Covering the Sky and Sheltering the Sun

The sky is covered and the path to immortality is over. From now on, there will be no immortal star, and it will be dyed red in thousands of years!

Hee hee, come and watch, come on

The writing is good, the plot is exciting, interesting, and the sense of immersion is okay, but it is a bit streamlined, but it is quite relaxed and enjoyable. I originally thought it was a Zhetian fan novel. Come on, author, keep it up and don't forget your original intention.

I invested 10,000 points, the beginning is great, I hope it will continue and write a masterpiece 👍

The writing is good, it has been collected, please visit again!

Then I'll give you two tickets. You can follow others like crazy, and then people will read your books.

It's a great start, and the pen name is also very interesting. What does it mean to fall out of love again? I hope my return visit will not hurt Zhongyong.

It's a pity that I didn't sign a contract, otherwise it would be easy to reward me

If you have already invested, please increase your efforts. 😰

Why didn't you sign a contract?😳

Happy New Year🙂🙂

This introduction is a bit too much. It's so dense that it's a little confusing. It could be simpler. You don't need to write the introduction so clearly. Once it's over, readers don't have to read it, they can all figure it out in their head. For the introduction, just give a brief summary, there is no need to write so much.