
Lie on the Tip of Your Tongue and Become an Immortal
躺在舌尖修个仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Reading Miscellaneous Talk (1)
I recently returned to the starting point and found out that there were new investment projects and new books, so I casually browsed through them and came across this book that was recommended. The first thing that attracted me to this book was the concept of 'eating' in the title. Read the introduction again. The food is very interesting. There are all kinds of strange animals listening to the class. This way of eating is quite novel, so let's take a look at the text. Finished reading the first chapter. To be honest, it didn't make me want to continue reading at all. 1. The opening scene description is used too much ink, taking away the limelight of the storyline itself. 2. The content has been deleted and modified in order to meet the requirements of the library, resulting in an incoherent plot. 3. Trying to convey the point of view implicitly through some details, but the few words revealed are difficult to resonate with readers. 4. The entire chapter does not get to the point, and only briefly explains that Goldfinger is a "selection system". I continued to read the following chapters with the mentality of being patient. The second chapter really gave me a little surprise - unlike the common human-to-human transmission, the carrier after time-travel is a strange beast. Every reader has different interests and tastes. I happen to be very interested in the strange animals and objects recorded in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas", and I really want to see what kind of world the author can create in which animals and humans coexist. At present, due to various reasons, I only read one or two chapters every day. I have only read more than twenty chapters now. I have finished reading the starting point of the story and have a little understanding of the background of the world. I feel that the overall speed of the development of the story is a bit too fast, which results in the specific parts being thin. More effort can be spent on this aspect. Okay, that's all I want to say for now. I'll post it if there are any new methods after taking another look.
The layout is great, I love it.
I'll sort it out and post some book reviews later.
Author, are you okay? Have you read your own book reviews?
It's too fake. He didn't say a word.
Is Cyan Big Cotton the author's trumpet?
Mr. Roasted Wings improves my book review posts, and I check the contribution of my circles.