The World of Naruto That Begins with Drawing the Sword

I gave up after seeing the chapter where a little girl was killed with a knife! I can't accept such darkness! It feels like the protagonist was a murderer before time travel!

How should I put it? The character of the protagonist at the beginning is still calm and a bit funny. Later, the writing becomes darker and darker, and he starts to enjoy himself.

Just so so, in Chapter 22, the protagonist takes out two swords in three seconds. The captain with the strength of an ANBU jounin couldn't avoid it.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it: How should I put it, it feels a bit confusing, the subject matter is okay, but the content is quite confusing, it doesn't have that fascinating feeling, and I have no desire to continue reading. To put it simply, it is not sticky and cannot retain readers. I think the strength has increased too quickly. Another point that is criticized is that the protagonist's character changes all the time. Before, he was said to be relatively indifferent, and then suddenly he became that kind of extraordinarily out-of-the-box character. I was very confused, the details were poorly written, and many of the plots were very meaningless. The number of water words is fine, but the number of water words must also promote the plot. You can cut off many plots without affecting the reading. I really have nothing to say. I can only say that this book is barely average. It is readable, but it is biased toward beginners. Even an old bookworm can read it if he or she wants to kill time.

It's very interesting. Please give me more support, author.

This book collapsed There is already Slim in the Ghost Country

I finished reading it in one sitting. How can I put it, the book is okay, but it feels too confusing, the strength growth is unreasonable, the character development of the protagonist is unstable, although the sword skills are very dazzling, and I know the source, but it is too complicated, and the combination is a bit gaudy. Then the protagonist's strength is said to be a jounin. He can beat Jiraiya, kill Orochimaru, and become an ordinary jounin in seconds. Let's talk about the shadow, but he is powerless against Shisui. For me personally, this book is, well... Useless. If I can take a look at it when I'm short of books, and let me collect and update it, there's no need for it. This is the first time I write such a long book review, because I really like the image of swordsmen in anime...

Personally, I think it's too messy, has too many bugs, and the character creation feels like it was pieced together by several people. The author writes wherever he thinks. Toxic... 

I don't have any books to read, so I'm going to prepare Shen Nong to taste the herbs. Brothers, I'm on 🙂

Obito's strength is underestimated by many people Ninjutsu: comparable to Madara's fire escape training, Uchiha fire formation Taijutsu: slightly better in fighting Kai who doesn't open the door, and fighting Kai Kakashi Nine-tailed Naruto for several rounds. Missing a flaw, he knocked down Nine-Tailed Naruto with one blow Illusion: Controlling the Perfect Jinchuuriki Yagura for more than ten years Coupled with the invincible divine power (except Kakashi), Obito is worthy of being the one to challenge the Uchiha Security Department.

I don't have much money, so I can only support the genuine version 🤫🤫🤫

Didn't Itachi kill the entire clan? Why is this person so popular?

Sorry, author, I really can't stand it anymore. The character of the protagonist is completely broken The powerful ability has hidden dangers The ability without hidden dangers is not very good The original character design is confusing A bunch of people calculated and calculated, but found that there is no problem at all after jumping dozens of pictures, which is equivalent to nothing happening The protagonist cheated a lot all the way, but he is still a younger brother The existence of the system is written, but I don't know where it goes later Dozens of swordsmanship, swordsmanship, swordsmanship, and swordsmanship are annoying to watch. In the end, they are still only at the shadow level, and they have to rely on the Sharingan to fight. I don't know what the use of these things is. Is the system so rubbish? Is Naruto so hopeless? The combat power system collapses? The latest chapter sacrifices the protagonist? Human confusing behavior? Farewell!

The character gradually collapsed, even becoming disgusting. I admire the author's creation of the protagonist's character at the beginning, which is calm and decisive. However, after only a few dozen chapters, the main plot is mixed and the writing style collapses.

Come on, I have given you 2 recommendation votes every day and monthly votes. Most importantly, I am chasing seven or eight books at the same time, and I have given you all the votes and fully ordered them. Come on, come on.

Unless you never use the Sharingan, don't look down on Uchiha while using the power brought by your bloodline

There is no problem if the strength increases too quickly, but if Shippuden doesn't work, let's make up the main line of the Boruto manga. The main line of the Boruto manga is that Ji Xian, the boss of the shell, (that is, Kaguya's leader: Otsutsuki Ishiki's weapon) beats Nazusa at the top of the game throughout the whole process. All kinds of meatballs and Amaterasu are absorbed by Otsutsuki's "wedge". Zasus was kicked out of his complete body Susan, and Na Luduo was knocked out of the Nine-Tails mode by his punch. That's enough. For post-production arrangements of this level, we will then create some new, more bt-like Otsutsuki tribesmen. Finally, use the simplest method: change the map to the head office, right? New maps, new plots, new tasks, new characters, new NPCs. New reputation. Just like opening a new version of wow. Otsutsuki Zusei, author, do you understand what I mean? 🤭 Also, can I join the group if I tip 1,000? 🤭

I've reserved four monthly passes and seventeen recommendations for you. I won't be posting more chapters tomorrow. Sorry.

The second generation is actually very considerate. He himself said that he was not targeting Uchiha but all those who might cause harm. It's just that Uchiha is more of a threat among these people. Danzo completely inherited this point of view from the second generation and turned this opposition to an extreme because of his lack of strength.

As we all know, the lower the Japanese hold their swords, the stronger their sword energy. When you encounter a Japanese crawling towards you, just run away and don't look back.

I personally don't know much about the swordsmanship masters in various works. I have been pondering writing this book. I would like to ask all book friends to tell me about the strong swordsmanship and swordsmanship in their impressions. There is no limit to novels, animations, movies, history, etc.! I personally have collected dozens of them and will choose some interesting moves to write in the book.

The plot fell apart from the beginning of the village rebellion, and it became increasingly weak later on. It felt like it was a forced change of the plot, which was very awkward.

Forget those breathing techniques, it is not pure swordsmanship, Miyamoto Musashi, Kojiro, Yagyu, Kenshin, Okita, sword against sword, heart against heart. Naruto doesn't use swords very much, Sasuke doesn't, he relies on Sharingan to predict, Futazuki is not good for kidney-deficient men, Kakashi's father died and came home without blood, only the samurai from Tate no Kuni who overcame the reincarnation of the dirty land had two brushes, but committed suicide.

I just finished reading the first chapter and I can't help but want to complain about it. Drawing a knife 10,000 times in two years. According to the real-world work system, eight hours a day, 250 days a year, it is 4,000 hours. In other words, the protagonist draws a knife 2.5 Times an hour and works 9 to 5 to rest on Saturdays, Sundays and all statutory holidays before time travel. . . If you only need to practice for two hours a day for a task, you will need to draw your sword ten times an hour. . . It's so hard 😒

Skin it down

It's a very strange novel. It feels like the author wanted to write a pure swordsman, but he always inadvertently lets the protagonist show off his temperament. The first 20 chapters are really messy. The protagonist's personality changes repeatedly. It is said that swordsmen should not rely on external objects, but in real trouble, they still rely on lottery draws to survive the crisis. One moment he said he was afraid of death, and the next moment he suddenly became inexplicably brave. Did you not design your character well from the beginning? What's more, what makes the whole book feel weird is the tone. If it's serious, be serious, if it's conspiracy, be conspiracy, if it's funny, then be funny. It's not impossible to mix a variety of elements, but you also have to do what you can. If you don't have enough writing skills, don't take on this porcelain job. Isn't it better to write according to the original outline? Why do you do this and that at one time and end up in a mess and extremely confused?

After the village rebellion, it basically collapsed. He cultivated Itachi, turned against Itachi, used Sasuke and Naruto as tools, and didn't take anyone or anything to heart. He was a complete traveler with no theme, no outline, and was against the entire Naruto world. I don't know what you are going to write. I regret subscribing to 200 chapters.

Demon Slayer's breathing method, water, thunder, etc. Are all special effects. Maybe it can be improved. For example, the breathing method of thunder is combined with thunder escape, and the change of properties is added. Wouldn't it be faster and stronger? Oxygen just sinks into the body. Without combining with other training systems, the upper limit is just that. After extracting all the breathing methods, you still have to integrate your own breathing methods. There is natural energy in Naruto, and you may be able to combine it with breathing methods for your own use. Walk, sit, and lie. Everything you say and do is integrated into the breathing methods. Wouldn't it be great to abandon chakra and fall into the embrace of natural energy?

It was a waste of so many points. It was okay in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, I couldn't understand what the protagonist was doing. He was as inexplicable as a mental patient.

In the later stage, you can learn Yagyu Kenkage's Ten Thousand Gods Tribulation, Ren Piaomiao's Sword Thirteen, Miyamoto Souji's One Sword without Regrets, Qiao Tathagata's Zhi Ge Ryu, Xuan Hu's Sword Killing Technique, and Kuzhou Yifandu's Dream Bubble.