I Am a Dog at the Beginning

This novel gives me the feeling that: The shaping of the environment is not closely related to the plot and character description, it is like a patchwork of building blocks produced by manufacturers of different production quality. In human terms: "Sensory stimulation" is not significant. It's not "refreshing" when I watch it, and it's not very immersive. Or, in other words, "Too scattered", the frame is quite large, and the content is just like fluff. But it can be seen that the author is working hard to strengthen his capabilities in this area. I'm quite optimistic about it, it has great potential. (Looking forward to a new great writer) The plot setting is relatively novel, and the "Three Views" can be said to be relatively positive and can attract readers' "eyeballs", but not retaining people is also a bigger problem.          ，， "It was a mule or a horse that came out for a ride", the story is meant for people to read. Whether a story is attractive depends on whether it is "flesh and blood". Come on, if the description and rhetoric are more perfect, and the relationship between the environment and the characters is more "compact", it will definitely be better and more exciting. The examples should all work, so I won't show off. ——2020.6.27 Stay

. . . . The part where the protagonist is irrational is like shit The previous part is obviously very interesting.

I feel that what humans do to underground creatures is no better than what demons do to humans. Although racial strife is nothing, why do humans always like to wear the banner of justice, peace, and love? (Being a bitch and a memorial arch)

No more writing? This book is really interesting to write, and the rhythm and characters are well-chosen. Don't worry about other people's negative comments! Some people's bad comments are not worthy of being called opinions at all, they are just nitpicking. It's really a pity that I finally found something I liked, but the author didn't write it anymore.

In order to save a child he has met once, he dares to risk his life, which is a proper fool. Not my cup of tea. Withdrawn.

It feels good, I finished it before I knew it

Why do you want to change your avatar? Wasn't that avatar from before pretty good? There is a strange feeling, that is... How come he doesn't look like a good person! Hahahahaha!

There is no protagonist in this book. The content of the protagonist and supporting characters is almost the same.

I think the author's writing style is very good. This book is sure to be a hit!

It's also weird. I traveled back and forth for a whole day and didn't go looking for food until dark. This kind of protagonist, haha

I've finished reading the latest chapters! The book is good, but updates are too slow. And there is no way to promote it. I found this book before, it was an update notification on the home page, and I found the name a bit strange, so I came in. If not in the bookshelf. I can't even find this book.

The first few dozen chapters were well written, but the later ones became more and more disgusting🤢, Σ_(꒪ཀ꒪∠)vomit, farewell!

Why is it so popular to write books now? Write one for the protagonist and ten for the supporting character. I completely don't understand what's the use of writing supporting roles? Is it the legendary number of words?

I just came from the "My Best Friend Cheng Erha" next door. I was a little confused when I saw the title of this book. Mixed mood

I've given you all the recommended tickets for monthly subscriptions, can you please add some details?

I am very optimistic about the follow-up of this book. Good luck to the author, hehe.

After going back and forth, these are the same people who read this book To be honest, I felt bored while reading it, bye👋🏻

Ah, it won't be updated for a month.

Sorry, it's been so long! He was even hung up and hammered!

The writing is okay, why doesn't anyone read it?

It's really beautiful Really

Excellent work! It should be popular! It's just that the title of the book is uninspiring. Like Dog and Arthur!

The first 40 chapters of this book gave me the feeling that the protagonist disappeared and the supporting character became the protagonist. Gone...

The protagonist is becoming more and more... Transparent, and you are becoming less and less interested. The passion and interest that you see in one breath are gone... It can't attract people!

When I came here, I saw that it had not been updated for 8 days. Take a look first, take a look first.

No more updates? They also said they would give me a monthly pass, so why not give me this?

It's been two months since the last update…

Cut🤫🤫🤫

Then what do you think when you write it like this? The real protagonist is still salty and has not turned over! You always try to dissuade readers, without giving them any sense of involvement!