Metal Ranger: Los Santos Mercenary

I can't stand the system and the character of the protagonist, it's so disgusting.

Pacific Bank is here! ! Is anyone there?

Bull! The author completely generates electricity with love!

Damn, I'll give you these more than a thousand chapters for free. I've read them.

1. There are too many dialogues, disturbing the priority. Please remember that the most important thing in a novel is the plot, dialogue is just a way to advance the plot, and the proportion of dialogue in this novel has almost exceeded the plot itself. 2. A single conversation must not be too long. Express your views as concisely as possible. Even if you have a sense of humor, you don't have to express it in a long speech, right? 3. The system is just a plot auxiliary and should not take up the protagonist's role. Although the system can quickly move forward through words, you can also arrange some things for the protagonist to discover by himself. Instead of describing too much about the communication between the protagonist and the system, for example, establishing the up-and-down relationship between the protagonist and the system at the beginning is a failure, and it is even more unnecessary to mention this matter many times later. That's it, farewell

Can I complain? Why can't we talk about the original plot when there are so many time-travelers who can randomly change the plot? The author doesn't think that all time travelers are order-oriented, right? What I hate most about novels these days is the system with various restrictions. This book is actually quite good, but that kind of system is disgusting. If there were no restrictions and so-called intelligence of this system, it should be several levels higher than it is now.

Los Santos.... GTA V?

It's almost a thousand chapters, and there are so few comments and votes.

I finally got to Los Santos to write and it really has nothing to do with Los Santos? ? ? ?

I looked through my book list and found this book. I completely forgot about the plot 😰

Why didn't the author sign the contract? You are completely using your love to generate electricity.

Two million words, 17 comments, and this is the first time I have seen this book

Wow, wow, wow, author, come on.

Are you so perseverant? I remember I read a book about GTA Grand Theft Auto before, and it didn't even have 100 chapters yet. This 600 is almost 700, and it can last so long without being put on the shelves. Nb

The unknown source of huge wealth refers to party members and serving cadres. No one is willing to go out of their way to find out why a student suddenly has a lot of money. After all, there are too many sources of money. If a student has money, there will be no problem. He is not a spy or anything.

Must recommend to more people

The writing is okay, but it's a pity that it's not very popular. Wo has a way to make this book visible to more readers, Wo Wei: CCJCCJ129

I just started reading it. Are there any perverted workers who don't speak in the book?