My Apprentice Is Invincible

Hello, author, when I saw the old viewer leaving, when everyone around me was denying the existence of the old viewer, the portrayal of the protagonist's heart may not be enough. Maybe your plot has a deep meaning or something. I personally feel that the old viewer, a character who occupies an important position in the protagonist's heart, is in the world. When the world is negative, there should also be some moments when emotions are out of control. This is my humble personal opinion. It is undeniable that the writing is very good. I hope the author can have better inner portrayals of the plot and better think about the psychological changes of the characters. Finally, come on, author, I hope to have a better understanding.

Hey, I originally thought it was an ancient setting, but I didn't expect it to be a modern setting.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book that's so palatable. At least for me, whether a work is worth reading does not depend on how exciting the plot is or how unfamiliar the nouns are. To put it in a rather pretentious way, reading a person's work is actually using this pair of eyes to see the world in the author's eyes. If you can give me enough vision, then you are worth reading. To paraphrase a sentence from the Tao Te Ching, "The Tao can be taught, but it is not Tao." A good story is not about preaching, but about integrating what you see and feel into reality. To use language and words to describe a complex world is like using stitches and threads to piece together a beautiful picture of mountains and rivers. Not to mention how complete you are, at least it is not out of shape. I just saw the paid chapter. It's not surprising that your book is not popular. There is a rule called the 28 rule. I don't say how accurate it is, but it just applies here. What you show is a complex world that is closer to reality. But even in real life, how many people can handle the complexity of life? To make an analogy, I have basically learned mathematics, but how many people like calculus? But there are few people who like it. Is it because I am not good at calculus? It's just too difficult for most people. If you are just trying to generate income, then of course you can write whatever you want, how to use one-liners, and spoofing fast food will always have a larger audience. But in Jiang Shouzheng's words, money is enough. Making money is to exchange for things that make you happy. If you only know how to exchange happiness for money, then isn't it like sacrificing the original to seek the last. Finally, the book is very beautiful. Whether others like it or not has nothing to do with me. I like it very much.

As an experienced driver. Although I have read so many articles. But this is the one that makes me feel the most regretful. The writing is very good. The plot is a bit cheesy but usable. Tickets are presented.

This book is very good, keep up the good work💪

Do you understand philosophy? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)╯♂

Oh my gosh, I can finally leave a message, hahahahahahahahahahahahaha, thank you all for your support, hehehehehehe! Come on!

Can the heroine have one? There are relatively few things to watch now, and I think adding a female protagonist will make it more attractive (the reason why people are dismissed is because the writing is not good, and once it is written, it will not persuade people to leave, at least it will attract far more people than to persuade them to leave), and if it is not added, the character of Yao will be very embarrassing. Well, let's go and recommend it. I feel that your book has great potential. Finally, can you add some details 😜?

If there is no heroine, there will be no heroine But you portrayed Yao Qian to be the same as the heroine. I really like this character, and then you separated the two of them in college and made it without a heroine. I didn't want to watch the rest of it. . .

This feels okay... But why are there so few people... It's a pity

I feel there is no need to deliberately mention the lack of a female protagonist as a feature. You can have one or two female friends, but they don't have to be together. Anyway, you have the final say at the end. Invincible Everyday Life is already very interesting and should attract a lot of people, but mentioning that there is no female protagonist may turn some people away.

It's the first time it's topped the list, although there's nothing special about this top spot...

I would like to make a suggestion, in a group portrait novel like this, can you add dividing lines or mark the locations when changing scenes? Sometimes I feel confused when the preface and subtitles suddenly don't match. For example, husband, are you sick? While watching it, I was stunned for a long time and thought, isn't Ye Cuilian single? Why do you suddenly have a husband? . .

Add refinement to 👴. 🤫

I don't want to say how good it is, but it's comfortable to read. At least it's better than many routine articles. It's a little fresh and refreshing. It's good. Keep up the good work and work hard to update.

Author, is this serious asthma? Two words, one comma, I'll put it in my hands. I listen to a book at work, and I feel like I'm stuck in a book, just like having asthma. 🤫🤫🤫

I feel that as long as it is publicized, this book can become a god! (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

The paid supplement has reached 59%. To be honest, the character of Fei Xiaochuan and his sister were not well portrayed. The author probably wanted to portray two children who are sympathetic and caring. But for now, these two children are becoming more annoying the more they are portrayed. First of all, Fei Xiaochuan was at the fire scene My sister had already been rescued, but she still wanted to bite the uncle who was trying to protect him, and never apologized. Is it nosy to protect you, and you deserve to be bitten? Faced with his mother's discipline on his younger sister, he directly took cover and let his younger sister escape in front of her mother. Is this how Fei Xiaochuan respects his parents and educates his younger sister? For example, Fei Xiaochuan's sister sold the gift from Jiang Shouzheng to buy a footbath for her parents. After knowing the cause, the chicken soup afterwards was not impressive at all. 1. Take the initiative to collect "valuable items" from others. Second, if you run away from your mother's discipline, is this respecting your mother? Third, take the gifts given to you by others and sell them for money. With this in mind, how does it feel to then patch it up and say that you care about your parents? For example, a Putian doctor defrauds patients of money so that his mother can receive medical treatment and his son can study. If it's wrong, it's wrong.

Some personal opinions There are too many branch lines and it jumps too fast. Sometimes unnecessary branch lines will affect the reading experience. Most of the branch lines are half-written, making it uncomfortable to read. Some of them can be ended quickly, and those that do not contribute to the plot can be omitted. The protagonist's subjective initiative is too poor, giving people a feeling of laziness. As a result, the main line is not clear, and the plot can only be pieced together by branch lines. Since there are heaven, Shangqing Sect, etc., The main line can be clarified, which will give people a better feeling.

I received a reward after fully booking. I wish the author to work hard and write better. I would like to ask if I can help you get better!

There is news that the author met a drunk girl when he went out for a late-night snack and took her to the hotel. Then you will understand 😏😏😏

It's pretty good, although it's a bit bland, but that's all it suits your appetite.

It looks good, but there are still a lot of pitfalls, come on! The author fills in the holes well

The author's introduction and content are different, but the novel suits my taste 😃

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Woohoo, I couldn't find it after chasing it on the browser for a while in junior high school. I also looked for it in the middle. I came across it by chance when I was looking for Invincible Streaming after five years.

The writing is really good and the writing style is also very good.

Stop guessing. If you want to know the author's love story, please join the group.

I've been raising it for a semester. Is this raising me to death?

I discovered good-looking works late. The author only has one work. I have recommended it to several groups. I hope the author will return and keep up the good work.