I Have a Superbody USB Drive

Is this the book I found on Sanjiang? It's really like digging for gold in shit.

Niubi🐮 This novel is amazing, and its quality is the best in Sanjiang. It is so good that I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night after reading it. I was shocked by what the heavens said Niubi Niubi🐮

The book here is very good. It is one of the most reliable science fiction articles I have read. Whether the author is a related major or has checked the information, he has definitely put in the effort. I would like to remind the author to be careful about the names of places and names in real life to avoid 404

I saw someone making suggestions, so let me share my opinion, Firstly, the heroine should not be Xia Yin. I read a sentence in the review section of a book, and it seemed quite reasonable, "The heroine is written for readers. It is not written for the author, because readers are introduced to the protagonist. If your heroine is liked by most readers, it means that you have successfully portrayed this character. If only the author and a small number of readers like it, then it is better not to discard the heroine, because she will You will lose a lot of readers." For now, the character Xia Yin is not very popular. She was okay when she first appeared, but later she became obviously "naive" to the point of being unreal, which also gave readers a subconscious sense of alienation and disgust. At this time By this time, she had completed her mission, and the author should have let her leave, but the author did not. She even appeared several times later, which made readers feel that the author had a designated heroine, which also deepened the disgust of the people who did not like her in the first place. 2. There is no need to impose restrictions on the protagonist. For now, the things the protagonist takes out cannot be copied and are consumables. Even if they can be reverse-engineered and analyzed, it will take several years. If it really becomes a defective product, the difficulty of analysis will rise several levels. This kind of forced suppression of the protagonist's strength development will only make readers dislike it, and it is not in line with the previous settings of the author. When the basic settings conflict with each other, then there is basically no room for improvement in this book. 3. Now, in fact, it is no longer useful to let the federation suppress the protagonist and create twists and turns. After all, it is no longer useful to use power to intimidate the protagonist's capital consortium, because the protagonist represents the entire organization. When the protagonist encounters this situation, other families will not stand by and watch, and they cannot stand by and watch. If conspiracy is used, there are already lessons learned from the past. Doing this again is suspected of being overly worded and subverting intelligence. 4. Regarding the logic and excitement of scientific and technological texts, there is actually no conflict between these two points. There is no need to separate them so much. The balance between the two lies in the author's control. If there is no other way, you can abandon certain exciting points, but also ensure that the logic is intact and harmonious. If a scientific and technological book is a building, then logic is the foundation and load-bearing walls. As long as your book has more floors (number of words), even if the pleasant points are less, the results will be better than those books that only have pleasant points. 5. Regarding the future writing direction of this book, if the author wants to create some twists and turns for the author to increase the number of cool points, Quan and Li can no longer cause any twists and turns for the protagonist, so the starting direction can be unexpected, and it is best to start with biology that the protagonist is good at. After all, the federation has begun to increase its research on immortality again because of the protagonist's several papers; If there are other aspects, you can start with the USB flash drive or the things that the predecessor made. After all, the USB flash drive left by the predecessor also has several ghost movies. The cool thing is the strength and power increased through this process. After the protagonist becomes the big boss behind the scenes of the federation, there are only two directions to continue, 1. Stars and sea, 2. USB flash drive world. Of course, both can be done at the same time. That's all I can think of for the time being. Since I type out what comes to mind, it may not be smooth and there may be typos. I hope you can forgive me and go have a meal first

This book is absolutely excellent. If it is not a god at all, no one will find out if you secretly eat shit, right?

Leave a floor, 20 o'clock on the first floor. Once you reach 10 floors, you will be rewarded once (100,000 rewards for every 100 floors), valid for a long time 😁

There are power cuts in many places these days. Didn't you kid hand in the USB flash drive?

Suddenly the push is completed? I am planning to raise another 2 million and then slaughter it. It feels like such a good story has been ended hastily.

After reading it for so long, I felt that something was missing during this period. It was not until I read another novel with a lot of deaths that I finally understood. The plot of this novel has not been intense for a long time. It is not like the beginning. There is no main line during this period. It feels like the technology tree has not climbed much, the military power has not developed, and there has not been space travel yet. Not many people have died. Well, I hope the author can write better.

I gave all the monthly recommended tickets, and I haven't seen high-quality science fiction articles on Qidian recently. I'm very happy to see pure science fiction in the science fiction board that is occupied by fantasy. Come on, author!