The Profound Origin of the Ancient World, the God of Creation

I have read a few chapters and let me share my feelings. The subject matter is quite good. But the author has typos and sentence segmentation problems, which means there is a lack of punctuation.                                  Insufficient writing power, the problem of insufficient writing power is really serious. Problems such as typos and punctuation marks are relatively few, so I can just tolerate it. However, some plots are awkward when I don't have enough writing power. The feeling now is that after reading a few chapters, I can still read on. The plot is still good. Please encourage the author to improve his writing skills. After all, some great authors sometimes write cliched plots, but they can use their profound writing skills to control them, and readers can't fault them at all.

The protagonist is born so early and is still the upright Daluo Jinxian. Taiyi and Sanqing are Daluo Jinxian just after they are born. It will not be the protagonist's breakthrough and suppression state breakthrough type. It seems that the basic level of the protagonist will be higher than the protagonist no matter how much the other people consume the source and get injured, or they will still be in the quasi-sacred realm after the Six Saints are born.

Earth Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, True Immortal, Golden Immortal, Taiyi, Daluo, Quasi-Sage, Hunyuan. It's better to write it down so that everyone can have a reference.

When Nuwa, the Empress, creates humans to become saints, she is creating saints, right? You have no way to go

Look at what others are writing about now. There is nothing Hongjun. That's called a pattern. The gods are authentic. The Immortal Path is a side door. Taiyi is the emperor of the gods. Change the layout. That kind of prehistoric situation, changing the soup does not change the medicine. What is the big trend that cannot be changed, but the small trend is changeable? Just change the protagonist. Look at the front, I know everything from the back.

Let me show you my boundary division. 1 Physical training (skin training, meat training, muscle training, lung training, spleen training, internal organs training, liver training, bone training, blood exchange) 2 Qi training (qi gathering, gas condensation, liquid dispersion) 3 foundation building (spirit foundation, immortal foundation, holy foundation, divine foundation, Tao foundation) 4 consecration, 5 fusion, 6 heartbeat, 7 fetal breath, 8 bigu, 9 spiritual silence, 10 metamorphosis (spiritual body, immortal body, holy body, divine body, Taoist body) 11 golden elixir (nine turns), 12 Nascent Soul, 13 Yingbian (Nine Transformations of Nascent Soul) 14 Transformation into God, 15 Distraction, 16 Yuanshen (Yin Shen) Yang Shen) 17 Combination, 18 Cave Void, 19 Transforming Void, 20 Practicing Void, 21 Hedao, 22 Overcoming Tribulation, 23 Mahayana, 24 human immortals, 25 earth immortals, 26 heavenly immortals, 27 true immortals, 28 divine immortals, 29 Xuanxian, 30 Jinxian, 31 Zhixian, 32 Holy Immortal, 33 Taiyi Zhenxian, 34 Taiyi Xuanxian, 3 5 Taiyi Golden Immortal, 36 Taiyi Zhixian, 37 Taiyi Saint Immortal, 38 Daluo Tianxian, 39 Daluo Jinxian, 40 Daluo Zhixian, > 41 Daluo Shixian, 42 Luo Tianzhenxian, 43 Luotian Jinxian, 44 Luo Tianshangxian, 45 Hunyuan Taiji Jinxian, 4 6 Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian, 47 Hunyuan Wuji Jinxian, 48 Hunyuan Wuji Taiyi, 49 Hunyuan Wuji Taiyi, 50 Become a Saint, 51 Reveal Saint , 52 Saint, 53 Heavenly Saint, 54 Avenue Supreme, 55 Avenue Emperor, 56 Wuji Hunyuan Super Saint, 57 Wuji Supreme Emperor, 58 Wuji Lord, 59 Hongmeng Fusion Dao Realm (Enter the Dao, Combine the Dao, Fusion Dao) 60 Hongmeng Great Freedom Realm, 61 Hongmeng Taiyuan Ancestor Realm 62 Creation Taixu Tianzun (Shenxu, Taixu, Tianzun, Taixu Tianzun) 63 Dayan God (Godman, God King, God Emperor, God Emperor, God Lord), 64 Lord of the Heavens

It is very unwise to write about the prehistoric period and create magic weapons on your own. Everyone has been influenced by the list of gods for so many years, but you want to impact the readers' three views? Seventeenth grade Qinglian😓You are really 666

After reading two chapters, it feels similar to the running accounts written by my brother. Eat in the morning Go to school Go home for lunch Go to school in the afternoon Eat in the evening Then go to bed What a happy day

The author's writing style is a bit poor, and his use of punctuation marks is also unique. It feels like it's really readable... Hmm

The name is a failure Innate holiness corresponds to the power and status of heaven and earth As soon as you are born and transform, heaven and earth give you a true name, okay? Always use Chen Yuan and Chen Yuan Are you afraid that others don't know that you are not innate holiness and you came here smuggled in? ?

There is a strange circle in ancient novels, everything is cause and effect, everything is destiny, I want to defy heaven. What is so interesting about this setting, and what is there to cultivate in this way? Isn't it funny that the Great Dao is supreme, the way of Heaven is merciless, and everything is determined by God? Since the way of heaven is ruthless, it should be that all things coexist, the fittest survive, pioneering and innovative, and highlight the word struggle. If everything is determined by destiny, and then watching the protagonist take various opportunities, if the way of heaven is really conscious, it will slap you to death. How can it be determined by destiny without consciousness? The big guys from the beginning are all mentally retarded, and the people on Earth are all geniuses. Does this plot really seem like a good story? This is stupid. Regarding realm, Da Luo claimed to have escaped the river of time, and then was shot to death. Is this Da Luo? It is better to divide Qi training from one level to one hundred levels. One hundred levels are not enough and continue to set higher. Daluo is equivalent to seventy levels. Is there anything exciting about this kind of breakthrough? Even if he breaks through to the great road, he is still a vulgar earthling, extremely boring.

I don't think Honghuang is suitable for a female protagonist!

In the ancient times, the way of creation would not work. Unless Nuwa is killed. The protagonist cultivates the way of transformation, which is the way of death.

The way of creation cultivated by Nuwa, the Chaos Green Lotus did not exist in the 17th level in the ancient times, and it was a thing of the Three Purities. At the beginning, there was a 36th-level Chaos Green Lotus in the chaos. Its leaves, petals, rhizomes, and everything turned into other things. The four lotus seeds each became a 12th level, and the green lotus was divided into three parts.

After reading the three chapters in front of me, the feeling of fighting is lower than that of martial arts. This is a low-level version of the ancient world. It is estimated that in the future it will be the lowest version of the saint fighting within a ten-mile radius 🤫. Now, starting from the ancient times, there are people who see such low-level movies.

In this ancient world, I can kill immortals with atomic bombs 😌

I was born so early just to be a grandson. . . . It's so innately divine. Which innate divine being can give birth to a golden immortal? ? ? I don't understand the meaning of birth at all. In order to make you stand out as the author? ? ? ? Isn't this nigga brainless? ? ? There is no adult thinking at all, it is just self-promotion and self-promotion. . . .

Everything I read is irritating and it won't change anything. What's the use of it? I don't recommend reading this novel. There's nothing interesting about it. The further you go, the worse it gets.

Hey 110, it's a scam.

I read a review from a book friend before and said it was very interesting! Excluding Hongjun in Honghuangliu novels, the Sanqing should be the most calculating. If you follow the tribulation of Fengshen Journey to the West, you will find that Taoism worships the Sanqing, and Buddhism worships the Tathagata as well as Randen and Maitreya. They no longer worship the Second Sage of the West, and the Western Sect and the Second Sage have retired. And who is Tathagata? Duobao, the great disciple of Jiejiao. Who is Ran Deng? The deputy leader of Chanjiao said that among the three Buddhas in the past and future, only Maitreya is taught by the West, and the four great Bodhisattvas only have Ksitigarbha. Add to this the fact that Laozi transformed into a Buddha, and you will find that Buddhism has been completely emptied out, and Nuwa is logically the Holy Mother of the human race. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to see Nuwa in any temple. I always feel that the Conferring of Gods is a play created by the Sanqing Dynasty after discovering the rise of Destiny in the West. It emptied out Buddhism and also emptied out the heaven. . If you think about it carefully, most of the official positions in the Heavenly Court fell on Jie Jiao, and most of the fruition status of Buddhism fell on Chan Jiao. In addition, with the luck of Laozi's Human Race and Human Sect, most of the luck and incense of the Three Realms were gathered in the hands of the Sanqing. After the journey to the west, the Sanqing was no longer a member of the Xuanmen and established his own Taoist sect! I am the one who turned Buddhism into a fool! Terrible 😱

Before the ferocious beast calamity, the Golden Immortal transformed. As a result, the ferocious beast calamity ended, the Longhan calamity ended, the Dao Demon War ended, Hongjun became a saint, and the protagonist was Daluo Jinxian. He had to go to Zixiao Palace with the innate saints who had just been born to listen to the sermon. Where did he practice so many calamities? I know that you, the author, will not write about the previous calamities. If you want to mainly write about lichs and gods, then can you just let the protagonist transform before Hongjun becomes a saint?

When I see this name, I can imagine that the protagonist will have a fight with Nuwa until the death.

Damn it, a god turned into a human being.

Fairy love? The sky collapsed.

Speechless, the empress does not build the great road of creation, the author messes around and abandons it

This is the better book I have ever read.

Fighting skills only have spiritual treasures, but no magical powers. It's like playing house

Are you kidding me that the innate divine transformation talent Golden Immortal is kidding me?

I watched it when I was in junior high school, but it ended up being discontinued.

The author must keep writing, I like this style