The Rise of Sunagakure

1 • Question: Given the weakness of Sand Ninja, education reform is bound to happen. However, education reform will inevitably encounter a lot of opposition and support 1. Advantages: (1) The weakness of the Sand Ninja represents the weakness of the Ninja family. Facing the powerful Kazekage, the resistance to change will be relatively small (Qin State Shang Yang's reform was only fully implemented when the Qin State was so weak that it was on the verge of collapse. Other countries were abandoned by the nobles halfway. Stop) (2) The defeat of the sand ninja on the battlefield (they almost lost a third of Konoha and suffered heavy losses) and the difficulty of survival in the desert forced the family ninjas to also crave change and benefits, so a certain degree of change in a good direction is what they are happy to see (meaning they are willing to make certain concessions) 2. Disadvantages : (1) Education will inevitably consume a lot of resources, squeezing the village's originally few resources (2) The emergence of poor ninjas will inevitably damage the existing ninjutsu and the monopoly privileges and interests of the ninja family, and they will definitely oppose it (after King Hui of Qin succeeded to the throne, he continued to implement Shang Yang's reforms, while looking for trouble and killing Shang Yang to calm the grievances of the nobles. Shit. It can be seen that the stock determines the head. Even if you know that reform is needed, you will not harm your own privileges and interests.) Two • Suggestions (this is only done because the Sha Ninja Village is small): (1) Establish a ninja technical vocational school and select poor children to enroll. If poor children do not enter the school, the whole family will be punished. (There are parents who do not want their children to go to school in many backward areas) (2) School-age children of ninja families must also enroll in school to cultivate team spirit and village honor. (Families can take day study and take one or two months off) (3) Provide free meals, accommodation, clothing and other materials to school students (to lure poor families) (4) Conduct a two-year semi-military management, obedience training and physical strengthening, and conduct a large number of village-loving education. [Key Points] (5) Teach basic literacy, three-body skills, two basic general ninjutsu (compulsory) based on personal five-element talents, poison skills, medical skills, puppet skills, etc. (Elective). Three • Diversion education (conducted after the basic talent tendencies are seen within two years, extra points can be added when the family ninja is divided with the family after meritorious deeds) (1) Children without talent will receive a one-year low-level class of physical education, blacksmithing, farming, and other skills education. (2) Children with weak talents will undergo a one-year intermediate class to educate production ninjas in low-level engineering ninjutsu such as digging ditches, collecting water, breaking rocks, tunneling, and building roads (learn at least a few engineering ninjutsus, and graduate packages will be distributed, and geniuses will have the opportunity to be promoted to advanced classes) (3) Children with high talents will enter the advanced class where children of family ninjas with medium and high talents will be educated in killing arts. (4) Cultural and production-oriented ninja education for family ninjas with weak talents. (5) Family ninjas can get extra points by participating in foreman and teacher induction assessments to bribe family ninjas. (If the opposition is really strong, just propose this as a concession. However, there are no points in the post-job assessment, so you may be dismissed due to poor performance) Four • Advantages of this graded education: (1) Saving resources: Most children actually only receive basic education, and are responsible for three years of food and clothing (accommodation is not valuable) (2) Development of productivity: The work efficiency of productive ninjas is much higher than that of the poor, especially the poor. The main reason is that the large-scale canal water diversion and afforestation projects after the protagonist will inevitably require the power of ninjas. However, the number of existing national defense and mission-oriented ninjas in the sand ninja is insufficient, and the dignity of ninjas cannot be spared (Konoha genin find cats to farm, but those who do not specialize in this will be laughed at) (3) Easing the resistance of family ninjas: The vast majority of poor production-oriented ninjas cannot threaten the privileges and status of family fighting ninjas, they only create wealth and are exploited. This kind of reform actually favors family ninjas in all aspects. (The second-generation Hokage implemented poor ninja education just to find cannon fodder. Look what did Sakura learn in school? Only the Three Body Technique. In this way, a large number of geniuses still emerged among the civilians of Konoha, such as Minato, Kai, etc., So don't worry that the civilians cannot develop) (4) It can carry out class circulation and increase the work enthusiasm of the poor: Qin's twenty military merits are the cornerstone of class circulation and sweeping the six countries. Production-type ninjas are also ninjas, and their income and benefits are bound to be much higher than those of ordinary poor people. Even those without talent can still learn some survival skills by hanging around for two years. What's more, physical training is conducive to work, and craftsmanship is conducive to survival and family inheritance. In ancient China, being an apprentice meant working as an ox or a horse. (5) Productive ninjas are also ninjas. They have learned the Three Body Technique and can be used as cannon fodder when necessary. Even civilians can be trained to transport supplies. If it is really useless, it can be used as welfare to buy people off and increase their loyalty and happiness. Even if they immigrate in the future, they will still be spies in reserve (6) Focus on a two-year village-loving patriotic education to cultivate direct lineage, reduce spies, cultivate loyalty, and increase bonds. (Yes, I'm talking about scorpions!)

Don't be impetuous, don't be too aggressive. New people, new works, be more understanding and more tolerant.

I made a mistake. The Third Raikage died in the Third War instead of the Second World War. This has been corrected. Thanks to this friend for the reminder, and everyone's opinions are welcome here. If you have any mistakes or suggestions, you can tell me.

Only the Kingdom of Iron can create ninja tools? Are you kidding me? Has the country of craftsmen been conquered by you? The Kingdom of Kong was tricked by you? The Kingdom of Sky can now build flying ninja tools, but also small shurikens, kunai and other rubbish? Uncle Snake has already built a mechanical Naruto, the Kingdom of Stars has computers, and the Kingdom of Snow has trains. You don't understand Naruto's weirdness, do you?

I watched the beginning and it was pretty good. I gave you 27 votes.

Can you kill the Toad Immortal? I hate people who make prophecies and are self-righteous. What can a prophecy mean?

The author took a good look at Naruto first and slipped away

When Chinese people write Japanese anime fan fiction, most of the things written by the authors are a bit out of tune with the real Japanese style, which makes it very embarrassing to read (of course, I have also seen two or three Japanese writers who write very well). Kishimoto's Naruto background may be based on the Kamakura shogunate era, when the shoguns and daimyo armed forces divided one side, and the emperor could only survive in name, pretending to be stupid. The above is the background. The most problematic thing is the dialogue between the various characters in the article. It looks too Chinese and awkward. Although Japanese culture is partly borrowed from China, it is self-contained. I have been traveling in Japan for a while. When I was in college, I had a classmate who was a Japanese student. I communicated with Chinese people on a daily basis, but there were some differences between them. But these small differences made people feel a big difference. You can go to Bunko to read Nikkei, or you can read Japanese literature to get a feel for it. There are quite a lot of great Japanese literature 😅.

The recent ones that are purely political have been a bit watered down, and there are too few ninja content. You can learn from the story content of the anime Naruto to make it up, there is no need to worry about how to write it yourself. For example: As a hidden disciple, can Xie be brainwashed without having the will of sand? Hold a joint ninja exam with other ninja villages. Can you make up your own genin names? As an author who has watched Naruto, can you still not know the regular ninjutsu of other ninja villages? It's down to earth, it's a ninja novel after all, right?

The writing is average, the plot is average, and the subject matter is average. A qualified novice, try not to think too hard when reading.