Douluo: the Peerless Jiraiya

20 Long chapters! Chapter 20!

How do you say it? It's so long-winded in front of me.

Since everyone is reading this book, everyone should know that Jiraiya doesn't need to describe it in such detail in the early stages. It's too tedious.

No matter what you write, brother, as long as you are a member of my Zhatian Gang, we are friends. Zhaotian Gang is awesome!

The cover is nice, but everything else is trash. That's not me criticizing this book. It's just trash among trash. You might as well write pornographic books, they're better than this.

The writing is inexplicable, it is simply made up out of nothing, Chen Cang secretly imagined and fabricated it out of thin air. It can be said to be extremely disgusting, and the disgusting interpretation is taken to the extreme. I really don't know how to write it.

Meow meow meow! (Zhaotian Gang is gathering)

When Jiraiya touched Tang San's butt. I really doubt they are gay. Suddenly I feel like this development is pretty cool. The attributes of fujoshi show up.

😄😄😄 The Zhaotian Gang is here. The author has read that novel.

Wow, what are you writing? I can't understand it at all.

The introduction was well received, but the content persuaded me to leave. . .

As long as the cover is chosen well, a gentleman is indispensable.

Come on, author, if you want to become a god, you must first ensure stable updates, and secondly, the number of updates is also key to attract popularity. At least if the number of updates is large, there will be a gimmick to attract more people. After all, this is a fan novel that you are basically reading for old bookworms. What worries old bookworms is that there are few updates, and the content is You must have a certain amount of innovation to gain fan loyalty, so if you really want to be popular, you must first think about your own reader positioning. This is very important. What positioning you have depends on the author. There is a big difference between whether you are a bookworm or a novice. In recent years, most of the starting points of the subject matter have been basically written badly. Nowadays, The books that are popular today are all unique in style. This book still has a certain audience. The language is more concise and the plot is more compact. Don't add some inexplicable settings. Some settings are very abrupt and not very friendly to the reading experience. The plot can be advanced faster. It is already 60 chapters and it is too long before the protagonist even has a martial spirit. Some, besides, if the author is going for the fire, he should do more research on the readers' preferences and not write too high. It is taboo for the author to write too high. If you add too many settings in the early stage, it will be very discouraging. The settings should be added slowly. Don't think about writing the settings all at once. This is not the way to lay the groundwork. Come on at the end, the author is optimistic about you✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

The first forty chapters are okay. What's going on in the next forty chapters? I'm so confused.

What the hell are the first dozens of pictures? Why can't I understand them? Is it because the way I opened them is wrong? ? ? ? ?

There is also a novel about Zhetianbang