Madam, Please Have Mercy.

Come on, if you persist, you will definitely gain something!

There is a hint of pretentiousness between the lines that is not suitable for me to leave.

Collected😌

The writing style has been formed, and the next step is to refine the story. It feels pretty good, it would be better if there were less bad jokes. There are still too few, so I will collect the books first.

Very good come on

The writing is really good. If you can do anything, you will become a god 😏

Not bad, not bad 😜

I also want the young lady that Xiao Guizi's heartreasons wants. She is poisonous, disgusting and perverted.

Come on, come on, I think the writing is better than the average, and the plot is also good.

Yes, it's interesting to watch. I hope it will be updated soon.

Regarding the first chapter, I have to say that the length of the psychological monologue, except for a few lines of dialogue, and then the protagonist takes a few steps, and then it is all psychological monologue, and then entering the bridal chamber, To be honest, your writing is interesting enough and can be controlled. As far as I am currently choosing After looking at it a little bit, I just felt that it was not appropriate. It can still be improved and streamlined, and the jokes could be better. Then we entered the bridal chamber. The action of lifting the headscarf here still has a lot of psychological scenes. In the fifth chapter, the writing is really understandable. I laughed, and the writing was pretty good After reading Chapter 6, the writing style seems to have been fixed, with a lot of emotional drama, which is now acceptable, Then the daily writing is pretty good, Then it comes to the end, The whole book has a relaxed and funny style, overall The quality is still good, but it's just like when I first read it. Readers who are not used to such a large amount of inner monologue may be persuaded to leave. Those who are not persuaded will probably get used to it, and then read on. What can be strengthened? It is still a joke, and it can be more hilarious

Already invested, please keep updating

The writing is very good, I can't help but laugh at it, it's really interesting, as long as it's not a stallion harem story, it's good dog food, come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง