Guangchengzi went.
Foreign Taoism
They all rise and fall with the snowflakes in Kunlun,
Leave a piece of middle-earth behind
A few touches of blood...
Evil, heretical, or orthodox?
Rolling around in the secular world, or practicing outside?
His original intention is simple - to live well.
Faced with the shadow of disaster and the arrangement of fate, Lu Anping embarked on a path that no one expected, carrying a mysterious talisman of unknown origin.
Welcome to this world!
Reader comments
Can the author make money by abusing the owner like this?
Should we read them one by one?
Did the author go there for the Mao Dun Literature Prize?
Want to write about an ordinary world?
Volume 2, Chapter 9 is handled too bluntly. For the sake of a weird monk who said a few words, he offended the most powerful sect of cultivating immortals today, and they also had reasons to arrest the monk. The protagonist directly beat up the disciples of the sect. What will happen next?
My whole body is full of fatal diseases, and I have also been infected by a cup worm. If I have the skills and don't take the time to practice them, I will either find a way to cure the disease and get rid of the cup, but I will still run around here and there? Still in the mood to be nosy? It looks frustrating!
I'm not a noob, I'm okay in all aspects, my writing skills are pretty good, there are a few flaws, I abuse the main character for a very long time, I'm a broom star, I have too many cultivation theories, the plot... I'm looking forward to your next book.
As a newcomer, the author's writing is not bad. It has the flavor of a classic fairy tale, which is interesting and has no flaws. From the perspective of the novel itself, the protagonist is a bad guy, the plot is flat, and the characters from various righteous cultivation sects are worse than the demon sect. Only the protagonist or ordinary people have good intentions. It's really weird.
Very good writing and concept, but the heroine persuaded me to quit. I hope the author can write about a world without female protagonists. It feels awkward to see love in the world of Xianxia. (Personal opinion)
Pujiewen in Pujiewen.
Well written 👍, new book and new author, please update more at a stable time every day in the early stage. Use updates to attract more eyeballs. The more people read, the more motivation the author will have to write.
Caught an unpopular good book😁
Welcome everyone to support, discuss, collect and recommend. The follow-up will be more exciting.
The writing is great~
The characters become more fleshed out as the plot progresses, and the plot is also very interesting. I look forward to more chapter updates.
Support! Come on, author~
Due to personal habits, I don't read books continuously at the starting point, but this book "Fu Tu Ji" is highly recommended, so I clicked in to read it when I remembered it. I also read many chapters one after another. There are many detailed descriptions worth reading carefully. I hope the author will continue to persevere~~ Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
The writing is really interesting. Don't give up, author. These are all slow-burning. If you write, I will definitely follow you.
The writing is too trivial, with a lot of cultivation experiences and experiences, making it seem like this is really happening, which makes the whole story progress too slowly.
The latest chapter focuses on group portraits, and the writing style is still very good. It seems to be a turning point in the story, but I feel that the scene is there, but some of the emotional foreshadowing of the characters is missing. The author will continue to work hard~
The writing is good, and there are so many details about cultivation that readers can travel through the book and become a master. The protagonist's intelligence is lower than ordinary people, and his emotional intelligence is not particularly high. I look forward to your next book.
The first volume was obviously very well written, but damn, at the beginning of the second volume, the main character was causing trouble everywhere, and there was something wrong with the protagonist. Then the monk committed suicide, and you haven't cleared up all the nonsense. Why are you going up there? Are you going up there to deliver it? Based on the protagonist's aura?
A dog licker is still a mentally ill dog licker. I am speechless.
The introduction is quite good, I haven't started reading yet.
Read book reviews before reading to avoid wasting time
"The Book of Talismans" is very similar to the author's book. The magic talismans suppress ghosts and monsters. You can read it if you have nothing to do
The sword knocks on the gate of heaven, mortals shed blood, practice swordsmanship, and kill decisively. Please send me a wave of support from all Taoist brothers. Thank you, thank you.
Is Zhang Lingxiao going to become a Buddhist? Then you have to be careful with all the Taoist priests, this thing can really excite them.
Why is the cover of this book exactly the same as "Sky Heart Survey"? It's just a mirror image and the color has been adjusted.
After reading this review, I can quite understand the mood after finishing a book. Familiar names are gone, a story comes to an end, and everything is moving and quiet... Hahaha, I won't wait for this book to be updated, just wait for the next one~
The author keeps up the good work and looks forward to a better next one~
Huh. The author might as well start a new book, I'm optimistic about you
Need to improve writing skills
Looking at the two halves of the Du'e Bronze Talisman shining with dark gold light, Lu Anping gently stroked the sword wound on his shoulder blade and took a deep breath:
"Then..." (Brut, not showing respect)
"What's going on with the Demon Cult? (What??????? ;
I really don't understand how many times "then", "um", "goodbye" and "this is life" appear in the article? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
The above is obviously a better way to write a narrative. Even if I write the word count this way, there are only a few more words. The result is half-written and half-white. I can't stand it after reading half of it.
Can the author make money by abusing the owner like this? Should we read them one by one? Did the author go there for the Mao Dun Literature Prize? Want to write about an ordinary world?
Volume 2, Chapter 9 is handled too bluntly. For the sake of a weird monk who said a few words, he offended the most powerful sect of cultivating immortals today, and they also had reasons to arrest the monk. The protagonist directly beat up the disciples of the sect. What will happen next?
My whole body is full of fatal diseases, and I have also been infected by a cup worm. If I have the skills and don't take the time to practice them, I will either find a way to cure the disease and get rid of the cup, but I will still run around here and there? Still in the mood to be nosy? It looks frustrating!
I'm not a noob, I'm okay in all aspects, my writing skills are pretty good, there are a few flaws, I abuse the main character for a very long time, I'm a broom star, I have too many cultivation theories, the plot... I'm looking forward to your next book.
As a newcomer, the author's writing is not bad. It has the flavor of a classic fairy tale, which is interesting and has no flaws. From the perspective of the novel itself, the protagonist is a bad guy, the plot is flat, and the characters from various righteous cultivation sects are worse than the demon sect. Only the protagonist or ordinary people have good intentions. It's really weird.
Very good writing and concept, but the heroine persuaded me to quit. I hope the author can write about a world without female protagonists. It feels awkward to see love in the world of Xianxia. (Personal opinion)
Pujiewen in Pujiewen.
Well written 👍, new book and new author, please update more at a stable time every day in the early stage. Use updates to attract more eyeballs. The more people read, the more motivation the author will have to write.
Caught an unpopular good book😁
Welcome everyone to support, discuss, collect and recommend. The follow-up will be more exciting.
The writing is great~ The characters become more fleshed out as the plot progresses, and the plot is also very interesting. I look forward to more chapter updates. Support! Come on, author~
Due to personal habits, I don't read books continuously at the starting point, but this book "Fu Tu Ji" is highly recommended, so I clicked in to read it when I remembered it. I also read many chapters one after another. There are many detailed descriptions worth reading carefully. I hope the author will continue to persevere~~ Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
The writing is really interesting. Don't give up, author. These are all slow-burning. If you write, I will definitely follow you.
The writing is too trivial, with a lot of cultivation experiences and experiences, making it seem like this is really happening, which makes the whole story progress too slowly.
The latest chapter focuses on group portraits, and the writing style is still very good. It seems to be a turning point in the story, but I feel that the scene is there, but some of the emotional foreshadowing of the characters is missing. The author will continue to work hard~
The writing is good, and there are so many details about cultivation that readers can travel through the book and become a master. The protagonist's intelligence is lower than ordinary people, and his emotional intelligence is not particularly high. I look forward to your next book.
The first volume was obviously very well written, but damn, at the beginning of the second volume, the main character was causing trouble everywhere, and there was something wrong with the protagonist. Then the monk committed suicide, and you haven't cleared up all the nonsense. Why are you going up there? Are you going up there to deliver it? Based on the protagonist's aura?
A dog licker is still a mentally ill dog licker. I am speechless.
The introduction is quite good, I haven't started reading yet.
Read book reviews before reading to avoid wasting time
"The Book of Talismans" is very similar to the author's book. The magic talismans suppress ghosts and monsters. You can read it if you have nothing to do
The sword knocks on the gate of heaven, mortals shed blood, practice swordsmanship, and kill decisively. Please send me a wave of support from all Taoist brothers. Thank you, thank you.
Is Zhang Lingxiao going to become a Buddhist? Then you have to be careful with all the Taoist priests, this thing can really excite them.
Why is the cover of this book exactly the same as "Sky Heart Survey"? It's just a mirror image and the color has been adjusted.
After reading this review, I can quite understand the mood after finishing a book. Familiar names are gone, a story comes to an end, and everything is moving and quiet... Hahaha, I won't wait for this book to be updated, just wait for the next one~ The author keeps up the good work and looks forward to a better next one~
Huh. The author might as well start a new book, I'm optimistic about you
Need to improve writing skills
Looking at the two halves of the Du'e Bronze Talisman shining with dark gold light, Lu Anping gently stroked the sword wound on his shoulder blade and took a deep breath: "Then..." (Brut, not showing respect) "What's going on with the Demon Cult? (What??????? ; I really don't understand how many times "then", "um", "goodbye" and "this is life" appear in the article? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? The above is obviously a better way to write a narrative. Even if I write the word count this way, there are only a few more words. The result is half-written and half-white. I can't stand it after reading half of it.