Floating World Monarch

Aha! The author now regrets that he didn't pay attention to the three golden chapters before writing it, and the beginning was a bit lengthy. So I hope that readers who have just read this book can patiently read about ten chapters and see if it matches your idea of ​​passionate fantasy. Thank you!

Happy Lantern Festival! I'll take up a floor.

It's already on the bookshelf, it's not bad, I wish it will prosper soon! (◦˙▽˙◦)

Come on＾0＾~Encourage each other and make progress together

The author's writing style is exquisite. In just a few chapters, the background and characters of the story come to life vividly on the page. It is worth reading.

✊👍

It has been invested and put on the bookshelf. I wish you an early signing 😊😊

Return visit from "Yuanhuang Avenue", come on

Come and support the author. Come on, author. Come on.

I'm here, come on, encourage each other to make progress together

Ah, I suggest you only fill one pit at a time. Two pits will be stressful.

I came here in circles and found the problem after just a quick glance. First of all, it is best for novels these days not to have any wedges. It is best to directly focus on the theme at the beginning. Foreshadowing will be annoying. Second, your punctuation is not standardized. Look at my example below Someone said: "" ""Someone said. ""Someone said,"" These are the three uses of quotation marks. Please work hard and don't give up. As a newcomer, you must first write hundreds of thousands of words of awareness while making improvements.