Konoha's Light Tribulation Clone

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It looks good, but the updates are too slow. One update a day is not satisfying at all.

By the way, the author doesn't need to "legitimize" Flying Thunder God for the protagonist, otherwise the protagonist who doesn't know how to fly Thunder God will suddenly learn to fly Thunder God, a forbidden skill in the village. What's the point?

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The training conditions given in the original work of Flying Thunder God are only two words - "talent". Don't worry about what talent it is, because it's too abstract. The author said it's the amount of chakra, which I think is wrong, because according to the author's logic, Jiraiya should be able to learn the flying thunder god technique, but the fact is that Jiraiya can't learn it even if he uses senjutsu. Some people say that it is a talent for sealing and psychic arts, but I still have to use Jiraiya to refute this statement. So compare Minato with Tobirama, and then compare with other people, you will find that there is no need to write too concrete, the more abstract the better. If you take it too seriously, you cannot explain ninjutsu other than the five types of escape techniques. Space ninjutsu is related to chakra. Minato showed it after his reincarnation. Anyone who comes into contact with his own chakra can teleport simultaneously. Therefore, chakra consumption is only related to the volume of the teleported object and has nothing to do with the distance. Space Ninjutsu is not about waiting for time to pause and then walking straight through. It's not like this. Just like a mirror, have you ever wondered why you appear on the other side of the mirror? The fourth generation's thinking is very out-of-the-box and second-rate. In fact, this is the key. In other words, this space talent is "training", "thinking", and "the way of thinking about time and space". Shiranui Genma and others "know how to do it, but don't know how to do it naturally", so they can use it, but they are uneducated and stop there, just like people who know how to use a mobile phone may not necessarily know how to repair it. The prototype of Minato is "Takenaka Hanbei". Zhuge Liang and Shiranui Genma used the "Flying Thunder Formation Technique" in Japan's Warring States Period. They are actually talking about the old saying of "three stooges, one can stand up to Zhuge Liang". Also, the level of ninjutsu refers to the difficulty of learning, so it is wrong to say that reaction ability is the threshold for learning. How to learn and how to apply are two different things.

The protagonist's strength and cheats are too invincible, and sooner or later he will be able to dominate the ninja world. But if the plot develops like this, and relies on cheats to dominate the ninja world, the plot will be meaningless. Because you are always invincible, it will gradually become boring. All authors should consider other means to make the plot interesting. Personal suggestions 1. Limit the ability of cheats 1. Control the number of clones. If you have a maximum of 9, you will be invincible. 2. The death and resurrection time of clones. It is recommended that for every clone that dies, it takes one year to wait for its resurrection. If 9 clones die at the same time, it will accumulate to 9 years. 3. Avatar strength, it is recommended that for every additional avatar the protagonist has, the avatar's strength will increase by one level. When there are 9 avatars, each avatar will have 9 layers of physical attributes and chakra content of the protagonist. Moreover, the clone can only use the body blood inheritance and special abilities of the copied target, and ordinary ninjutsu without special requirements is not restricted. 4. Restrictions on clone copy objects. The real strength gap between the copy object and the original body must not be too large. Nine clones can only copy nine people. After the upper limit of 9 clones are spawned, the copied characters can be copied and updated again. The process is the same as before, for example: re-copying the adult Uchiha Itachi can overwrite the shared ability attributes of the young Uchiha Itachi. Copy cooldown time like clone increases time. (It can be increased according to the situation) In this way, the protagonist's strength growth can be controlled to some extent, allowing the protagonist to plan and arrange the copy plan, understand the copy objects that he needs, actively plan, wait, and promote the plot. For example: The protagonist wants to copy Kaguya Otsutsuki's ability. The protagonist needs to slowly level up to increase his strength to that of Naruto/Sasuke, the Six Paths Uzumaki. This way the protagonist can copy Kaguya's abilities. And the protagonist wants to copy Kaguya and obtain the special ability of the ninja world and the characteristics of immortality. The protagonist can't go too far. Black Zetsu Obito collects tailed beasts to start the main plot of Infinite Tsukuyomi. There is no need to copy the abilities of Nagato and Uchiha Madara, the protagonist's strength will not be over-inflated, and the battle will not become a mindless push. The protagonist even needs to hide and limit his abilities, which is not discovered by Akatsuki, Black Zetsu and others. Become the mastermind behind the scenes, the ultimate yinbi, or wait, promote, guide or maintain the original plot, smoothly start the infinite monthly reading, and reap the final fruits. According to this, the protagonist will not be able to use clones randomly in the future, and the protagonist needs a more ambitious plan. For example: prepare to use clone quota No. 6/7 To copy Otsutsuki Toneri, so that the protagonist will plan to go to the moon before the Fourth War, and let Otsutsuki Toneri open the reincarnation eye in advance. Depending on the situation, a war will be inevitable. Finally, Otsutsuki Toneri will be captured and gouged out his eyes for experiments, so that the first and second girls in the harem can also obtain the reincarnation eye. Then in the fourth battle, clone No. 7/8 Was used to copy Kaguya Otsutsuki. Before this, the protagonist should have used a clone quota to copy Obito Uchiha. After all, there is no need to explain the power of Kamui's bug! ? The best time is to fight the power of Obito's eyes in front of Kaguya. Finally, depending on the situation, the protagonist has to leave the clones No. 8/9 For Boruto. The Otsutsukis sent to us from outside the world, I remember that there are abilities related to time. After calculating this, it takes up 4 places at least. Adding the 4 places that the protagonist has used before, the protagonist only has one place available at most. Who does the protagonist decide to copy with this quota? Uchiha Shisui? Kaguya Kimimaro? It is not recommended that the protagonist copies Naruto and Sasuke. What does the chakra of Asura and Indra count? The main character's target is all on Kaguya, so the abilities of Naru and Zuo seem useless! Can the nine-tails chakra be as good as the ten-tails? Sasuke only has some value in the Space Exchange Eye Technique obtained by opening the Rinnegan in the later period. Amaterasu and Kagoto Tomei are useless, completely inferior to Uchiha Itachi Amaterasu + Tsukuyomi. To copy Sasuke, he has to duplicate Amaterasu's ability. In the end, it was considered between Uchiha Shisui and Kaguya Kimimaro. In terms of ability, Shisui's Betami Eye Technique is stronger, but because it is too strong, I think it is best not to copy Shisui. The ability destroys destruction. If the protagonist has Shisui's ability, this book will completely become an invincible style! Silently controlling and changing others, and the protagonist knowing the future plot, with a little bit of brains, the protagonist can just lie down and usher in the finale! Emotionally, too, the protagonist throws aside his moral integrity. Which female character he likes cannot be settled by another god? So the author had better let the protagonist give up the ability to copy Shisui. The only concern about copying Kimimaro is that Kimimaro's blood disease, according to various fan theories, is basically caused by Kimimaro's talent being too strong and his ability to return to his ancestors, but also due to incomplete blood inheritance. Kimimaro's corpse bone vein levels are too close, so Kaguya's blood successor kills the gray bones together. However, the bloodline ability inherited by Kimimaro's clan is very limited. Without the vitality of the Uzumaki Senju, he cannot afford the traces of the co-killing gray bone characteristics brought by the bloodline's return to his ancestors, so there is no way to save him. But the protagonist has a fusion of Uzumaki bloodline + Uchiha bloodline, a thin Otsutsuki bloodline, strong vitality, and the same bloodline. Theoretically, there should be no problem. In addition, since the system is copied and fused, all the protagonists will not get blood-borne diseases according to theory, right? ! So how about deciding to give Kimimaro the last spot? 2. Increase the proportion of love interaction plots. For example, conquer new goals to increase the number of people in the harem, balance the relationship between the harem, plan ninjutsu for the harem members, design and develop abilities, teach and exercise, and increase their strength. For example, planning the reincarnation eye for his girlfriend, planning Tsunade's Yin Seal for the harem, creating rebirth... And other secrets to beautify one's face and save one's life. You must know that Tsunade's Yin Seal can not only regulate the body's chakra, but also store the chakra extracted daily. It also controls the human body's endocrine system, allowing your girlfriend to become immortal and have skin like a baby's. It can also control the growth and size of Oppai. If the protagonist doesn't learn it, his girlfriend must learn it! Creating regeneration and other medical ninjutsu can not only increase the survival rate of yourself and your harem, but more importantly, you can be injured in battle without leaving scars! Harem recommendation: 1. The prince's spare tire Hinata, instead of being cheap and incomprehensible to the charming prince, it is better for the protagonist to seize the opportunity of Naruto's hero to save the beauty, and then guide and raise Hinata, and can also become his leading teacher. 2. Uzumaki Koro, after working so hard to raise a sister who is not related by blood, does the protagonist want to give it to another man? With the addition of the author's original Hinata Ayane and one or two heroines from the Naruto movie, it's almost enough for the protagonist to open a harem like this. emmmmmmmmmmm… I wrote so much by accident! I hope the author can read it patiently! I hope the author can adopt it! (^_^;)

Come on, I really like your novel. I hope I can keep writing it for a long time.

This book is well written so far, and there are no problems with plot arrangement and logic. The author can just continue writing according to his own ideas. As for book review suggestions, the author should also be able to judge whether they are good or bad. There is no need for the author to pay attention to those who deliberately criticize and smear the rhythm. If they are excessive, they will be dealt with directly. The author should also understand that no work can satisfy everyone. Just be yourself and make yourself better!

The book is good. If it stays like this, it will definitely become popular. But I suggest the author change the cover. . When I saw the cover, I actually didn't want to read it. . But I watched it anyway. . This is just my suggestion. I will keep chasing. As long as you don't enter the palace

Full subscription support I read this book several times but was discouraged by the comment section. I read it again today, so after reading it I found that it was surprisingly good.

The author asks for PY and asks for ➕ejaculation. I don't know what essence tastes like!

The protagonist licked Hinata Ayane too much, and her personality was like that

The author Hinata Ayane has a good personality, will she be the heroine? Don't know why so many people hate it.

The start is really good, but there are too few, please update

Wow, the update is awesome. It feels like it has been better for many days.

Author, I will definitely vote for you next time

This is your excuse for breaking up.

The writing is good and the pacing is well controlled. If there are no supervisors and poisonous points, it should not be a hit. I think I can invest in it

Come on (´-ω-`), the writing is very suitable to my taste and is much more comfortable to read than those books on the first page. Those books are so embarrassing that I get cancer😓😓😓

The recommendation vote has been given. Come on, I've turned on automatic subscription.

Come on, update. I have automatically subscribed. I want to gain weight before reading, but I can't help it.

It's on the shelves and there are so few, only 500 rewards, no more 🤫🤫🤫

Come on! ! ! Great writing👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻A very thoughtful start