I, Who Refused the Devil's Contract, Am Only Level 1

Hello author. I came across your book accidentally and only read the first chapter. Let me briefly talk about my feelings. I think the first chapter is a failure, it is too long. Yes, for an online novel, a chapter of nearly 30 pages is indeed too long, not to mention that it is the second most important part of the novel (the first important is the end of the novel). The opening chapter is the curtain of the novel's story, and it is the emotional tone of the novel. Whether the novel takes a relaxed and humorous route, or whether it is domineering and sinister, a weak person's counterattack, or anything else can be seen from it. At the same time, this is also the first step for readers and editors to contact the quality of your work. What readers look at is the degree of attraction, that is, freshness. There are endless similar novels in Qidian. There are so many choices. Why should readers read your book? What they want to see is whether there are any novel points that can capture the readers' appetite. The editor's vision is completely different from that of the readers. The editor mainly looks at your literary skills, because what the editor really wants is a book that people will keep reading and that can bring profits to the website, not a book that only has good gimmicks but poor writing. Today's online editors have to take care of twenty or thirty authors, and most of them will only read the first few chapters of those unknown authors. Why do some books get signed after they exceed 10,000 words? Excluding some great writers who have familiar editors, newcomers rely on their writing skills and their ability to sign contracts. It would be too far-fetched to talk about this, but I think it is still necessary to put this bad rhetoric up, because the author, your writing style really needs to be improved. If nothing else, you can at least sort out the punctuation marks. For example, there was a paragraph that I thought you had accidentally misplaced, but when I looked back, I found that it was all wrong in one place (I have pointed out the specific mistake to the author in this chapter). Let's go back to the issue of the number of pages. There are nearly 5,000 words in 30 pages. The part about the birth of the devil is indeed interesting, but when I looked at it, it was gone! What, so you want the big devil to show his face? The idea is right, but the chapter is wrong. Just add a wedge at the front of the text to let the main villain appear. Otherwise, it is a stupid mistake to try to create two main characters in the first chapter. There is a principle that applies to most novels - the first chapter only needs to stand up for the protagonist, and all other characters have to stand back. All the words and ink are used on the protagonist, allowing other characters to take away the protagonist's role. Even the protagonist cannot stand up, let alone other characters? The title of the first chapter is to simplify it and establish the characters. In fact, the number of words should be controlled to twelve or thirteen pages. There's nothing else to say. You don't need to have good writing skills to write a light novel. It's good to make the text as concise and beautiful as possible. By the way, I don't think the first-person issue mentioned in the comment area can be generalized. I once saw an author write a very good novel using the first-person perspective - "Super Thriller Live" written by Yu Wen Changgong. The title of this author's book is very familiar, right? Let me tell you, this author is now a great writer of supernatural novels. He is called Air Conditioner. He has written the book "I Have an Adventure House" and made the niche supernatural genre popular. So there is no unified standard for literature. What I said above can even be overturned. Even if you don't follow the standards I mentioned, you can still write extremely well. Even in literature, there are many people who do not follow routines. People who only follow fixed routines cannot write good stories at all. If someone says that they have fixed routines to write good works, that person is actually being a hooligan. Maybe you will find me verbose and say what kind of stuff this person writes, a troll? Are you here to scold me? You dare to criticize me after reading only one chapter? How could there be such a person in this world? Please don't rush to criticize me. I am writing so much because I am free. After all, there are too many idle people in this world, and you can't care about them. Speaking of online writing, because you can't make much money from it, most of the people you come into contact with are people who love literature. If the author is willing to listen to what I have to say, my grades will definitely improve if I write the first chapter well. After all, I have many words and my words make sense...

There are more collections, more and more recommendation votes, and rewards have begun to appear. It was so exciting just after signing the contract. (ಥ_ಥ) What can I do if I can't sleep? I sincerely thank you all. I will persevere and continue to make progress in the process of writing books. Recently, I have gradually found the feeling. Thank you readers, it's great to have you by my side ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪

The honorary achievement of the first work has been achieved, and it has been updated continuously for 30 days. Thank you to every reader, thank you (*°∀°)=3 Thank you, It is you who have given me the motivation to continue writing. I will continue to work hard and update~ Writing is very happy, but it is very sad when I can't write well. Sometimes I write If you don't want to go on, just look at how many book friends you have started with →_→ One less, look at the recommendation votes 😭 or those benefactors, look at the fan list 😅 and see if you are there, look at the chapter reviews 😏 there are still some, and look at the replies 🤫 there will always be them. Although I don't want to write, I have the motivation. As I write, I feel more energetic and can't stop. . . . . . 🥺 Just another chapter!

→_→I heard that express delivery was delivered? ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪Hey, you discovered it~ (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ It should have been posted long ago! (^･ｪ･^) Newcomers who are inexperienced are always afraid of writing the wrong pen name. After many times of practice, I understand a truth. (ﾟДﾟ)ﾉDo you still make sense when writing a pen name? (●°u°●)​ "You can't make a name for yourself, it's you who will be fooled. criminal. (▼ Pan ▼#) Got it, please be more careful with your signatures in the future. (*￣m￣)What should you pay attention to? (ಥ_ಥ)Don't write your real name wrong again. -_-|| ......

The second investment fell into the trap. Who is chasing the investment? (It seems that someone also chased the investment in the previous book)

I'm quite optimistic about this book. I hope the author can insist on not being a prisoner.

Why is the title of this book the same as the previous one that I lost contact with? Author, didn't you say to create the world?

It will be released tomorrow 🤭 The third volume officially begins. If you take a walk through the monster forest, you may make new discoveries. Thank you for your long-term support.

Happy New Year, the author still remembers me?

Come on, the New Year is coming soon. Write more and save it, and upload one chapter a day when you don't have time to write during the Chinese New Year. Otherwise, it will collapse if you stop updating.

{"NickName":"The quality is not too good","UserId":340016360}The author, have you castrated this book?

Good morning, come on 🤭