Living Age

It is a relatively conscientious book. It can be seen that the author has done a lot of professional homework and the story has been carefully arranged. I would like to make a suggestion, change the swear words in the previous article, write a few sentences about the character setting appropriately, highlight the bonus points such as perseverance and perseverance, and add some settings such as small hobbies to make the characters fuller.

It is recommended to use less verbal swearing. If you watch too much, it will affect the perception and make the protagonist feel like a gangster.

The plot is very realistic, and I was infected with the sense of crisis.

I established a book club group mainly because I want to get in touch with more friends from all walks of life, broaden my thinking, and ask some questions. So that what you write will not make people laugh. 478462986 I hope readers and grandparents can come to the group to give suggestions and communicate more.

I have already invested, and I hope the author will write well. At the same time, I will give some suggestions to boost the popularity. In this chapter, the author can talk more about interacting with book friends in the book circle, and also ask how the signing process is?

The writing is very good, but I feel that the punctuation marks are too careless and the details need to be paid attention to. I like the plot very much, but there are too many exclamation points, and I feel that my nerves are always a little tense...

This system really creates tension, and the male must have a strong heart!

Super cool story, I was opened up to a new world

It's really a takeaway, I just get some as a bonus when I get the takeout.

Mom is very capable in fighting, I admire you!

The concept is very bizarre, and it looks very professional. Could it be the trumpet of a great master or an idle fish majoring in biological sciences? However, the recommendation votes are not getting up. The author seems to be a little unable to hold on. The last few chapters have been written in a hurry, and he is rushing towards Xiaobai. The author must hold on.

Is this a woman? This is too open

Is Du Yangming so upright if he doesn't even accept it?

Du Yangming's quick move to dump the blame pleased me.

The protagonist is too neurotic and is startled

The imagination is relatively big, it is a new type, stick to it.

The plot has ups and downs, the details are attractive, and it's a great novel

Let me go, this mating pheromone has given me a lot of experience, can this still be the case?

Spore must have done it on purpose. He feels happy just watching the male protagonist scold his mother.

I feel like I need to study biochemistry or something like that after reading this book.

Don't reject the love that goes up the pole

I was stunned by the explanation of expanding neurons. It was too professional and I didn't understand.