Police in Hong Kong Movies

It's a pity that although I really wanted to find a Hong Kong drama and police fanfic that was written in a more logical manner, there were too many flaws in each book, so I had to give up because I didn't want to suffer. This book was so self-contradictory that I couldn't look straight at it.

When I read Chapter 6, before I even returned to the police station, I started talking next to the drug criminal as if no one was watching. The clues and identities were exposed to the prisoner casually. You know, the criminals in the movie kill people as casually as they drink water. Is this really good? Can't we just talk after we go back to the police station? Could you please stop being so anxious when writing the plot? Very poisonous.

The first time I met Chen Jiaju, he actually called him Uncle Long... How old is the author? Is it because you are too young or have you watched too many cartoons?

Almighty book lover, can anyone tell me how much the 19 million Hong Kong dollars in the late 1980s was worth, and how to spend it specifically?

Please evolve into Dorgenmon🤓🤓🤓

The plot is dull and scattered. The sixteen-year-old policeman. The most poisonous thing is the strengthening potion. Ordinary people can increase their physical fitness by at least 5% after a week of reasonable exercise. A bottle of high-end strengthening potion can only provide 0.01. Come on, one hundred kilograms of strength can only increase one kilogram. Suppressing strength cannot be suppressed in this way. The ability to draw a gun is less than 0.1 Seconds faster. Is this considered a golden finger? The troops are faster than the protagonist even if they train casually, and the 0.1 Second is for the world's top masters. The protagonist is so scumbag. The attributes in 0.1 Seconds are almost the same as in 1 second. It is difficult to reflect. The author's IQ is eaten by 🐶. Bye, I dare not read it.

This kind of novel actually includes a supernatural movie, which is totally wrong.

After reading more than seventy chapters, I just can't stand it anymore! As a policeman, he can't even figure out his wife's identity, but he realizes that he is a prostitute! I don't want to climb up, I can't even control my own destiny, I only have food and shelter like dogs, and I still wander around!

This book is awesome. According to the plot of the movie, the heroine should have been tattooed🐍. Anyway, I watched the movie and watched the plot. I couldn't stand the poison, so I quit. It's really rare for a male protagonist to like being fucked.

After reading three chapters, it's just the author's own pleasure, but it's actually very painful! Shennong has fallen!

The heroine was kidnapped by a smuggler and tortured (this is what happened in the original movie). The hero thought the heroine had run away from home, but his colleagues foolishly analyzed that she must have been kidnapped. The kidnapper called and found out that she had been kidnapped, so he obediently paid the money and asked his colleagues to follow the smuggler to rescue the heroine. Unfortunately, the heroine was already bruised and maimed. After being caught, the kidnapper tried to escape but was shot to death by the protagonist's superb gun skills that had just been upgraded to the system. The heroine cried out with tears in her eyes that it hurts down there! Damn it, if you can watch this, I will convince you

Hello author, after reading your work, I suggest you take a look at how Xu Yifan, Xu Sri and Detective Luke became policemen.

After reading Chapter 6, I admire those who can read it and still say that this book is good.

I would like to give you an opinion: Since you are writing about the system, can you write down the skills, items, etc. In more detail? It's like strengthening potions. If you didn't write about shooting criminals, who would know that you used them on pig's feet? Skills and items should be used in writing, such as the skill experience of pig's trotters, usage process, adaptation process, strength evaluation (such as using medicine, how many people can the skill be used,), etc. Only in this way can the sense of substitution be strong, just like we ourselves substitute pig's trotters. When we wait for the ability items, we will definitely find time to use and experience them! Another suggestion is the plot layout: at the beginning, Chen Jiaju didn't know if there was any foreshadowing later (I just saw Chapter 13). Pigfoot suddenly returned to daily life after being given the account book and the information about the traitor. There was no explanation of Pigfoot's psychological changes and plans for the future or participation. Another example is Ghost Mission. Pig Knuckle has obviously seen this movie, so why didn't he make preparations? After killing the criminals, Pig's Feet felt cold when he left. Regarding time, there were some jumps. The words that often appeared were that time flies so fast, and when did it happen in the blink of an eye, and details were not included, such as psychological consultation, Pig's Feet's personal laments, feelings, etc. So, author, can you write with a clearer logic? An intuitive summary is: Did you write based on movie clips? Each movie is not seen fused together! Segmented experience You may write about these later, but you can't fragment them in the early stage! Come on

I was drunk, and the protagonist shot the criminals in the head, whether they were in uniform or not. Are headshots and normal kills the same? If you get a headshot every time, you will definitely be suspected of being a psychopath by the police. During the target practice training, you will be shot in the chest, not the head. The protagonist has not been suspended from work to take psychological tests, which is also the protagonist's halo protection.

It looks uncomfortable. I can't read it. I can read all the books on this subject and like it very much. However, your book feels too messy, too bland, not interesting, and has no priority. I have deleted it. I hope to improve it in the future. This subject matter is quite good.

Some words to the author: I just read Chapter 62. I really liked your writing style, but around Chapter 60, including Chapter 60, I was drunk when I read it. It was good at first, but why did you create such a cuckold plot? In fact, even if you don't write these, no one will say anything about you. To be honest, I also want to write a novel, but my brain's thinking logic is too messy. I really admire you authors, but what you write is not a long H novel. Why do you write this green plot? Isn't it good to be a serious author? Write well, I rarely subscribe to other people's books. If your book is on the shelves and you can make some sense and stop fooling around, I will order all of it. You don't need to care about my opinion. I just hope there won't be any pornographic articles. It's really uncomfortable to watch, especially when you know the character of the original plot. I thought that there should be a snake behind the protagonist's girlfriend, but you changed it again. When it comes to reading, it's a good book if you're happy to read it, and it's better to watch an pornographic movie if you're frustrated by it.

It's really embarrassing to watch the plot always be forced to subdue the intelligence 😅

When the heroine knew that someone was following her on the first day she ran out on purpose the next day and was caught What would happen during the arrest Cuckold story?

I said Big Brother has almost 200 chapters. The protagonist is a little fucking police officer. If you continue to sleep like this, I don't think you can reach the superintendent even if you get two thousand fucking sheets. When will he be able to become one? Commissioner of the Royal Hong Kong Police Force. Ah! Author, you are too stupid.

Just kidding, there is no main line, it's a mess. He has made so many meritorious deeds but has never been promoted. And while he talks about taking power early to change Hong Kong's colonial habits, he always gives the credit for solving crimes to others. He is still a little fucking police officer.

Specifically writing about poison?

Strengthening only adds 0.01! Such a rubbish enhancer!

I suggest you learn from the world of movies. What you wrote at the beginning is completely uninteresting to read! It's a good idea. But your choice of movie is very problematic. I guess most people have never seen the movie you chose! The beginning of the police story is good, but what the hell is this crazy police station? Don't talk about people born in the 90s. I haven't watched it since I was born in the 80s.

Damn it, the author definitely owes the online loan and was definitely bombarded with phone calls!

I can see that the people behind are all strong people. After reading the first chapter, I feel dumbfounded, especially the section on the bus, Shen Jingbing

I hate this the most. A good Hong Kong real-life crime movie isn't enough for you. You have to bring in supernatural movies. Jiuwu Takeba

The author writes that the main character in his book likes to play games! No love experience! The reality reflects that the author is young and his writing skills are average!

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By the way, I entered the palace before I even started watching 😰