Another World Gate

It's just a rubbish book, and I thought it was really about Taoist preaching. Taking the prehistoric novel system to Taoism It's already disgusting to include two little girls at the beginning. Children from poor families in ancient times behaved the same as modern children. The little girl obviously knows how to cook, but Hou Hou can't. He hired a cook out of nowhere. That woman at the back is so disgusting to Mr. Twelve🤢 All readers advised not to write about her again. After reading the catalog, they didn't leave until the first chapter was published, and they just left. The setting is not in line with Taoism, and the protagonist and supporting characters are written as if they are mentally retarded.

This book is better in the early stages. How many years can it be compared to your apprenticeship after decades? After a few years of training, I have reached the Golden Core stage and the third level. Your family is not the only one with geniuses in this world. When there is a plague, since only those few cities have it, if they are sealed, the emperor will massacre the city without even thinking. I can tolerate this. At least there is a reason. So Haoran Academy doesn't care if there is a plague? The master's disciples are all at level 4, and the master is logically at level 5. He is similar to the emperor. Even if he can't win, he shouldn't ask without asking. There is also the Dog Temple. The organization that wants to name Wei Guangzheng according to the author's intention has no good people. Also, doesn't the author of the name of this temple feel like peacekeeping? Later, several third-level gods were made gods, and the previous very embarrassing imperial edict couldn't even get to the third level? There is also the Grand Marshal of the country, whose title is too ridiculous. Marshal, alas, is still an old man. He doesn't know any strategy in fighting, and he is tough in the front. There is also the beast control gate. According to the setting meaning, he has the kind of unscrupulous personality that regards human life as trivial. In the end, he is forgiven when he says forgive, and all the bad guys in the front will die. Later, I let it go without any reason, and the combat power system also collapsed. I don't want to say more. I have said enough. I could bear it in the early stage, but I couldn't bear it anymore. The author's writing style is okay, but could you please be more logical? Read it again for yourself. Do you think the logic makes sense? There is also the setting of the emperor that says that the destiny of the country makes the emperor the strongest, but it cannot be done without the imperial capital. Gee, this is not the destiny of the country. This is your luck in the imperial capital.

To be honest, I came here from the last book. Although there were many bugs, it had some logic. This one was more powerful. It choked me at the beginning. The protagonist went into the city and met two girls. They were abandoned by their parents in the city, saying they were afraid of being used as sacrifices. I hope there is a kind person who can take them in. There is a little bug here. The two girls have a bag around their necks with words in it, but the protagonist does not know the words in this world, but he can talk to them. This is not a bad point, after all, it can be explained in universal language, and then later, after the protagonist knew this, he told them to take them to find their parents. The two girls happily followed the protagonist, and the protagonist took them to the Taoist temple. A wonderful thing happened 🙂. After the protagonist took them to the Taoist temple, the two girls miraculously forgot to find their parents. Why did they become apprentices for no reason😖, the key protagonist never explained to them that they were not lost, but that their parents were afraid that they would be used as sacrifices, and hoped that a kind person would take them in. I don't know how this is for you, you can't come up with such an obvious poisonous point without using your brain. I'll take my leave

After reading about twenty chapters, I really feel like a holy mother. I cried because of something. The corners of my eyes are moist. I really admire it. If you sigh and feel melancholy for a while, I can accept it. After all, it is excusable to hurt other things. But I beg you, please stop crying. Some people will definitely say that I am inhumane or something, but I really feel that the Lord The values ​​of horns are very strange. According to the logic of the protagonist crying when the Wolf King Village is destroyed, if the protagonist is in the world of martial arts and slays demons, he has to take care of the young sons and daughters of the evil heretics. Otherwise, you will kill the evil people. If other righteous people seek revenge and destroy the evil people, wouldn't you have to cry to death to meet the Sanqing Taoist? Then every time you act chivalrous and righteous, you have to accept the innocent children of evildoers killed by you (otherwise there is a chance that they will be killed by your enemies). Can you handle it if this goes on? Besides, I don't think the children in Wolf King Village are innocent. When their parents use children from other villages to sacrifice their own children to the Wolf King, they are no longer innocent. Everyone in Wolf King Village enjoys the Wolf King's protection. Naturally, they have to pay a price and bear corresponding obligations and risks. If you take away other people's children, you must be prepared to have your own children killed. Just like a murderer, everyone will always kill him. After all, there is a cycle of cause and effect. Another poisonous point is that the protagonist has set rules for so many villages... At what level do you start to make rules? You can change the millions of years of rules in this world at your request? Besides, you are not allowed to eat intelligent creatures when offering sacrifices to spirits. Really, people eat beasts, sacrifices to spirits eat beasts, and beasts eat beasts. The ecological balance has been destroyed. What will happen if the beasts are gone? Don't you want everyone to eat it up? It can be seen that the author is a very idealistic person. Maybe I am older. I think this kind of idealization is ridiculous in modern society, let alone a world where you eat me and I eat you. And the Taoism in my mind is definitely not like this. By the way, is the protagonist still such a virgin?

After reading more than ten chapters, I found that the characters are a bit mentally retarded, and the two sisters-in-law are a bit too naive. It doesn't have that flavor. It's better to just write about cultivating immortals.

I feel like this Mr. 12 Is so annoying, especially the one where the protagonist lives. In any case, it is at the level of a gentleman. It feels like it is okay to be portrayed like an ignorant young girl disciple. A senior practitioner or even the heroine behind will be annoyed by it.

From the very beginning, it was written about women, regardless of their size. There is no doubt that this book is a stud. They all have this kind of quirk. How about cultivating a little loli?

It's a good book, but the author's writing is really not that good.

To be honest, I have only read about thirty chapters, and I have no interest in reading it. In the previous plot and the middle plot, the Taoist temple from another world has begun to go to the city to have a king's meal, then tell people stories, come to people's faces, and then show off miracle costumes in front of everyone❌. These plots are repeated with a novel about the development of Taoism in another world. Then, I lost interest in reading the Shushan War Chronicles and other catalogs. It is poisonous, looks uncomfortable, and feels like it is discrediting the Taoist sect.

Chapter 10: Poisoned to death, with contradictory logic, it can be said that there is no logic, and the facts are wantonly distorted for the sake of plot.

Oh, it turns out that the system is the protagonist. Goodbye

I'd like to write it for new readers. The first few chapters of this book are well-written and the writing is witty. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I feel that it is still a good book. However, starting around chapter 60, I don't know if the author has sold out or has exhausted his talents. Of course, it is also possible that I read Jiang Ye and Qing Yu Nian, so I changed my outline. In short, the plot is inexplicably "borrowed" (I won't say plagiarism here, I don't even bother to change the character names) from these two masterpieces. What is even more speechless is Crazy Water. If the water is not good, it is hard water! Well, the first chapter can be said to be a delicious meal, but the following articles can be said to be like chewing wax 😐. It is really a pity. I hope all new readers can be prepared.

It's too watery. It was fine before, but now the chapter is 60% watery. If this continues, I'm going to jump to another chapter.

You haven't asked anyone to give charity. What do you think is appropriate to call a donor?

After reading most of the book, I may have preconceived ideas. I didn't quite understand that the author borrowed characters from other works and also used their names. When I read it, I felt that it was strange and confusing. I always thought that this was a book that was pieced together by cutting out and editing from many novels. For example, Qing Yu Nian's Fan Xian's line is inserted into the academy at night, and the plot of Yang Jian in Erlang God by splitting the mountain to save his mother is given to Shi Hao in the perfect world (this paragraph at least changes the structure of the Shi Kingdom), etc. I won't go into details. To sum up, this is a hodgepodge, and it's still raw 🤫

It's boring, so I'd better read a book with more than 300,000 recommendation votes.

Mmp. Why is it so short? Can it be longer? I feel like just looking at the catalog will do. After looking at the table of contents, I knew the content was too boring. . .

It would be better not to mention that woman again. That woman did not produce the effect you wanted. It would be better to remove it.

It was okay at first. After the Xinyue membership came out, I skipped to read it. After it was released, I didn't plan to subscribe to all the chapters with members.

Isn't it Thresh to build a lantern for Qingming Festival? 🈶🈚LOL

To be honest, after reading it for more than ten years, I really can't stand this kind of writing style written by a novice.

Authors of fairy tale novels will lose a large number of readers if they write this way. Two girls start the game, and both girls speak with Taiwanese accents, which is really unpleasant. I guarantee that if the game starts with two little boys, or a boy and a girl, both of whom have distinct personalities and know their own destiny and their own experiences, they will know how to think. They know that this stable, hard-won, worry-free life will keep them childish, smart and studious, and they will also do some interesting things to make the protagonist laugh. They will get better results than your two coquettish and cute girls. Don't have the heart of the Holy Mother, let alone establish any rules? You are very weak! You only know the realm of this world, and you don't even understand a corner of it. Just go ahead and establish rules? What is the difference between this and seeking death? The two little girls just accepted it. What did you write? Is it daily warmth? Snuggling together and telling stories at night? What are you doing? It would be great if a child who has just escaped from the sea of ​​suffering can eat enough, but he still dislikes eating noodles? Doesn't it taste delicious with meat and noodles? Are these two eldest ladies or ancestors? Can Son of Destiny write his own character? Do you have to write about someone else? Although it's a classic, are we watching you write a book? Don't always bring people into the world of Huangtian Emperor. Don't always cry and cry. The protagonist is not a Buddha. He comes and goes with compassion all day long. There is a popular video on Douyin. During the Anti-Japanese War, Taomen went down the mountain and would not return until the Japanese pirates were driven away. There was only the last person left in the entire Taomen, waiting and hoping... Taomen is not a place of mercy. This is true! My own opinion, don't complain if you don't want to complain

Not much nonsense, let's leave a claw first. Qingfeng is the most handsome and will not accept any refutation. Please improve.

I feel that the protagonist should not be a Taoist priest. He should be a monk. He should be indecisive and not say anything when things happen. Although God has the virtue of good life, it is difficult to persuade a damn ghost with good words. Throughout more than 100 chapters, the protagonist has never killed anyone in the true sense. The people below have killed people, and they are also evildoers. He even ran to pray under the Sanqing Statue uneasily. Really, I think he should not be a Taoist priest, but a monk. But Buddhism still has the Angry-Eye King Kong! After reading so many chapters, I feel that he is not even as good as his apprentices.

I said this book is obviously my favorite genre, why didn't I read it? It turns out that I was poisoned by Pangu Kaitian. You, a Taoist, are not afraid of Sanqing dying if you engage in Pangu Kaitian.

Is it particularly poisonous? ? ? Very good. . Why do you all say poison? Except for the name of the apprentice that the protagonist accepts (actually, after watching it for a long time, I won't think it's a drama), and the scene of Mr. Twelve (this is really poisonous... So embarrassing...), It's pretty good. . . Especially when I was only in the fiefdom, it was quite exciting. I can feel that the author's skills are gradually improving - it is obviously much better later on, and the daily life with the apprentices is not so awkward. I hope the author's writing skills will get better and better. . . Actually, I think it would be nice to not have a female protagonist, but it would be a little awkward if there was one. . Also, the author will add more updates! ! ! 😒

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Can't you just write a Taoist story that makes people feel relaxed? Do you have to talk about love? Belittle the ethereal feeling of Taoist priests?

What nonsense are you writing? Are you promoting Taoism? Or insulting the Taoism? Please write about other religions? Don't catch Taoist and try to trick him?

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