The Warrior Emperor of the Plane

Is this just taking the outline and publishing it as a novel?

I have finished reading the first volume and would like to express my opinion. I feel that the author has written a good outline. This is the first time I have seen a novel written in this way. I read it very seriously. It took me 15 minutes to read the first three chapters. If it were a different author, the first volume could have written at least 1.5 Million words. To be honest, I was very tired watching it, and the plot was very tight.

? ? ? I can't understand... Why does it feel like there are dozens of chapters missing? What the hell is at the beginning? You……………………

Just pick a chapter and read it. Are you writing a game guide?

Poison, since things can be carried! After becoming the richest man in the world, wouldn't it be nice to directly develop various high-tech weapons in reality in the second world, and directly push him to become the emperor of the world? What kind of trade is there with Portugal? ? ? ? Be sick! Even if you can't carry that much stuff! Wouldn't it be nice to just bring all kinds of real-life high-tech materials there? This is poison! In other words, my brain is flooded!

Can anyone tell me when Junzi's Six Arts became the most important? ? ? I'm confused

When will it evolve into a second-shift beast?

Mainly I don't like watching mythology, whether it's TV series or movies, I just don't like it

Why is the latest chapter so confusing?

I don't know what you are writing or expressing. There is no plot at all. It's like reading a history book

What the hell, you're looking at it in a daze!

I didn't read it. I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction. What does it mean for modern people to travel through time? Is it a very low behavior to practice martial arts? ! Which modern person has traveled through time and doesn't want to practice martial arts?

What the hell is this? It's so confusing.

The author came out to be beaten. Do you still want to write down the book? Is it interesting to praise an old and fat man as a god? Ying Zheng is just a human being, but he is a myth. Where do you put the protagonist? Super warriors, lords of a country, martial arts masters, etc. Are all fake. Then who are you writing about? . . . . . See you again

The author, with your literary talent, shouldn't write this type of novel. You should write a self-narrative, which is just to tell a story, you know, just like "Tomb Raiders Notes" and "Ghost Blowing the Lamp", the writing style is great! Your time-travel writing is too much like prose. To put it bluntly, it is a well-written running account. I feel like reading your book is like reading a Chinese textbook! This is a suggestion, a suggestion from readers, please think twice!

After looking at the table of contents, the protagonist unified Eurasia during the Southern Song Dynasty? And hit Oceania?

It's such a mess, I can't even see the country number even if I want to.

It's full of typos and confusion, and I'm convinced. .