The Great Fisherman Farmer

Author, the subject matter of your book is very good and the content is good, but the main reason why it is not popular is that there are too many family dialogues in the article, which is too wordy. It looks very tiring, like writing a running account, and there is no practical information, just like watering down numbers. I hope it will be corrected later!

Hai Nong: I looked at the catalog and couldn't find anything about Hai Nong! The table of contents is not written well. With so many books in Qidian, readers will not read every one. I just read the title and table of contents first and then read the contents of the book.

I just read five chapters, and there are two main problems. One is that there is too much nonsense, and it is too verbose. The other protagonists resign and go home and take it all away. Even if there is a bloody plot, it only takes a few chapters. But this protagonist has nothing to do, and it takes five chapters to resign and go home. It is still the first five chapters! The second thing is the dialogue, it's so embarrassing, it's so plain and simple even if you don't talk about it, it's also very embarrassing!

The whole thing is just a running account. If you have plug-ins, you don't have to rush to the sea every day. You can cover a fishing ground, put the fry, shrimps, and crabs in the heart of the ocean to strengthen them and raise them in the fishing ground. The money will come without any hesitation. When you have money, wouldn't it be better to build the village properly?

I have read twenty chapters. Except that I live by the sea, it has nothing to do with the sea. It is all about daily routines!

The current updates are once in the morning and once in the evening. Because I have work, I can only update twice a day now. I will update more when I have time. The author basically works during the day and takes time to code at night. He is not a full-time author, so please understand the slow update. Because I spend two to three hours drawing and writing two chapters every day. Please understand each other~ I also ask for your support to ensure that this book will be completed. It is almost the middle and late stages of the first volume now, and there are more exciting contents in the second and third volumes waiting for you. Thank you for your support^_^

How should I put it? The opening chapter is too long and meaningless... And then the real story comes. Goldfinger raises the fish and puts them back into the sea to increase the harvest of the villagers. Let the villagers catch them... I really have no appetite. If it's not the villagers, even if they catch 100 million catties per net, what does it have to do with you??? I won't thank you at all, I don't understand your thinking, and the public content is useless, so you just let everyone buy your VIP?? What courage?

The sea! You are all water! Less water! Give readers a way to survive!

Go to bed and stop writing. You have committed too many taboos in writing. People cannot read it and you are still tired. Let's talk about the most fatal part: the first article is too long and does not distinguish between the main and secondary plots. The diagonal descriptions that should be written in detail are not in place and the summary should be summed up in one stroke. The article is long-winded, the plot is repetitive, and it is full of errors. Secondly, the literary quality is not enough. Although the white text does not require too much rigor, it is not a verbal essay. It is written in a pale and feeble way.

Boss, you have a lot of daily conversations. I feel like there is no need to say it. It doesn't need to be too much. It seems a bit embarrassing and verbose.