The Swordsman in Conan

Hmm... I caught up on the updated chapter and read it within 24 hours. Because I watched the anime intermittently, I didn't know much about the characters in it. In the framework of the ordinary people's world at the beginning, it was quite interesting. Later, maybe because I was afraid that it would be easy to be aesthetically tired if I was always investigating cases, I also inserted the world settings and characters of several other anime. Fortunately, I have basically seen these anime, and they are not too unfamiliar. The author has also controlled the personality of each character. However, the common problem with writing this kind of articles is that they create a harem. Now when I see similar articles, I always feel like "Ah, this kind of article is likely to open a harem", and I'm used to it. I can only say that apart from the fact that the protagonist is a frank and scumbag man, which makes me unable to complain, the rest is quite satisfying. I think what attracts me more in the book is: the detective story, the double holy swordsman, the fusion of the animation world, the intricate relationships between the characters, and the psychological transition of the protagonist is relatively natural. These characteristics. What I don't like the most is: the male protagonist has a harem, he is the kind of scumbag who doesn't consciously flirt with others, but he will frankly admit that he is a scumbag. The book transitions from the male protagonist following Conan through various cases and fighting against the organization through mental battles, to the subsequent plot of purely pursuing becoming stronger and upgrading, and discovering new enemies hidden in the darkness. To be honest, I skipped through the rest of the book. When I saw what I wanted to see, I clicked on it from the table of contents. Therefore, my evaluation of this book is "there are bright spots in the early stage, but the inexplicable surrender of Qingmei makes people feel uncomfortable; in the early and middle stages, I enter a mature plot mode, and my desire to read is completely aroused, and I look forward to the subsequent plots; in the middle stage, the world setting is integrated, leading to the subsequent combat stage, and I slowly try to follow the author's rhythm to accept the upgrade of the world setting; in the middle and late stages, more characters appear that cannot leave an impression in my mind, and I begin to feel that the characters are flat, there are too many group portraits, and I begin to feel tired of reading (the author also appears to be stuck); in the later stages, it is basically complete Completely isolated from the world of Conan, detective work and competition with organizations have become the same existence, and more pursuits are made to decipher life experiences and compete with enemies of higher power. Here, the world settings are completely integrated, but they become different. There is one and the other, but they are distinct. The new chapter introduces a new anime world setting. Because I don't understand the setting but have some vague impressions, it affects the immersive reading experience. I am confused whether this new world setting will continue to be mixed with other settings but not integrated, or it will be completely separated and integrated."

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If you want women's clothing, just cut it off. You are ruthless and bitchy. Whatever you want, just be bitchy.

People say there are three golden chapters, but you persuaded me to quit as soon as I started. Especially when I saw the end of chapter six, I really couldn't stand it. It was too poisonous. You decided on the heroine at the beginning. Then why did you kiss Xiao Ai in the subsequent plot? It's disgusting what you wrote. Delete and rewrite it. Otherwise, every time someone is attracted by your introduction, he will scold you when he goes out.

Because of this reason, the author would like to think of a reliable reason. For example, will she become Sailor Moon due to magical power? There is precedent for this.

Let's take off the women's clothing and practice sword practice.

But I found out that in 9 out of 10 Conan books, the heroine is Shirley. It made me sick to my stomach. That is to say, I'm not crazy. I didn't watch it. I just walked away when I saw the heroine. Not directed at the author or this book. It's just for this heroine.

I have to say that in all the Conan stories, the heroine is Xiao Ai. It makes me vomit when I read it. It's true.

The reason for women's clothing is ridiculous! Very disgusting! Didn't it mean that the protagonist likes Mang? Because he is strong, he is arrogant and does whatever he wants, but he was dressed as a heroine as soon as he appeared on the scene? And I don't see that the protagonist likes the heroine at all...

Why doesn't the protagonist wear women's clothing? There is an author who said that you are very dissatisfied. If you don't want to engage in women's clothing, you shouldn't engage in women's clothing in the first place. You have been engaged in women's clothing for such a long time and then suddenly stop dressing up. It is really uncomfortable and very discouraging. People who don't like women's clothing basically ran away from the beginning. Then there is no women's clothing anymore, which makes me, who like to watch male protagonists, women's clothing, very uncomfortable.

There are always stupid people who are so confident. I guess very few people see it.

On the first day of school, she dressed up as a girl and became an unfamiliar girl next door. On the one hand, there was no emotional transition, and on the other hand, it was far-fetched and added to the plot. To be honest, the topic selection of the novel is very creative, but the writing is terrible. The plot is rubbish, The Return of the Sword, and the characters are not established. Not to mention that I have not interacted with this woman for many years and have no emotional foundation. I am tied to death just for my sense of morality. The brainless plot is not so stupid. When I see this, I could barely ignore a few poisonous points before, but here it is directly poisonous. It is too uncomfortable to watch.

Ai Dian

Why is the author who has written so many words still level 1? The main reason is that he is poisonous. No one reads the poison. No one understands that this author still insists on writing. Why? Because the author is Breaking Bad. This is not generating electricity for love, this is just poisoning living beings

Regarding the description of the US military in Chapter 27, I went to check it out. The headquarters of the US military is at Yokota Base. But in terms of military discipline, Japanese and American troops cannot leave the base without reason. Not to mention wandering around in places like Ginza. So the author, do you have any channels to know the inside information that "the local US military does not actually observe discipline and can fool around at will"? If there is no similar inside information and it is just nonsense, can you change it?

Women's clothing is okay, but the character and world view settings have collapsed. The appearance of ninjas is completely unscientific, and the combat power has directly collapsed. Moreover, the main plot is original, and it no longer has the flavor of Conan.

Huiyuan decline

Female videos, the more I watch them, the more they look like 😅

If it's free, don't complain so much. . It's not good to scold people if we prostitute for nothing.

Suggestion: When the protagonist disguises himself as someone else, if the other person doesn't know who the protagonist is, don't use the protagonist's name when describing the other person's psychological activities. Instead, he uses terms such as "this woman", "the loli in front of me", and "sin".

I really don't understand why women dress up. It's a good novel. It made me sick when I read it. The reason why women dress up is also childish.

I originally thought that a certain book I saw had 200,000+ words and 1.40,000 Book friends. I didn't expect that this book had 2,040,000 words and 46 people on the book friend list. The author really used love to generate electricity, so that he could write 2,040,000 words...

It's okay. It's good to keep reading. It's not as vicious as the comments. And it's free. It's really good.

This book is so toxic. I don't know how the author wrote more than 1,000 chapters, and I don't know how anyone can read more than 1,000 chapters. You can delete this book review of mine. I won't read it again.

I would like to ask if the protagonist has competed in the National Kendo Competition? This is very important. How can you be called a grandmaster if you have never even competed in a national kendo competition? Ceiling Kyogoku is a karate god who started competing in national competitions.

It seems that Conan fans have become a super hodgepodge 😰

Emma has 58 fans, I thought it was 580,000🙊🙉🙈

Find a novel in which the main character travels to the world of Conan and seems to be the son of Fei Yingli's friend. He is systematic, writes novels and comics, and can do kendo. The heroine is a girl from other comics. In the middle and late stages, the male protagonist seems to have a title like "Women's Friend" because of the novel.

The ingredients are too complicated. Although it is said to be Conan, the first one contains anime with many settings. Other anime contents include Miss Shinomiya Kaguya, and there are more than a dozen anime about paradise and super powers. But this is a book about Conan. It's a bit like a manga, and it's true that he can dress up as a woman as shown in the introduction. In Chapter 6, the female protagonist should ask the male protagonist to come to Kudo Shinichi's school and ask for cross-dressing because he doesn't want him to hook up with girls, and then the protagonist agrees. Well, take a look, what happens behind it? I stopped reading.

Just skip the chapters that you think are poisonous and don't read them. It's not like what will happen if you don't read them.