Guardian of Time and Space

It's well written and I'm already hooked.

The author is a newbie and loves writing. After a year of hard thinking, he chose the theme of time travel. He strived not to be clichéd and formalistic, and to ensure the seriousness and seriousness of the article. I hope readers can help recommend it.

The author is a newbie and loves writing. I promise that this book will not be unfinished. I also hope that readers will spread the word.

Come on, author, this is a good start.

I think the next step is a big scene.

I'll take a chance and leave your votes and favorites! Come on, boss

In your introduction, the author said what the hell is Lelouch about? Lelouch is not as good-looking as Gundam, Gundam Unicorn is more passionate, Gundam 00 is more exciting, and Gundam Seed is more exciting.

Let me take a dip, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Oh, the writing is good

It was so enjoyable to read, such a good book, how could I not recommend it!

Come on ヽ(∀)ﾉ value

It looks pretty good at first glanceLike it

Looks good, looks good, says important things three times

Lin Feng. A common name that was popular a few years ago! There is a bit too much explained here about time and space. I personally feel that it is a bit too much. If it is too much, it will appear straightforward and reduce my curiosity to a low level.

The writing is not bad, but there are too many unnecessary explanations. The dialogue is too long, which makes it redundant and cumbersome. It also reduces the sense of expectation and mystery. The most important thing is that it is compelling... Try to streamline the dialogue and narration, and don't make it too long. The content of the first two chapters can be compressed into one chapter, so that the first three chapters can directly complete the setting of background characters, time and place, and the plot of the film. Talking too much makes everyone look like mother-in-law and mother-in-law, not refreshing enough

Under what circumstances can it be refined? Is it okay to vote🤭🤭🤭

The front is too white and lacks a sense of mystery. The plot is much better at the back. Come on

The name is too low and should be changed to "Guardian of Time and Space"

"At this time, the grass has grown and the warbler has grown, and the one I love is on the road."

This feeling can be remembered in retrospect, but it was already at a loss at that time

Those beautiful things and times can only remain in memories

If we only meet each other for the first time in life, what's the matter? The autumn wind sad painted fan

If we only meet for the first time in life, what's the matter? Autumn Wind Sad Painting Fanqdd. Gg/fdOWKnBo

Great book, very well written! Collect and read, welcome to return and receive from each other

Voted and collected, it looks great.

Mark it and come back later to continue reading.

Guardian, what are you protecting?

The author's story is well written. After reading the beginning, I decided to save it. I will come back when I have gained some weight!

I saw this book on the new book list. Let me tell you my feelings about reading this book, and at the same time prove that I have been here. First, the introduction is good. Second, the setting of the protagonist, the guardian of time, is good, and it provides a foreshadowing for the protagonist to become stronger. He has no physical limitations and countless knowledge. As long as he is willing to exercise, he can be strong enough to defeat Superman. Third, the actual operation after entering the world is very confusing. Judging from the author's settings, the protagonist is set to be a person with normal three views. He will not be a bad person, nor will he actively do bad things. It feels a bit chaotic and neutral. But why do I say that his operations after entering the world are very confusing? Because the protagonist, as the guardian of time, is to maintain the normal development of world civilization and the continuity of time. When he entered the world of Resident Evil 1, he did not know the entire plot of the world like us, but only knew some general things. Combined with the previous settings I saw, we can draw a conclusion from this that the protagonist exists to maintain the normal development of human civilization. So if we bring this conclusion into the article, we can see why I said that the protagonist's operation is very confusing. The protagonist arrives at the time of Resident Evil, before the plot has just begun. At this point in time, the protagonist can prevent the 25th team from shutting down the Red Queen. But the protagonist didn't. Instead, he let these people commit suicide in order to advance the plot and make others regret after seeing the cruel truth. Then, the protagonist starts pretending to kill zombies, and everything goes back to where it started. Well, I stopped reading when I saw this. I felt very uncomfortable. In addition, after reading the introduction, I found that there is also access to Resident Evil 2, so this operation is really confusing. If it were me, I would write it as the protagonist and tell the 25th team the whole story from the beginning, and then verify it through the Red Queen. Disinfection will be carried out afterwards to resolve this crisis. But Resident Evil 2 will still happen. Why? Because this is Umbrella's long-awaited plan to build a "new world". Therefore, if the accident did not happen this time, they would create another "accident". Isn't this enough? It must be written so that they continue to commit suicide and the plot remains unchanged.

The author actually doesn't like the settings of the system flow and the invincible flow. He also hates the situation where he goes around making trouble in a certain world and makes the original work a mess. In my imagination, the protagonist does not need to be very powerful, nor does he need to express himself too much. It is just like an ordinary person experiencing various things and growing up little by little, rather than overnight, which would be very unfulfilling.

The purest form of Our Lady. It is difficult to understand the brain circuit of someone who can obviously save people but then asks others to be a holy mother to save people in the future.