Distress Martial Arts System

​​ ​First of all, we must affirm this work. The writing is above the line. But for me, who has never seen the Golden Puppet Show, the martial arts system and some unclear backgrounds made the whole novel seem a bit disturbing. There are also some problems with the novel's temperament. The world background of the novel is too simple, and the martial arts system borrowed from it is too complex, making it a bit top-heavy. The nature and name of the martial arts serve the plot of the story and the core of the author's thoughts.

It feels like the system's appearance rate is too low

I find that many authors nowadays assign the identity of an illegitimate child to the protagonist! But if you do a little homework and look up the information, you will find that the illegitimate child is not a bastard (a bastard refers to a child who is not born to a legitimate wife, and is generally not included in the genealogy. It is only a son born in the family, that is, a high-level servant. If the mistress has no biological children, or the head of the family has granted permission to adopt the child to the name of the mistress and enter the family tree, then he is qualified to be called a young master), but a passerby! Illegitimate children are generally not recognized by their biological father! Some responsible people will raise their illegitimate children outside and turn them into other courtyards or outer courtyards! Some of the illegitimate children who were recognized for various reasons were brought into the house only to meet the concubines and serve as high-level domestic slaves (high-level domestic slaves in wealthy families have private property! They are decent people compared to ordinary people! Just like today's professional managers) In ancient times, some relatively successful illegitimate children became officials in the imperial examination! Generally, after passing the exam, you will contact your family to worship your ancestors! By registering their names in the family tree, they get rid of the status of illegitimate children (adopted into the name of the mistress, illegitimate children in ancient times would affect the promotion and appointment of officials), and there is only one way for these ancient illegitimate children to correct their biological mothers' names! Just ask for an imperial edict! Generally, only officials of third rank or above (probably provincial or ministerial level in modern times) can have this honor! And if you don't write a special letter, this decree will be given to the family mistress, so there will be nothing to rectify! The petition will affect his reputation and appointment. For example, the illegitimate child may be appointed as the governor of Guangdong and Guangdong before the petition, but may become the chief envoy of Guangdong after the petition! So, the real treatment of illegitimate children in ancient times cannot be as good as the protagonists of these online novels, and it is impossible for anyone to have the leisure to harm these people who are not even good sons! They have never had any inheritance rights! Don't use foreign illegitimate children to argue with me. The treatment of illegitimate children in the Middle Ages was far worse than that of illegitimate children in the Middle Ages! After all, there is another saying in the Middle Ages. There is nothing in the Middle Ages, and the second son, who could still be a young master in the Middle Ages, might have been destined to be a groom in the Middle Ages!

Most of Crab Pili went to Yandu to find the Grand Master 😒

It's a great book. I hope the author will stick with it. In terms of writing style, it's top-notch. Pili martial arts is very high-level, novel and unique, and eye-catching.

Let me tell you my feelings after watching half of it. Personally, I feel generally good. (The author works hard, I will look forward to you) The novel draws on Yang Shen, using early starting routines, and systematically seeking innovation. The biggest selling point is the thunderbolt martial arts. In terms of characterization, the IQ of the supporting characters is basically online (see the gameover of Uncle Zheng who took care of his predecessor). Some people complain that the father of the protagonist is not worthy of being a father, but the first thing to consider is that his background is a soldier. The feudal high-level military attache, military and legal family cannot escape (everything is strict, secretly learning and banning martial arts not only destroys the public, but also destroys the martial arts. This can also be seen from the death of Uncle Zheng). In addition, The relationship between the protagonist's mother and the reason why he wanted to kill his mother and brother when his predecessor was deposed makes sense for him to be ruthless (don't look at the feudal era with modern eyes) For the protagonist, I personally want to be independent and go away to a foreign country, and the final confrontation between father and son (in Yangshen, the father of the protagonist does not like to see the protagonist but never directly suppresses it, and the protagonist initially takes advantage of the situation, which makes the ending seem too hypocrite). In addition, I feel that my emotions are not handled well. For example, when I first time traveled, I immediately bowed to Mrs. Wang without being affected by my predecessor (isn't it normal to suppress the incompetent rage of my predecessor and keep silent?). Later, I was crazily affected when I learned about Uncle Zheng's death. Other aspects of dealing with people and things were handled well. The other thing is that the traps are not handled well. For example, when the protagonist comes across and learns that it is forbidden to practice family martial arts, he immediately thinks of his father and his son (it is deliberately not mentioned here that it can be used as a trap); and the part where the Fifth Young Master assassinates the protagonist is too obvious. The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. Finally, I wish the author great success and great success!

If you want to follow Confucianism for the time being, you can have the classic trick of being a gentleman. Others are like a seamless piece of clothing, with no fixed three characteristics. As for protective gear, there is the Incomprehensible Protector and Purple Dragon Battle Scale during the Lost City period. Invincible fighting dragon. If golden light can be added, Black and White Langjun's one-gas power of nine hundred would be very good. Miaojiang's magical power to conquer the country: Wolf King's Seal - almost invincible in close combat, Samsara Tribulation - a weapon for group combat, the more people there are, the stronger it is, and Star Transformation - a powerful single target burst. There is also the Demonic Armor, which has the shortcomings that only macroskeletal disease can wear, and the protective gas shield has no flaws, making it difficult to die even if you want to.

Fuqiu is also the punishment officer, and it is Yin at the time; it is also the military elephant, and gold is used for action. This refers to the loyalty of heaven and earth, which is always based on killing. Heaven is responsible for things, spring brings forth autumn fruits, so it is in music. The sound of Shang is mainly the sound of the west, and the sound of Yi is the rhythm of July. Shang means hurt, something is old and sad; Yi means kill, something is too prosperous and should be killed. Xing Shanfeng·Nie Yin, nicknamed Qiu Sheng, sword named Shangyi () Rub character ()

After reading the first chapter, I can't understand that such a family can still exist.

After reading the first thirty chapters, the more I read, the more I feel that the protagonist is not his father's biological child (=_=). I'm afraid he is raising an enemy. If there is a big cleanup later...

Frankly speaking, I felt very happy when I first read this book, but after reading more, I felt something was wrong. Anyone who has watched puppetry knows that a person's martial arts is closely connected with his style and thoughts. This is the so-called martial arts and martial arts. But the protagonist here wants to learn everything and wants to learn everything. You have to know that many martial arts are incompatible. Their ideas are contradictory from the beginning. Furthermore, different people's understanding of the same martial arts will lead to completely different moves. I think it's okay for the protagonist to understand these martial arts, but if he wants to truly become a high-end saint, he will definitely not be able to follow these martial arts. He must have his own ideas and ideas, otherwise he will not be able to stand on the stage.

Today's authors have a misunderstanding when writing books. What's the use of learning a lot of martial arts? Don't tell me that the system, teaching, and skills are all right. One way to master the magic is to be a genius. When you reach a certain state, you will naturally have all kinds of incredible magical powers. That is the correct cultivation system. There are also various protagonists who practice Taoism, Demons, and Buddhas at the same time. They are not good at all. It is like a machine. It uses gasoline when it needs to use gasoline. Can I add diesel, heavy fuel, and aviation oil at will?

Another point, don't you see, in Pili, everyone uses one Kung Fu to fight to the end. The person who is awesome is always the person, it is the person's understanding of martial arts, not the Kung Fu. Obviously the author is like this now. He thinks that the flaws in the Kung Fu in Pili are given to the protagonist. However, Pili is because the people who use the Kung Fu are powerful, so the Kung Fu is powerful. Don't you see, Fentian's Lotus Holy Road Kaitianguang and many martial arts have been from the beginning to the end.

I really can't stand it anymore. My father has destroyed his strength. The protagonist has such a ruthless father and he doesn't have any resentment at all. Haha.

Fortunately, the title of your book is about suffering, not thunderbolts.

You can either make the protagonist's predecessor more innocent, or make his father more cruel. The protagonist's predecessor wanted to die on his own. After the protagonist traveled through time, he was not troubled by others and was given many benefits. Why must he have trouble with his father?

I just read the first chapter and realized that this is a waste material. At the beginning, the protagonist was beaten to death by his so-called father and his martial arts skills were completely disabled. I would like to ask, when the protagonist's martial arts skills improved, did he retaliate and destroy his cheap father? I thought of a way. First abolish the family, and then change it to your original surname or your mother's surname, letting him know that his so-called family has been cut off because of him. How about this idea. . . . . .

How many treasures does Pili pretend to have? One of the poem numbers. You need to think about it when you come out, you need to think about hitting people, you need to think about being beaten, and you need to think about it when you leave the field. The second BGM. How many people have died under the rebirth mantra. The third is concave shape. It is very important to concave shape before installing B.

I withdrew, mainly because I didn't like the martial arts in it. Isn't the Vajra Indestructible Body, the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, and the Beiming Magic Kung Fu delicious?

I would like to ask the protagonist how Mr. Li Si could grow up alive without wearing clothes.

The main setting at the beginning is unbearable. It is understandable that family martial arts is only passed down to the eldest son. It is understandable that such a large family, with at least several hundred members, cannot learn martial arts. There are no other martial arts that can be learned. People who don't know it would think that in such a chaotic world in a society ruled by law, are you kidding me? There are actually so many people watching. How did you sign the key?

I can't understand, I've never seen the Pili Puppet Show, I'm confused 😅

The protagonist's father is so speechless, and I have never heard of a father who doesn't want his son to become successful.

This book has been recommended 5.6 Times, but it's still going to die.

After reading Chapter 16, I found it interesting, but at the same time, I was confused and confused.

It's a mess, I've read about twenty chapters, but I still don't understand it.

Fake corpse🤫

The author is a eunuch. Come on, take off your clothes and cover up.

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