The Carefree King of the Martial World

I hope the author will pay more attention. There are many typos. I hope the author will read it after typing.

It's very good. I think the author has already written his third book. Of course, the writing style doesn't show anything at all. I'm most afraid of seeing these kind of combat powers, instant kills and so on.

It makes my head hurt and my heart feels tired. There are so many typos. Did the author type with his feet? And there was no inspection after the treatment!

Brother, can you stop using the word 10 points all the time?

Why do you write like a primary school student? There are so many reasons.

Author, read it yourself. There are a lot of typos and a lot of nonsense. In some places, I can still read it through. In other places, I have no idea what you wrote. Author, you have finished writing it yourself. Read it yourself. Correct the typos and simplify it. You don't pay attention to your own work, and readers are not fools. Can you collect it? Recommendation vote? Monthly ticket? Reward?

It's like a primary school student writing a composition, without even the necessary punctuation marks. It's at the level of a first-grade child at most, right?

There are too many typos, the speech is a bit unfluent, and the dialogue is too naive. Come on, the author, it must be the first time to write a book.

You must have too many high-end combat powers. The War Emperor and War Lord cost tens of thousands.

Did the author write with his feet? All are typos