I Founded a Ninja Clan in Tokyo

There are gods, Buddhas, demons, and shrine maidens in Naruto. There are spaceships and artillery. There is an electromagnetic gun that can shoot into outer space. There are missiles. There are Gundams and spaceships.

Chapter 2 Isn't your sister only twelve years old? She should be promoted to junior high school instead of senior high school in the next year.

In fact, there is no need to be nervous in the Ninja Village in the author. After all, Kakashi has already agreed with you, then the protagonist can just ask Kakashi to take him to see the Third Generation. The Third Generation is still good. Let the Third Generation come forward to clarify the matter and ask the Third Generation to borrow some Jonin, Kakashi, Gai, etc. Instead of using shadow clones to pretend to be gods in reality, it is better to ask the Third Generation to clarify that you want to start a ninja sect in reality and ask Konoha for support. After all, there are two worlds that will not affect both parties in nature. The content of support is to help the protagonist in the real world. Over there, suitable people will be recruited into the Ninja Sect. In exchange for people from the Ninja Sect entering Konoha to help Konoha when there is a crisis in Konoha, it will make sense for someone behind the male protagonist to make sense. Those ninjas who join in reality will feel more at ease. After all, no matter how much the protagonist shadows the clones, there will still be flaws. It is difficult to deal with it. The Jounin and Chuunin who come to Konoha to cooperate with the protagonist will act to stabilize the hearts of the new joiners in reality. The person sent to support must be a close confidant of the third generation. Author, you can consider my suggestion.

The protagonist has so many inner dramas that it's embarrassing. There is a reason for the recommendation of less than 2,000 words after more than 200,000 words.

This book might. . . It collapsed because it deviated from the route. The character design is off, and the behind-the-scenes boss flow is gone because there are too many people in the same position. And the protagonists are weaker than them, and Naruto's trump card for the coexistence of two real worlds is gone, because there are many worlds that are more powerful than Naruto and are not under the control of the protagonist. The author is full of disdain for the third generation, but the protagonist also becomes a careerist.

Since I traveled through time and was reborn in Japan, why do I still have a Chinese name? It looks so ridiculous! It's like traveling through time and being reborn in the United States, but being called by a Chinese name. And for the protagonist, such a name makes it harder for him to blend into the environment. Isn't there a saying that when you go into town, do as the Romans do?

He has passed away. When writing about Japan, write seriously and don't talk nonsense about the mainland.

After reading ten chapters, I asked a few questions. First of all, let's start with the protagonist's setting. The protagonist used more than ten years of cheating to become a top-notch genin in the main world. This start is completely meaningless, right? If we focus on the protagonist's growth, then the time when getting the gold finger ten years in advance does not promote the protagonist's growth should be deleted. Change it to the protagonist who has just obtained the gold finger and use the ninja world as the main line to expand the world view of the main world in the middle and later stages. Otherwise, if the main character's strength reaches the level of Jonin, then it would be fine to modify the main world's combat power and start with the most interesting mid-term two-line. Now this setting will not be long before either the protagonist grows too slowly and becomes uninteresting, or other people in the main world cannot keep up with the protagonist's growth and it becomes a one-man drama for the protagonist. Also, the teleportation technique is only for high-speed movement, not teleportation. This is completely different from short distance and stamina consumption... The two pillars of the Samsara Eye Tenshou force can only move short distances and have limitations. You, a genin, can't use this teleportation...

Am I the only one who thinks the inner drama of the protagonist is too awkward?

It's so embarrassing to watch. If you don't know how to write about character, why don't you write about it? It's a drama.