There Is Definitely Something Wrong with This Game

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​Feeling that some readers are really unfriendly to new writers when reading novels. Some readers read novels as if they are looking for trouble. They start by saying, "What the hell is written here is not logical at all?" To be honest, if it were a cliche book (the kind of mindless pretense and slap in the face), I would be the first to criticize it, but obviously this book is not. I don't want this book to be abandoned by the author who directly criticized it like Flowers and Swords and France. I have read so many chapters of this book. Although some parts are indeed not very well written, such as the forced addition of drama when creating certain characters, overall I think it is very well written. To take a step back, it is the first time for the author to write an article, so it is normal that some places are not appropriate. Readers with microscopes, please let this book go. (Some people have started to criticize such rigorous books like Mystery recently, although they are all because of their own inability to understand. The result is that the squid has to be specially explained in the book. It is really disgusting). If you don't want to read it, why don't you just give up the book? If you want to criticize, you can at least point out the bad parts and give the author a chance to grow. Finally, I hope that the author can put it into perspective for those of us who like this book, and don't be a eunuch just because some trolls are trolling. After all, there are definitely many more people who like this book than who hate it.

The amazing plot operation at the beginning makes it endless fun to fight with others. The writing of this article is fluent and interesting. In addition to the intense reasoning and thinking, you can't help but smile at their interludes. The following three keywords are used to describe this book: exciting, interesting, and exciting. Each character has his own unique charm, and the description of the supporting characters is no weaker than that of the protagonist. Not only that, it should be said that the sparks they create when they collide with each other make people look forward to the follow-up direction. During the reading process, it is obvious that the author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the development of the plot, and gives people the best story (script) impression. Not only is it the exploration of the truth in each script world or the tit-for-tat confrontation between people from different camps, but also the reality is as full of curiosity about the secrets behind the game as the title of the book. The only flaw is—— How to return this book! Without! Superior! Shelf! I pressed the button for a long time and couldn't cast my monthly vote. When I looked up at the sky, I felt like I couldn't go out to eat hot pot with my friends because of the epidemic. Waiting for the script to unfold and fatten up until the end of the script, it is refreshing to read it in one breath. The waiting before that is like planting a seed and waiting to see it take root, grow lush, and bear fruit, and then pluck it all and eat it. If you are interested in infinity, games, and reasoning, you really can't miss this article, it's worth waiting for. Support the author, look forward to putting it on the shelves, and the full subscription money is ready! (((O(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

I have only read Chapter 74 so far, so let me tell you my current feelings. Don't try to mess with me if you say there's a backhand behind me. What is the significance of using RMB as a recharge unit? It feels like a big failure, with too many loopholes to exploit. It wouldn't matter if it were an ordinary game. The game can interfere with reality, and the things drawn by drawing cards can also destroy the game experience and player balance. The final result is nothing more than a carnival for the rich. After all, there are many rich and smart people, or smart people seek sponsorship from rich people. If it is purely to show that the protagonist uses his intelligence and wisdom to defeat money-hungry players or rich and smart people, it will be obviously refreshing, but it will also make the tone of the novel novice and have obvious conflicts with its own positioning. This kind of setting reduces the room for improvement in the novel. After all, no matter how you expand the novel, you can't get around this hurdle, which is equivalent to locking up your own development space. Money only has meaning in society. It is just waste paper if it is divorced from society. You can have as much paper as you want. The unit used as a recharge makes the balance of the game easy to collapse, and the writing of novels is easy to collapse. For rich people, money is as much as paper, and superpowers such as krypton gold are not a joke. Of course, the author has his own arrangements later, so I will leave this setting for another time. If not, it is recommended to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, try to reduce these aspects as much as possible, or limit the amount of krypton gold for game updates. After all, unlimited krypton gold is too buggy. I won't say much about the official demolition gate. Many people have paid for it. Not everything can be regarded as interesting points in the novel. Of course, some people don't care about it. It's not a big problem to change it later. The above is just a well-intentioned pointer. It's great to be useful. Don't worry too much about ruining your own pace.

After watching Li Jiahang's "Heart Hunter", I suddenly felt that Boss Gu's face and Dai Meng's face overlapped... The last face of Zhang Wei suddenly appeared in front of my eyes...

So, superheroes are all cultivated by emperors? ?

After watching the previous plots, there are a lot of flaws. First of all, in the first plot in which the protagonist is Dr. Guwen, no one really thinks that the protagonist, an ordinary detective in reality, can single-handedly kill so many elite members of the Sky Soldier Brigade plus a non-human monster, right? By the way, the protagonist basically cleared the level without any injuries. The combat power of these elites is higher than that of the imperial army. It can be compared to our People's Liberation Army. Even if you add a skill with a 100 hit rate in 12 seconds, it is impossible. No matter how high the hit rate is, you still have to aim. It is impossible to hit someone by pointing to the sky. That is not a high hit rate, but a corner of the bullet. The following naval plot, not to mention that it is a bit unrealistic and outrageous for you to be dragged into a performance by the general's daughter while you are walking on the road. Let's say that the protagonist can sneak into the general's room and kill the general with the help of some slaves, then I don't know how this general has suppressed pirates for so many years and survives until now. Is there no one left at the naval base? Let the protagonist be alone in a deserted place. In reality, Hua Qiong's arrangement is very blunt, and his character is also disgusting. When he meets the protagonist, he feels like he has known her for many years. Of course, if this is a beautiful woman, I think you book friends may not mind The humor and excitement in this book are acceptable, but the length of each plot world is really short, relatively superficial, the characters are templated, and the ideas are taken for granted, so it can still be regarded as a short article. I hope the author's writing skills can improve

First of all, I have been following this book since "Third-rate Detective Drama", and I am also someone who has read "Thriller Paradise". When I first started reading this book, I felt a sense of déjà vu. Later I learned that the author was also a fan of thrillers, and I was quite surprised when I was affected by it (I really like thrillers). But that's not what I want to say. What I want to say is that for me, a person who has read thrillers, this book is... Not very good. The similarities in characters, worldview, etc. Make me feel that... This book is a "high imitation" (no derogatory meaning here, I hope there is no misunderstanding). And because I have already seen quite good books, this book is not attractive, very bland, and seems a bit boring.                                                                                                                                                                                                               <br

I just started reading it, and after reading the first case, I was a little disappointed. I thought it was a mystery-themed novel, but after reading the first case, I found that it was just a cool novel. The protagonist's reasoning was a bit forced and too taken for granted. The most important thing is the information asymmetry. The key information that supports the protagonist's reasoning is not told to the reader until the final summary of the case. Anyway, when I read it now, it's okay to read as a fun article, but it's much worse than a mystery article.

Tell me what I think Not to mention the reasoning process with logical problems, this thing is dispensable. It doesn't matter if it is well written, it is the icing on the cake. The first is that the setting is unreasonable, let's just talk about drawing cards. One hundred thousand for ten consecutive draws is not a lot for rich people. Doesn't drawing all kinds of things destroy the balance? At first I thought the author had some checks and balances to control the writing like this, but it turned out that there was none at all. The protagonist's opponents in the game have all kinds of skills and props. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, who would be able to bear it. You advertised it as a high-IQ battle game, but it turned out that the game was broken by the Six Gods Equipment on the other side. This led to the embarrassing situation that although you were writing a game, the gameplay was not strong. The second is to forcefully push the plot, embarrassing CP. This doesn't matter at first, but when coupled with the logically questionable reasoning, it becomes very serious. The whole process sounds rigorous but is actually brainless, creating an awkward atmosphere from the inside out. Finally, I hope this book will improve and get better and better, so that we can get together and part ways. Goodbye.

Well written, I'm just waiting for it to be released and will be fully booked.

Anyway, the subject type is still relatively new. Although I have read several novels with similar themes before, the writing was not very good. Without further ado, let me try Poison first.

This book is so good that I couldn't stop reading it.

Is there anyone out there who can pass by and leave a message for the poor author?

Many readers have mentioned that the game ability can be brought into reality and can also be used to make money. They are worried that the money will be out of control and you can be invincible by just paying money. So I will give a unified reply. First of all, only the character's skill card, equipment card and character card can be redeemed for real game abilities, and there will not be any invincible skills that can destroy the city. Secondly, after gaming abilities are brought to reality, there will be strict restrictions to ensure that gaming abilities will not cause social problems. At the same time, there is a limit to krypton gold. Although players who deposit money will definitely become stronger, they will not become stronger without limit. Moreover, krypton gold is different from gift packages. There is no guarantee. The more you charge, the more powerful you will be. As for what you can do to print money to earn krypton... I will not answer similar questions. Finally, the krypton gold system itself is a very important setting. It is not something the author came up with to make up the numbers. If you really don't like it, you can choose to leave quietly. If you speak in the comment area, please remain civil and polite and do not ruin the viewing experience of other readers. Otherwise, the author will ban the comment and delete the post without hesitation. Finally, thank you readers for your support~

How should I put it? First of all, let me be sure that the writing is not bad. But I still think there are some shortcomings. First, the system of drawing cards with krypton gold to become stronger is not very good. Maybe the author has never seen a big man with krypton gold, who can draw a single card for 10,000 yuan or ten consecutive cards for 100,000 yuan. Let me give you an example. NetEase released a game called After Tomorrow. I played it when it was first released. Each server has a large group, and most of the people are in the group. In this group, the guy who can make money the most earns 5,000 yuan a day (the difference between RMB warriors and non-money players can really be highlighted). Later, after catching up with the progress of the official map release, this guy stopped playing. Of course, it won't be my main topic after that. . . . . . This guy is definitely not the one who can make money the most in the game. The people who can make the most money are the anchors, rich second generation and so on. I really can't imagine that for a game that only costs 100,000 for ten consecutive games (the main and most naughty thing is that this game can bring fantastic abilities to people in reality), for a really rich person, how terrifying an account would be built with ten consecutive games. How crazy would such a fantastic ability make a person? Secondly, the behavior of the officials is a bit hard to understand (maybe the author will add more later, I just saw the official blowing up the door). I didn't understand. Aren't the officials in this novel all talking nonsense when they called the door? To check the water meter, the protagonist tells you that the water meter is outside. It's time to deliver food (I forgot if it was a courier), and the protagonist also told you that the delivery was wrong, and he didn't decide anything. This section is very weird. He is really a person who has nothing to do. The man outside the door first said to check the water meter, and then said to deliver something. Anyone who is not suspicious in his heart can just open the door to people outside casually. In my opinion, this person who bombed the door was just a person (perhaps an official) who had nothing to do and was looking for trouble (Sir, you have such great official authority 🙂). . . . . . In addition, some people say that it is to intimidate, so let us first assume that the protagonist is a positive person. In this case, the act of blowing up the door will not benefit either party at all, and will intensify the conflict between the two parties (you may say, it doesn't matter. But think about it, since you have to send a commissioner to control this group of people, why intensify this conflict)? Another hypothesis is that the protagonist has an antisocial personality. This situation will only exacerbate the protagonist's antisocial mentality. . . Therefore, with the protagonist's cooperation, the protagonist's door is blown up without any explanation. The person in charge is either a spy sent in from another country (specialized in sabotage), or the person in charge is a idiot in a special position who looks at people with his nose. It seemed pretty good at first. Although the author's reasoning is average, this is not a pure mystery novel, so the plot is not bad. But why add these two failures (at least I think they are failures). If the plot can be written more rigorously and better, why not write it better, at least without making big mistakes. Novel does not have to be related to real life, or even has nothing to do with it at all. It cannot be applied according to the laws of our reality. As long as it does not conform to the laws of reality, it will be said that the novel is not well written and has loopholes. This is unreasonable. But the internal plot of the novel must be logically consistent. For example, one hundred thousand yuan for ten consecutive times, how can it be consistent? We have to make the money in the world of the novel valuable (just like we pay two yuan for a bun, but in the novel, two cents are used for a bun). There is still money to recharge, but to whom is the money recharged? Country? Countries around the world? For another example, this fellow who bombed the door, how did he become the person in charge (at least in the door-exploding team, he was the leader), why did he become the person in charge? Is it relying on connections and going through the back door? Or are the people in charge from top to bottom a bunch of reckless idiots who don't take others seriously? In general, I hope the author can read it. What I wrote is not easy to type by hand. Not to criticize, I wish the author could write better. Of course, it may be possible that the author explained the relevant issues later on, and then it will be treated as if I said it in vain. Also, like the author said, it's OK to give opinions, but not to attack others personally.

I just like authors with raised butts

The author was a little surprised that this book has not been released yet. After reading it in one go, I wanted to vote for two monthly votes but found that I couldn't. 😂😂 The quality of this book is quite good, and so far there are no signs of collapse. The Xiao Jianzhu in Ling Yunzhi really likes me. I look forward to the author putting it on the shelves and will continue to subscribe. It's on the bookshelf, come on, author. 😬😬

By the way, has the krypton gold problem of this game been solved? If not, I won't watch it

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Author I am your uncle

It's 2202. Although my father-in-law is here, I still really want to wait.

Shangxiang Eunuch probably won't be updated anymore.

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There are definitely problems with this game. First of all, I have read all the chapters that have been updated. Generally speaking, this book is an orthodox game-focused article. From the content point of view, although the main focus is the real world, it is more about the protagonist's time travel. The author has also achieved innovation, interspersing humor with the tense process. From the perspective of character creation, the current characters include Xiao Rumo, the swordsman who values ​​righteousness, the bravest girl Snow White, the sword of the emperor Li Yun, the trustworthy Wang Zhixin, the goddess Aurora, and the book of Idient, the licking dog. They are all quite appropriate and consistent with the point of view of this book. From a plot point of view, the overall progress is moderate, and the big background is slowly unfolding. From the small things of NPC wisdom, it is conveyed that this may be the real world. Final conclusion: I secretly believe that this book has the potential to become a god. Maybe it's because the author is a newbie and doesn't have many resources, so there aren't many people around. But I hope the author doesn't give up. PS: Attached is a chapter on voting for monthly votes, please add more details.

The last grave sweep before June 1st in 25 years, there is nothing to sweep. It is impossible for the author of the novel Eunuch to log out his account and there will be no fake corpses.

This grandson has even canceled his account.

Is the author really the one who wrote about the First Saint Demon Sect?

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Can monthly tickets be recharged?