I Wrote a Bizarre World

Someone please give me a shout, otherwise I really won't have the motivation to continue writing. It's too difficult to stand alone, but with a reader, I can persevere 😢

Very well written! Persist in! Look in.

Sorry, I really can't hold on anymore. The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. The more I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel. Goodbye.

Come on, author, although I can't quite understand it

Gambard! The big brother who is more aggressive than me o(≧v≦)o

Ou is here again 😁😁😁😁😁 The author, please come on!

Today's recommendation vote has been given to 😃😃😃. I suggest the author go to various circles to recommend his works. Maybe some book friends will read it. . . 😁😁👍👍👍👍😃

Although there are a lot of things to do, how do you say it? The sense of substitution is not strong. The plot is not clearly expressed. I watched 10 pictures and I had no idea what the protagonist was doing or what was happening. What is the setting of this world like? Now this, now that. What exactly do you want to express? Has the world changed? Or is the protagonist a protagonist in a novel? You didn't say it, you didn't write it, you didn't express it.

It is recommended that the author write each chapter longer, otherwise it will not attract people. . . It is also necessary to grasp the scale of segmentation. . And I didn't understand it a bit, and I felt it had nothing to do with the title of the book. . 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

What the hell is expressed is very vague. Write this or that. The main plot is still unclear. No explanation of what happened. The setting has not been set yet, and the storyline is not clearly expressed.

It feels like the protagonist is out of tune with this book, like an offline player. When something happens, I go online and look confused and don't understand anything. When it's over, I go offline and live my own little life. After watching more than half of the main character, I went online, offline, online, offline.

The writing is good~ But I find it a bit baffling emmmmm...