Supercomputer Intelligent System

I've read a few chapters and the plot is good, I recommend it.

I recommend it. I feel like I'm making progress. Keep it up.

Some people read that they are just raising books 😥😥 I hope they don't run away.

I haven't seen what I want to write yet, but the name is a bit attractive to me. I think it's okay. Don't be too awesome all at once. Consider the background of the pig's feet and control the plot development a little. If this ape excrement can get alien technology, learn the things in the early stage of wretched development and add a reasonable plot arrangement and then use it to start a company. Don't be blaming the sky and the earth at the beginning because you really can't stand it. Technology is also a part of life. Being half a step ahead is a genius. If you are too ahead of the curve, the ending will be tragic.

To be honest, I don't have any objections to the author. After all, writing a book is not easy, but after reading seven chapters, I wanted to know what it was about? In the 21st century you wrote, *** has come out. Are you sure that the main character graduated from high school and worked for two months? He is a primitive person from somewhere, and there is too much nonsense. It is even more ridiculous that the system wants to make money from you. Your money is no problem on the Internet, but you are living in reality. Just look at it and it will come out. You can obviously ask the system to develop something to sell money and make the first pot of gold. Why are you setting up a trap here? Come on!

The beginning is not bad, I suggest you revise the first chapter, it's the golden three chapters! Catch readers' attention as quickly as possible, but it lacks a bit of freshness! Two or three are not bad! Come on and encourage each other

Are there any book lovers reading this? Can you give some encouragement and advice to new authors?

The soldier in "Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" loves to learn, so he collected the two books and gave the author a 👍

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I read Chapter 12, nothing special

Why is it so hard to write scientific and technological articles now? Can you do it step by step like fighting monsters and upgrading, with people as the main player and golden fingers as the supplement?

Cultivate beauty first, don't be a eunuch 😁

Why are there only 10 chapters left? Should I delete them and rewrite them?

Thanks again for the suggestions on my work, which also helped me make up my mind to revise and improve the prologue. The work is very creative and the subject of human-computer interaction has always attracted me. I have only read the first few chapters and have a few suggestions for reference only 1. Kuaisu, there is an extra word "quick" 2. Bustling is mostly used in the market, and it is more appropriate to use the word endless to describe frequent visits to the store 3. Looking at the first chapter, there is no foreshadowing or suspense except for the main character, which is that the Apple mobile phone is very good. When buying a mobile phone, should you consider introducing the subsequent plot or conflict as early as possible in the first chapter. 4. After reading the next few chapters, I hope to improve the paragraphing. There are many long paragraphs, which is not conducive to the reading of the app readers. I did the same before, and I also modified the paragraphing after the guidance of the master. I am also a new author. Thank you for your pertinent evaluation of "The Creation of the Era of Reincarnation". I have started to modify and improve it, thank you! Communicate more and make progress together! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง