but the next chapter will be the icing on the cake? ? ? Now that you are getting more powerful, stop recruiting powerful generals. Lu Bu's military force is the icing on the cake. Which general is worth recruiting? It's time to set up a double standard for old people again. It's just disrespectful! If you want Lu Bu to go to Dong Zhuo to continue the trend of history, then choose a good way to deal with it. Such a plot is deliberately intended to lower one's intelligence, but it is also both serious and upright. What else can it do other than to offend people? Isn't it interesting that a good book is like a mindless novel? The good grass jelly turned into poisonous grain and grass, I am speechless.

Let's talk about your favorite character from the Three Kingdoms~ My favorite character is Jia Xu~

In the middle of the night, Cao Cao accidentally discovered Liu Bei sneaking out of Chen Chen's room while wandering around Tokyo. Cao Cao, who had always had a bad relationship with Liu Bei, immediately searched Liu Bei on the grounds of security inspection, and found an exquisite and compact remote control. When Cao Cao saw Liu Bei wearing thin clothes, with his thighs clenched, and his face full of shyness, like a child who had made a mistake and was caught red-handed, Cao Cao immediately understood. So he took Liu Bei back to the room on the pretext of interrogation. During the "interrogation", he turned on the remote control and prepared to watch Liu Bei make a fool of himself. Unexpectedly, after pressing the remote control, a violent explosion occurred in Chen Chen's room. Chen Chen was seriously injured and almost died on the spot. Question: Does Cao Cao's behavior constitute a crime?

The history books say that Liu Bei was a kind and virtuous king The inscription says that Kong Ming was a loyal and capable minister The literati said that Liu Bei was a generous and generous man The textbook said that Kong Ming was a dedicated man People nowadays are so smart We can easily see through that Liu Bei is a hypocrite and a good person, and those who are loyal are full of heart and brains. Even those who try their best for Liu Bei can't see through it We can easily see through that Kong Ming is a useless and treacherous minister. Those pen and ink mountains and rivers are capable of poetry and poetry People who praise Kong Ming can't see through it Don't ask Ask and throw Adou just to win people's hearts Ask and ask the eight formations are just useless things Ask and ask Bai Di and Tuogu are all for show and test Ask and bow to the essence, but actually have other plans Ask and ask, history is a little girl who can be dressed up by others Ask, I have independent thinking and don't need to read the literature Take a look at the thatched cottage? Former teacher? What is true temperament? Don't even look at my boss Cao's poems, which is called true temperament (no intention to target Cao Cao) The hypocrite who led the people across the river, robbed tombs and massacred the city, the true temperament People in the past were still too stupid, why can't they see through things that people today can figure out when they are full It's just the one who made Xin Qiji "afraid of the consequences" The man who was "ashamed to see Liu Lang's talent" is called Liu Bei It's just that the man who made Du Fu "make the hero burst into tears" is called Zhuge Liang Beat resurrected, assisting the people to cross the river Dedicated to the end of his life, died Although it will not be as powerful as the unprecedented one, at least it is not that unbearable (copy and paste)

The author is really miserable. He wrote a fantasy novel and was beeped beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep beep.

Tell me, who is your favorite among the Three Kingdoms? I like Guo Jia the most

If you don't want to work overtime, you will go to court. Just work overtime honestly. There is no overtime pay yet.

It's written like a mythical version of the Three Kingdoms. I've read half of it, but I don't see the use of dog tags at all. The appearance rate is pitifully low. I feel like it's more of a daily complaint, a little bit watery.

[Artistic processing and re-creation of this book - Zhang Fei] [Lord, I don't want to work overtime - Encyclopedia Revealed] In the official history, there is no record of Zhang Sanye's appearance. We can only know that he was strong, but the image in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms is also artistic processing. Chen Shou can know Zhang Sanye's appearance, but there is no description. A bold guess is that Mr. Zhang is just average-looking, just by the standards of ordinary people, and has nothing to write home about. However, according to the aesthetic deviation of the times, I plan to reprocess the image of Mr. Zhang who has been left blank in history. In this book, Mr. Zhang in the current timeline of 185 is still a teenager. I believe that teenagers still have enough collagen, and boys who are more sunny and energetic are not ugly, so it is not a big problem to call him handsome. As for the figure, please look at the character information. Mr. Zhang will also be tall and strong, but he just doesn't have a beard yet. If I have to compare it with a character, I would rather write Mr. San as jiojio. If it is a live-action version, I would rather he is - Shun Oguri If it is a game version, in fact, the one closest to the image of Zhang Fei in my heart when he grows up, I think it is - Kazuma Kiryu.

If the quality of the free reading part of this book is 10 points, the rest of the content is only 9 points, and the last 50 chapters are only 8 points at most. I wonder if anyone feels the same as me. Recently, there have been more and more meaningless complaints.

To be honest, if you are really capable, Liu Bei is the way out for a poor family, and it is convenient to lay the foundation. Cao Cao, Xun Yu and his gang are bound, Sun Jian and Sun Ce died early, and Sun Quan was too late. And no matter what Liu Bei said, the benefits are obvious. As long as he is a veteran, he doesn't have to worry too much about his life safety.

Question_? The strength package referred to by the protagonist's skills does not include inanimate objects The package does not include those who are nominally, but are actually spies or similar to being in Cao's camp and having a heart in Han. Will it improve Can the fertility of the land be improved? Can animals be made smarter and stronger? If I put a stone, will it become stronger or will there be an atomic collision Can it improve the sharpness of the sword ... Or can it only increase the physical strength of the human race ...

I discovered a magical phenomenon. Among the six books I have not read many times, Cai Yan is the heroine in five of them. The remaining one is called the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms

I read it a long time ago and now I came across this book by chance. So, does the famous scene where the male protagonist just tells the female protagonist that he only loves you and then turns around and accepts the maid (not even twenty chapters later) comes from here?

Alumni came to cheer. Today, the career class teacher introduced the senior, I think he is so awesome, come and worship him🙏🏻 I wish you better and better as you write㊗️

Don't panic if the limited exemption is available, wait until the limited exemption is over and make a full reservation

I rushed to watch it before the limited exemption. I found out a few days ago that it was limited to free. I originally planned to watch it for free. It was so good, but I finished it in a spell 😅. But it was really good to watch. It felt different from all the Three Kingdoms I had seen before.

Brothers, do you want to read Chen Shen and Guo Jia's articles? 😏😏 If anyone reads it, I will write it

Surname: Chen Name: Tan Words: Zixu Height: 176 (cm) Weight: 64 (kg) Clan: After Anhou, son of Xihuahou Chen Xian Date of birth (AD): Lifespan: Ambition (probability of rebellion): (minimum 1, maximum 15) Principles (loyalty): (The lowest is 1 and the highest is 15) (The following are full value 100, lowest 1) Infantry: ()Cavalry: () Archers: ()Navy: () Siege: ()Defend: () Training: ()Conscription: () Martial Arts: () Bravery: () Riding: () Archery: () Capture alive: () Robbery: () Strategy: () Strategy: () Calm down: () Intelligence: () Farming: () City management: () Flood control: () Construction: () Inspection: () Arithmetic: () Eloquence: ( ) Negotiation: () Connections: () Benevolence: () Culture: () Charm: () Tactics: Charge (Infantry) Hold (Infantry) Assault (Cavalry) Rush (Light Cavalry) Volley (Archers) Rockets (Archers) Strategy: Ambush Internal strife Encouragement Chain Fire plan Celestial changes Falling rocks Traps False reports Provocation Calm and force Breaking into formation Weapon type (choose one from seven): One-handed Two-handed Spear Broadsword Maul Ax Halberd One-on-one type (choose one from three): Strength Skill Speed Preferences (minimum 0, maximum 3) Weapons: () Famous horses: () Books: () Musical instruments: () Clothes: () Accessories: () Treasures: () Drinking: () Beauty: () Compatibility/compatibility/like-mindedness: ( Choose one from eleven, the smaller the difference, the easier it is to get together) 1 (Dong Zhuo) 7 (Zhang Jiao) 25 (Cao Cao) 45 (Liu Biao) 55 (Liu Zhang) 65 (Gongsun Zan) 70 (Ma Teng) 75 (Liu Bei, Guan Yu, Zhang Fei, Zhao Yun, Zhuge Liang) 101 (Yuan Shao) 125 (Sun Quan and Zhou Yu) 145 (Lü Bu)

A father takes his son to visit a brothel, and his son is still drunk and crazy in the brothel. What the hell is he writing? And give the protagonist a celebrity profile? Bah!