This Is Minecraft

The creativity is good, and it seems to have a big layout... But the performance of the first chapter is not very good. There are too many onomatopoeias, which ruins the reading experience... The sense of substitution is not very strong, maybe it lacks a little character description... In short, it is okay... As long as you work hard, you can write it well...

One more thing, Shitiao writers said it looks unlucky (; ´Д｀) **: 55855-1715, it's a QQ group, don't add the wrong one

Why is it that no one is watching? No, I have to change the partition later, and I won't stay in the huge fantasy partition.

Why doesn't anyone write a review? (；´Д｀) Why do some people read it and collect it, but no one comments? It would be nice to say something.

I feel... A little dry...

Come on! It still feels good!

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Thanks for the suggestion {"NickName":"Ugly Head","UserId":328392449}. The logical relationship between the first three chapters and the rest has been changed. The part about drowning will not be changed, which will affect the outline.

Why do you have the most chapters and the fewest readers?

I didn't look carefully before. Aren't you an annoying villager?

I suddenly discovered a very interesting thing. The people who write about the theme of Minecraft are basically those people commenting on each other (囧){"NickName":"Ugly Head","UserId":328392449}{"NickName":"Sleeping Night Empty","UserId":320693741}