The Story of the Trickster

1. The overall story. Tan Dapao, a first-year high school student, is a kid from other families who tends to be rich and handsome in the real world. One day, he found an old man who claimed to be a dick in the toilet at home, taking a shit (...), And then he took a grenade and destroyed the dick (???). As a result, when he woke up, he traveled through time and entered the setting of a novel that he had conceived but not written. The setting of the entire new world is very complete and huge. There are immortals, horizons, and heroes. In short, it is very complicated. After time traveling, Tan Dapao became the only illegitimate son who survived when the Huang clan, one of the three clans of the Xia Empire, was exterminated. He also became the object of competition among all clans, including the Xiahou clan. In order to deal with the manipulation of Xiahou's parents who wanted to marry their beautiful daughter Xiahou Xing to him, he said in front of everyone at the family banquet that he was a crook and wanted to sleep with Xiahou Xing's younger brother Xiahou Lu (???)... Hahaha, the old aunt almost laughed so hard that she couldn't continue writing, it was so ridiculous. Everyone loves sand plots, right? However, the author may have some problems with the presentation of the story, which will be discussed in detail in the second point. 2. The above plot was figured out by the old aunt after reading Chapter 7. The order of the author's narrative is as follows: the first chapter describes Tan Dapao's time travel, the second chapter describes the background setting, and the third chapter begins with his experience after the time travel (being stabbed and going to Xiahou's house for help). Let's go through this sequence. I personally feel that the first two chapters are a bit discouraging. In the first chapter, there are too many plots of "I woke up and traveled through time". You need to be surprising, or have a masterful writing style and background setting like "The Lord of Mysteries", or come up with something fresher to attract readers. Chapter 2, how should I put it, I don't understand it very well... I'm sure your settings are very complete, but if you release them all at once, the old aunt is too old and her IQ cannot keep up with the big guys... It's too difficult for me... Would it be easier for people to accept such a huge setting in the plot, in the form of a reveal, little by little? Starting from the third chapter, the whole story became smoother and smoother, and it started to have points that made people want to follow it. Then, starting from the third chapter, I realized that this turned out to be a very silly story. Hahahaha, don't stop and continue to be silly. 3. The author's writing style is sandy but also pays great attention to details. Therefore, although the plot of the first chapter "I traveled through time" is a bit crude, it does not make the old aunt give up. Compared with ordinary time travel articles, the author writes well about the feeling of lying in a pile of Si people and his thoughts after discovering that he has traveled through time. Just writing and writing, suddenly jumping out to complain a few words as the author, this is really a bit embarrassing. People are reading it just for fun, just like they are having fun in an amusement park. You suddenly pop up and ask people to stand at attention, and then say: "Be safe!" 4. Finally, I want to complain about the character name... Tan Dapao, what? It all looks like the name of a poor peasant from the last century. I don't think any tall, rich or handsome person would choose such a name... And Xiahou eats dirt, Xiahou eats ashes... Even if you, the author, are a person with more useless names than an old aunt, please be more serious... It's really too dramatic...

Take a look. The style of the article fluctuates greatly. One moment, there will be a paragraph about the author complaining, and the next moment, he will write something about the author, which is of no use. Novel also has to tell a story, plot, don't be too self-indulgent.

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Already invested, well written, interesting

Come on! It just feels different, right?

Come and see! Big cheers for the author!

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Ha, it turns out to be this book. I said the title was so familiar.

How can I invest in new books? Any requirements? Why can't I find a place to invest in this book?

The first and second chapters have been greatly changed, but it will not affect the plot. Readers who don't want to go back and watch it again can continue reading.

When did the introduction change, alas, I didn't even notice. Well, to be honest, the introduction in the past made me want to complain for no reason, but now this is pretty good. Besides, the author, you have already signed a contract.

I've really been struggling with my writing lately. I've revised the detailed outline I wrote many times. I really have to wait a day or two, but I will definitely update it when my inspiration comes back!

Changed the book cover? Why is this book cover? It doesn't seem to suit the style of your book. Why is your investment portal missing?

At first glance, I thought the cover was of Du Fu ( ' - ' * ), but when I took a second look, I realized it wasn't. First, if I change the cover to Du Fu's face, would the cover be more interesting?

Since I can't post a long review, I'm going to post it section by section to see which section has the problem and can be modified. Don't mind if there are too many posts later, I will modify them and delete them.

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