The Road to Mastery Among Elves

That's right, Jiangjiang is bubbling again~

There haven't been many new elf books recently. I don't like the previous PM posts. Or stallion. Or invincible. "Dark Rise of Elves" and "Legendary Trainer of Elves", these two books are the most successful. (I personally think). Darkness Rises, in particular, was the first novel that I didn't get bored of. There is no intention to pull people. I just want the author to learn from it.

It is best not to be a stallion in PM articles, as a stallion will pounce 😒

Time travel? ? Damn, Pig's Foot's behavior and dialogue look more like a primary school student than the primary school students I know.

I don't understand why the initial elves don't use Ice Vulpix? How can he create a snow witch with a 480 racial value by adding a doctor and an ice gym leader? Speechless. . Menas has written too much and nothing new. The Ice Vulpix is ​​so cute and the Ice Vulpix is ​​so beautiful. I, my Uchiha mother, call you the cutest! What do you think these days, appearance is justice?

In fact, when most people read fan fiction, they just want to see the setting of the original work so that they can write a novel that they like. If you don't come here to see the kind of harem and Long Aotian, you might as well read the book. The most annoying thing is that the elves are returned to elves, and items from other worlds must be added, such as the Burning Fruit, Naruto Nine-Tails, Chakora, infinite evolution, etc. In the novel, there is also a need to lower one's wits, which I think is reasonable and reasonable.

Since the parents didn't sacrifice to heaven, it would be great to make good use of the good pregnancy. It would be great to enjoy it while saying that you want to be independent. It's better to start with Golden Finger than offering sacrifices to the sky.

I didn't want to read the first chapter. I pinched my nose and read chapter 30. The more I read, the more I thought about it and got angrier. The first chapter was too poisonous. What kind of parents would deliberately cheat their son for an unimportant reason? Even if it's just for the mission, wouldn't it be okay to give it to a Ugly Fish and then give it to a normal elf? The main character is very unhappy and worried about not passing the exam. His parents would rather go through the back door than give him another one or change him. Is the author really feeding Shi on purpose? The rest of the writing is indeed okay, but when I think about the first chapter, I feel very uncomfortable. If someone is attracted by the golden three chapters, you will persuade them to quit in the first chapter? Forget it, I'm too lazy to say more, you happy just OK! The blocked author will never be seen again.

The author's writing is good, but why is using parents' resources considered a backdoor approach? It's not for you to use it casually, it's just for you to make reasonable use of your parents' resources to make yourself stronger quickly without going overboard.

La Ruelas why not? ? ? ? ? I gave it to you, why don't you want it? ? ? At first I gave you the Chou Ui Fish but you didn't want it. Now I give you Lalulas and you still don't want it. It's your father who said you should be content as a human being. He gave it to you and you don't want it.

The author may really be a primary school student to write the protagonist so deeply 🙂

The choice of theme and spirit is good, but the writing style and the protagonist are too childish, not like a time traveler at all. People with this kind of family will not have any difficulty in evolving the Chou Chou Fish before going to college. What makes it difficult for the Chou Chou Fish to evolve is ideas rather than time and resources. Accumulation is not very important. Menas is the beginning

Think about it, for the entire Super Elledor, a Flying Thunder God style, an Ice Six-Tailed Dragon Slayer, and a Ghost-type super Gengar, and a Fire-type Accelerator Chicken or Vulcan Moth will do, even if the Sky Dragon is too much, in the entire Kuailong plus Round Land Shark, Luka Leo and so on, the next three will be cultivated slowly. Mainly in the later stage, it will be easy to make three of them. If you write a mythical beast, you can get a small diamond or something to make a mutation. Such popular elves will attract more traffic. Most people still like elves with good looks.

How can I say that after reading more than 20 chapters, why do you not chase after the combat skills are used? You have to wait for others to react and hit you before you command. The opponent commands a set of hits and you are disabled before holding back a big move?

I quite like this book. It has parents, companions, teachers, and encounters. It can be said to be a text full of positive energy. I think it feels very good to help each other and make progress together while having fun. Moreover, the article is not an invincible text. Although it is also possessed by European gods, there are things that should fail and should grow. This is more in line with reality. After all, there is never a shortage of powerful people. Em, but it's a pity that some of the plot descriptions in the text are a bit rudimentary, and the writing style still has room for improvement. Of course, the faults do not hide the faults. At least I enjoyed watching it. Come on, author.

After reading the introduction, I want to ask, do you look down on the ugly fish?

After reading three chapters, I feel that the pig's feet as a time traveler are so rubbish. They don't look like a time traveler at all.

Those who travel through time can't even train elves, so what are they doing?

You can have a harem without a female lead, but you don't want a single female lead or a stud who fucks every girl he sees! ! !

In addition to the memory of playing games in the previous life, the protagonist's golden finger is only +100~MAX favorability of all Pokémon when they meet for the first time.

No, I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. It's really too childish. No matter the writing technique, the use of sentences or the way of chatting, they are all too childish. A college student can't write like a junior high school student. He is suffering from embarrassment.

After seeing the latest chapter, I just want to say that the protagonist seems a bit weak. Why do I think the three brothers of the protagonist are stronger than the protagonist?

Come on, author, I will keep reading as long as you write.

I am the number one fan. This is Fencheng's first novel. I am very lenient with new writers, so I directly filtered out some of the poisonous points at the beginning. For example, the protagonist traveled to the past and was a child, but he really had the same thoughts as a child. The initial Pokémon was Xiaomei. Apart from these, the rest did not matter to me. It's not a poisonous point, so I just watched the protagonist as a teenager. The plot is okay, but it's a bit rushed and not fully developed. After all, less than 500 chapters have been written, but the daily communication with Pokémon and the communication with relatives and friends seems quite comfortable, otherwise I wouldn't have watched the end. In the Pokémon or pet novels I have read, some writers like to use some memes when communicating with their partners (referring to Pokémon and the like). Some of them are very stiff, and some simply can't speak when they don't use memes. Fencheng uses very few memes, and the speech is still very natural. I feel comfortable reading it anyway. In my case, I would not write so naturally. It is still very powerful when I write it for the first time. So, if the next book is still about Pokémon or pets, I will definitely support it, and remember to learn from this experience, and the next time will be better!

? I am a long-time game fan, and I have traveled through time for 16 years. My parents are a gym owner and a researcher. My parents are sick and cheat on my son. Moreover, I go to the gym like a bumpkin. Is this the first time I see a battle field? ? ? ? After the fight, he was like a rookie, with a very obsessed personality, and lived for thirty or forty years. . . . . Where is the brain? Withdrawal, my common sense does not allow me to read any more, it will cause sam to drop.

Yujiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

There has been no update for 3 days🌚@_@

Not interested in going to school at all

Weekly update? And there's only one update a week? ? ?

Author, when will you come back to update?