My Sister Is the Best in the World

I originally thought it was pretty good. The combination of girl control and fairy hero is indeed relatively novel, but the comment area is a bit messy. The author should take care of it. And regarding the article, I do feel that the author did not combine the two themes well. The focus of the sister-control article should be on the relationship, whether it is heartwarming, funny or sadistic. However, in this book, I feel that the proportion of plots about the relationship between brother and sister is getting less and less. If you look at it as an upbringing, it's not warm enough, and it's a bit violent. Then there is the Xianxia type. In addition to the power system, the highlights of this type of book should be on cultivation, monster fighting and upgrading. The power system is very concise and yes, but you don't seem to follow this power system properly, and the monster fighting and upgrading do not reflect the highlights. In general, I personally feel that the author failed to grasp the focus of these two themes and did not take the essence of them. Instead, they occupied each other's space, and neither side was satisfied. If the author is not a trumpet vest, the writing is indeed okay, and the requirements cannot be so high. There is also something related to Shen Yong. It is okay for the author to borrow this character, isn't it Gou? There are many such protagonists, but don't reappear Shen Yong's shadow too much (whether in character setting or plot). The Fairy King Next Door is a lesson learned from the past. The comment section of that book originally exploded due to plagiarism, and then various deletions and bans were forced to suppress it. Then it was unexpectedly animated, and then the comment section of station B exploded again. These suggestions are quite sincere, and the post should not be deleted. What is the difference between a discussion and a book review?

This book is very interesting. . . . If the author can improve it well, it might become a classic! Come on!🥺🙏

The post was deleted by mistake, please repost to explain clearly. I personally suggest that the author reduce the interaction between siblings and focus on the plot. In the future, as the audience expands, everything will be available in the forest, and it will be easy to be targeted by various trolls. They say that the author is stupid after reading Japanese comics, and it smells like a Japanese light novel. They catch the author's mistakes and output them for a while, and finally create a crazy rhythm in the book review area. Some people say that what I am saying here is completely wrong. This novel is originally about a girl who is obsessed with it. What else is there to read if there is less interaction between brother and sister? Can't tell if I'm really stupid or fishing? Looking for a sense of presence? Are you just a hammer? You control your sister but don't write about your sister? Indeed, this book is about the theme of girl control + immortality. Most readers are still attracted by this. The author has a great imagination and can come up with such an idea. ——Hey! And this kind of novel? Is my sister the golden finger? It feels good, I will collect one first. There are many readers with this mentality, and I am also the same. Otherwise, I would not be active in this chapter of this book. Friends who often read this chapter should have seen it often. What's going on here? What's going on? Do you want to watch your favorite author's novels being trolled to death and remain indifferent? Scold with those people? Wasn't God born to me as a keyboard warrior, and how could I spout about the eternal night? Fighting against a bunch of ZZs doesn't lower your IQ. Then make a post and suggest that the author minimize the risks in this future, and then one or two people take it out of context and set the pace, and then a group of people come up and beat up the lost dog. (What the hell, so many people are criticizing him, I will also step in.) I am the spokesperson for the novel. The rhythm of the plot is not very good now, and the plot is also advancing. How about writing a brother-sister interaction for you in Zhangzhang? The protagonist stays at home with his sister every day to increase his relationship. After staying at home for seventeen or eight years, he achieves great success and conquers all the wastelands to dominate the world. The book is finished. If there is no plot in the novel, then what is the point of reading it? emm, after reading it carefully from beginning to end, hey! Isn't this just a piece of writing about cultivating immortals? This novel is not the kind of girl-control novel I have read in the past. If you take it seriously, you will lose. Thank you to those who have persisted in reading this far. I hope we will not regret it when we reach the end of the road. If this book doesn't collapse, it will definitely become a hit. Poyin. Jpg

Come on, this book is perfect now. The author should relax and don't worry about the plot. You have to understand that this book is not a mindless yy harem novel, and not so many noobs will like it. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is also very likable, except for one thing. If you can avenge yourself on the spot, don't overdo it. The plot like Juexian is pretty good, but the comparison in terms of strength is a little blurry. I don't have a clear understanding of the protagonist's strength. After all, the protagonist has too many tricks up his sleeve, and we readers don't know either. Last point, the positioning issue. This book was destined to be a niche text from the beginning, either because readers prefer it (girl fans), or they are old readers who are not taboo about meat and vegetables. Compared with business literature, the audience will not be too wide. It will also bring a lot of criticism. The author should take this path and maintain his original intention. After all, I think that writing this type of novel must first be a work that the author likes, thinks and is interested in. Come on! So far, I don't think it will be a rush. If the plot doesn't jump out later, at least the results won't be too bad.

If this book doesn't catch on, it will definitely become a hit

If my sister gets married, she will turn from pink to bad in minutes!

The subject (title of the book) is younger sister, but you are not an orthopedic surgeon, so what's the point of writing like this? Isn't this a blatant scammer coming in to slaughter her😱

It's not easy to find a high-quality book in Qidian, a place where no-brained and cool articles have become popular, so don't complain about any bad points. Everyone has their own opinions, and I didn't find any bad points in this book. The author must stick to his own ideas when writing the article, and try not to accept too many suggestions from the audience. Although I am personally a girl-controller, I prefer articles in which the protagonist is weak or has no strength at all, but has extremely powerful supporting abilities. Well, although I try not to consider other people's suggestions, I still expressed my thoughts 😆

The safety of my sister has been threatened, but the protagonist, a girl-controller, is still cowardly? If you continue to be cowardly, your character will collapse and I'll tell you.

If you don't write about girls well, what kind of immortality will you be cultivating all day long? ? ? Ask yourself how you came up with this name and introduction. Ask yourself seriously, why did we click in? ? ? Don't lie to yourself, be a good girl and control your writing, don't talk about things that are not fancy. It's 2020, are you still cultivating immortality? After 996 blessings, do you still dare to become an immortal? Do you really think you are immortal? (refinement🙂)

Dapeng talks about fire books, come on

I added sister control to the relationship between the characters. If you want to see sister control, please like it and let the author see the will of our sister control party.

Can you please stop letting the male protagonist pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger? I don't believe the author. You don't know that if you pretend to be a pig for a long time, you are a pig. If you still pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, is it a wild boar? You keep emphasizing that the protagonist is a waste, but I feel that the protagonist is really a waste.

It's a surprise that my sister falls in love with the senior brother who is disguised as a man, and by the end of the book, my sister doesn't even know that the senior brother is a woman.

If you want to read about falling in love with your sister, I recommend you to read Japanese light novels or play galgames. The author has said that he is not orthopedic, so you should respect the author. As for a brother like that does not exist, I just want to say one thing, a sister like that does not exist either ah ah ah ah 😭😭😭

One thing to say, from the beginning, it was a routine that everyone despised the protagonist, so I quit immediately. After using this routine for so many years, you still don't have the brains to come up with new routines? Holding on to it for dear life is wrong.

It's rare to finish a sister-control novel in recent years. The feelings from the beginning are very pure and beautiful. It's a breath of fresh air among sister-controllers I don't know since when I started talking about sister-controllers, I must overthrow (orthopedics), at least I personally don't like it Iruma "Sister Life" in the human world made me see a different kind of sister control I remember a big brother said: without the entanglement of blood relations, the story of brother and sister seems to have lost its soul I hope that the author's new book will also be a biological sister🤓😜

You said you don't have orthopedics and you don't have a wife? Is the East undefeated?

Seeing that my younger sister won't marry my older brother and they are still just siblings, I posted a comment and then withdrew it.

Looking at the introduction, does this mean that the younger sister will be a virgin forever, and the male protagonist will be a virgin forever? The younger sister will not marry and the older brother will not marry. Could it be said?

Yoyo, not to my liking 😃😃😃, author, come on

If you don't want to get married and you don't want to get married, how can you say that it's not orthopedic? The family relationship must first be established in such a way that both of them are non-marriageists. Otherwise, how can it be justified?

This is very good. It's good for both orthopedics and non-orthopaedics. The audience for sister novels will definitely not be very high. It's good that I can persist in finishing it.

I just added it to my collection today and was promoted 😠

What is the relationship between Chen Changqing and Chen Feng?

So, is the protagonist cheated in some sense? Doesn't the fiancée like him? (Inside the character tag)

It's a very good novel. Although it's a little bit poisonous, it's only a little bit. There are a few novels nowadays that are not poisonous.