Control the Heavens, Time and Space

The plot is either copied from the original work or other fan fiction. Even the protagonist's behavior, work, psychology, and logic are all pieced together. It's more assembly line than an assembly line. It's disgusting.

The poison of Xiaoao is that you have no sense of being an official. If you fail in politics, you should not write about officialdom. When you kill thieves as an official, you are afraid of getting into trouble. Everyone knows that when an official enters the government, you can still kill the official and bury his body. When assassinating the number one scholar in Songshan, he actually swallowed his anger and buried the assassin instead of mobilizing an army to encircle Songshan. Let's not talk about shooting the vulture. I just sat with my butt crooked and went to the Mongolian side. I saw Hua Zheng was taught internal skills, and then I saw Hua Zheng teaching internal skills to foreigners without keeping his promise, so I just gave up without saying anything. If the three views are not correct, I will be angry to death.

In the early stages, the protagonist was at least involved, but in the middle stage, it was basically copying the plots of other novels.

Looking at the table of contents, you can tell that you have no motivation to read on. It's a serious headline-grabber, talking about high-level martial arts and gods and demons. As a result, it has written about three or four worlds of low-level martial arts and medium-level martial arts in martial arts novels. Fengyun can be regarded as half of high-level martial arts. But to be honest, others have written about these worlds countless times. They are all badly written and have no new ideas at all. How can people be motivated to continue reading?

I'm tired of reading Jin Lao's and Tang Dynasty and Qin Shi. Many people left after reading the catalog. I should write about less popular items. I also saw the catalog and was too lazy to look through the book 😏

It's a huge parallel import. Is the entire section copied from the original work? Do you dare to skip it or edit it?

I've finished reading it. It's well written. I hope it can be updated soon.

I was really poisoned. I just sat and watched the girl being raped. Anyway, decency is really poisonous. I don't know what happened next. Anyway, I gave up.

Are you sure this isn't a hype about the strongest boss in the world? Some paragraphs just changed the names, they are excellent 🤭🤭🤭

I came here for the introduction and left after seeing the catalog.

The world in the introduction is so powerful, I was the first to write about Swordsman,

The writing is good, but the violence became a bit stronger after arriving in the Tang Dynasty. The overall quality is good, and the quantity is also quite good.

You are clearly writing about shooting vultures, licking Mongolia, and licking yourself to pieces. Do you think it is the Han people who read more novels or the Mongolians? Just cut it, there's no point in struggling.

Labor and management came in looking at the introduction and retreated looking at the catalog! Swordsman = Gaowu? The divine eagle=god and devil? Ssangyong = Coiling Dragon?

Let me just say this. The protagonist experienced two worlds without a female protagonist. In the third world, he found a female protagonist and gave birth to a child. This female protagonist was tricked into sleeping with one of the three men he slept with, and she was a fan. , She also gave birth to a daughter to the man who was obsessed with her, and she is seventy years old. The protagonist must have strong tastes. The most interesting thing is that since you married the heroine and had a child with her, then is it really okay for you not to take revenge on the two men who cheated on the heroine and the man who was obsessed with her? However, all the protagonists don't care about nothing, they have never thought about it

I wanted to criticize this book, but I was too lazy to say it. It is neither literary nor martial. I copied a paragraph here and there, and had no theme line of my own. I had no idea what he was writing about. He went back and forth all day long and had to start from scratch every time. It was simply retarded.

In the Ming Dynasty, a Songshan sect assassinated the protagonist, the number one scholar. The protagonist retaliated and buried the body, and then did nothing. I accepted it.

He also gave Hua Zheng to practice martial arts. Would Temujin kill him if he saw it? Or should we let the Mongols capture the Song Dynasty? Forget it, don't watch it, it's boring

I just want to see this part in the name of the people. The result is still missing

There is nothing bad about this book, except for one thing, which may be due to the recent trend that anyone who can pass through the Condor must accept Hua Zheng as his disciple. I really don't understand. Can't you understand such a simple thing? At that time, the Song Dynasty and Mongolia were two hostile countries, just like China and Japan. What is the difference between accepting a Mongolian princess as your apprentice in the Song Dynasty and accepting the Japanese Emperor as your apprentice now? Doesn't the author know about the crimes committed by Japan when it invaded our country? Or do you believe that the Mongols at that time would be merciful? I don't believe that when the Mongols invaded the Song Dynasty, they killed fewer people than the Japanese. What does it mean to be so sympathetic to the enemy? No more words, abandon the book.

The protagonist likes old women, like Swordsman, The Condor, Tang Dynasty, and Fengyun. The protagonist accepts Zhu Yuyan and Mrs. Ao. The quantity is not large, but the taste is too strong and I can't stand it. I seriously suspect that I am a wife, but it will affect the image of the protagonist, so I will settle for a wife without a husband.

What the hell, why is the new volume gone?

It's better to make Wang Gu's father feel better. You can't bear to watch this. A sixth-grade official of the imperial court was assassinated, and the body was buried after the counter-attack. I was also drunk. If I had any brains to write normally, I would first file a case with the prefect and use it as an excuse to launch a wave of Songshan sect. After all, the imperial court is the largest, right? It's written in a mess, and the main character has no sense of existence. Can those who promised to give me a group account and take me to earn some cigarette money?

The author's explanation of the three thousand worlds is really unbearable. There are actually three thousand. It's really uncomfortable.

No wonder your grades are so bad. You are not good at three things, not good at history, not good at geography. You are copying original works and other people's novels. You are awesome. Come on, keep copying.

Can I say that I only read one chapter... I don't know why I am being stupid, the plot has not changed, I have no goals, and I am ungrateful to my parents and master. In the first world, the parents were in their 40s and they didn't marry or keep a wife for the rest of their lives. In the second world, they entered the Chongyang Palace at the age of 6 and stayed in the Chongyang Palace for more than ten years. They didn't even get any affection at all, and they still smiled bitterly. Being the headmaster was not what they liked. Knowing so much, it is also good to leave a disciple for Chongyang Palace to pass on. I can only say that the protagonist's parents and master might as well raise a dog and be better than the protagonist.

Nowadays, there are many infinite flows that travel through the world without any new ideas at all. Basically, they start with Swordsman of the Deer Cauldron or the National Martial Arts of the Republic of China, and then go to Yitian to Shoot the Condor and so on. Then there is Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty (those who go to Huangyi Martial Arts basically only write about this), then Fengyun (basically they can also write about this), and then they may write about the world of online novels, such as Yangshen, Zhetian, etc., There is really nothing new at all 😰

The Great Desolation was written too early. There is no Da Luo in the Tomb of Gods and Star Transformation, let alone Hunyuan. Da Luo transcends time and space and transcends the world. He is the master of the Hunyuan Dao and reflects the heavens. The Great Desolate is the top world, Tai Yi among the five innate Taiyi.

I can't stand watching Xiaoao even before I finish it. I can't stop complaining about it! Anyone with any brainpower can't read this book.

The protagonist is just a talkative man, okay... He shouts that the Southern Song Dynasty cannot be saved because the Han people are not passionate. What will happen if everyone is like a dragon? You should do something. You have been in the Quanzhen sect for decades and have no sense of existence. The only change is to copy Shaolin. Shaolin has been closed down and you can learn from Shaolin? This protagonist is useless.