Building the Heavenly Court from a Ruined Temple

There are only two chapters, and they are still recommended in the group 😅

It's a fantasy, Shinto novel that's good. It would be better if the dialogue between the characters and the description of the scenery are slightly refined and some impetuosity is removed. Now it is just a fast-food novel. You have to write it slowly, and it will fall apart once you get started. The realm of cultivation needs to be described in depth. If it is a little sloppy, it is an upgrade article after all. If the world view is not deep, you will fall apart.

Summon gods, items, and skill collection stickers. Format of gods: For example, title plus name: skills For example, Stone Monkey - Sun Wukong: copper skin and iron bones, invulnerability, etc.

In an ancient world with immortal cultivators, there are so many ghosts. The pig's trotter has a fairy golden finger. After blocking it for a few times, I lost sight of it. The ghosts in this world should be removed. The pig's trotter should compete with the immortal cultivators in a battle of wits and courage. This world should treat ghosts as giant pandas. Otherwise, the immortal cultivators find that their spiritual roots are not good, and they will take the good spiritual roots from their bodies, or they will be killed and commit suicide. Anyway, they will live forever, and they still have a butt.

🙂Write well and leave all the votes to you🥱

Looks good, updates quickly. How dare you ask for votes if you don't update 30,000 words a day? The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this.

Dude, I lost sight of it all at once 😭, I have to wait 😫

The subject matter is quite novel, 😁 but there are too few