Fantasy World Rescue Carnival

I think the author is very humble and always says that his writing is not good. In fact, I think it is quite good. 1. Overall framework. The new book has only updated 4 chapters, but the framework is already very clear, allowing people to understand the story. The protagonist Qiutiao is a miserable middle-aged social beast. He can enter another world in his dreams, but he always thought it was just a dream. He accepted various tasks in his dreams and died many times due to failed tasks. Until one night in his dream, he met Princess Slime (a cute little pet) and the magic circle of rebirth. When he woke up, the slime actually followed him into reality. Along with it came a system "Biyi's Call" transmitted into his body, which required him to complete the rescue of another world. 2. The smoothness of the writing can show the author's skill. I like the first chapter very much. There is a lot to learn from the description of the environment, action, and psychology. It initially explains the dreams of autumn birds and the tragedy of daily life, and the author's one-man show is brilliant. 3. Highlight: Everyone is a system writer, why are you so cured? To be honest, I haven't read much system literature. I have only tried a few books, and I always feel that this model has been written badly. However, the author's style of painting in this book really stood out to me. The names of the protagonists and characters are Japanese names. I was a little puzzled at first, but later I found out that the whole book has a very bright and healing style of Japanese comics! Too small and fresh. Especially the plot where Ms. Qiu Liang appears with her children feels like a very warm Japanese drama plot. I will focus on these characters below. 4. Character creation. As a hard-working middle-aged aunt, I have a strong sense of Akiyama's daily life. A 38-year-old middle-aged unmarried man, a coder who works overtime on weekends, squeezes into the subway to and from get off work with a dull expression, and completes the day's work with a blank mind, day after day. On weekdays, because no one talks to him, his inner world is very active (actually, he is too embarrassed to talk to himself...). What particularly surprised me was the vivid description of Ms. Qiu Liang, her mother and her son. Qiu Liang, a single mother, is gentle and virtuous, her elder brother Feng Tai is sensible yet innocent, and her younger brother Xiao Ci is, well, a naughty little shota. The various details when the three of them get along are handled very carefully. I hope that in the following chapters, the author will allow them to have more wonderful chemical effects with the protagonist and create more exciting stories. 5. A little suggestion. As mentioned in this chapter, there are many psychological activities in the text, which are simply connected by dashes. If the psychological activities of two characters appear at the same time, when the character's perspective switches, you will suddenly not know whose psychological activity it is. In addition, this system feels a little complicated, and it is difficult to talk about it. Are you prepared to explain it every time Qiutiao feels something? Or it can be simpler. I prefer watching the protagonist than watching the system, haha.

Ahem! My name is Qiu Niao Shan. I am 38 years old this year. I am a typical social animal of the contemporary era. I earn a good salary and live a similar life every day. However, because life was too boring, I gradually fell in love with sleeping, because my dreams were full of incredible dreams, as if I had entered another world. This wonderful feeling made my tired body come alive. Together with my 38-year-old heart. But a dream is just a dream after all, and it cannot come true. Until one day, a... Slime appeared on my bed! ! ! No, wait, there is a mechanized female voice coming from somewhere: [The system confirmed success (system confirmation success)] [Lock on (lock)] [Detection is complete (detection completed) activated (Successfully activated the system) [Language confirmed, completed] [Confirmed, successfully obtained "Fright Resistance"] ... At this time... I realized - 'Dream, not just a dream' ... After a long few minutes, I finally understood what happened Haha, what? It turns out that I was just asked to save another world. How big of a deal is this? Don't you just want me to save the world? Can this faze me? Do I seem to be someone who is afraid of getting into trouble? Yes! That's right! I am! I can't do it, please find someone else. Instruction error, cannot be changed You have successfully activated the system, if you do not save the other world, you will be forced to brain death Well... Because the world is now advocating the noble concept of love & peace. So, based on the lofty belief that if I don't go to hell, who will go to hell. I decided that I want to save another world. In this way, I am already 38 years old, but I want to save another world, and the story of the ultimate middle school student begins... "Wait a minute..., There is Yu (me), and Yu will come with me." Oh, yes, I also bring a pink slime. ………………………………………… Isn't this introduction a little more joyful? And the explanation is clearer, and you can know more information I hope everyone can be happy every day. O(∩_∩)O

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