The Master of the Brave Man Is the Devil

The author writes well, but there are a few points that need to be noted: 1. There are too many typos. 2. Dialogue and psychology sometimes do not include quotation marks. The above will affect the reader's reading experience. 3. You can think more about the text. 4. More foreshadowing can be added to the plot design. The above will increase the interest and foreshadowing of the story. Overall, this is a high-quality light novel that has put a lot of effort into by the author. I have been following it and I give it a recommendation vote. I hope the author can adopt my suggestions. At the same time, I will put forward suggestions in this chapter while reading, and I hope the author can take a look. If there is any misunderstanding, please ignore it. (ง •̀_•́)งDaddy! (Japanese, come on)

I feel that the ideas and emotional lines of this book are very clear, and it is a rare masterpiece that I like. I think a good novel is not just YY. The characterization of the characters, the story line, and the bond between the characters are all the highlights of this novel. Although the memory erasure part is a bit blind, it does not affect the viewing experience. I feel like it would be more natural to write this connection in another form.

I frowned when I first read this book. A lot of typos and grammatical errors gave me a headache, but there was nothing to read. I could only bite the bullet and read on, but I didn't expect that it turned out to be very good despite these shortcomings. The story's visuals were so strong that it made me feel like chasing anime. I couldn't stop watching it all night... The main line of the story is travel. Every time I go to a place, a story unfolds, but they are all related. I can feel that this is a big game, and the characters are also very well drawn. Although there are some facial makeup characters, it is understandable. In the end, it can only be really good, if you can endure the messy and perfunctory text at the beginning and continue reading. You will find that the author's ability to narrate stories is very good, but he has a sense of déjà vu that he sends out drafts every day without checking 😄 In general, it is a very good novel, and there are not many novels that I can't stop reading. In short, I wish the author can reach a higher level.

I hope the author will take good note of the protagonist's abilities (the protagonist's moves, strength, cognition, etc...), So that it won't be easy to write. Finally, there is nothing wrong with finding a novel that I like to read. .

Don't just add a heroine to the Demon King, because they are all pickled fish, sour, vegetable and redundant. Now the ones with development potential are the Queen Mother and the Demon King's apprentice, and the others are useless. First, according to the principles of their world, even if the Demon King looks similar to a human, they will instinctively reject it, so humans except Demon King There must be some gaps in the hearts of the other disciples of the king. On the side of the monster, there is the Mother Queen. In terms of potential, the two of them will be the best partners of the devil in the future. First of all, the disciple of the devil should gain very awesome power through that tower. In the future, it is certain that he will be awesome, like others, such as Talking about the eldest lady of the Adventure Guild, it is very unreasonable for someone like him to become stronger in the future. The Mother Queen can explain it better, because it is the limit of a species and simple (this thing is really coaxed into thinking of the Demon King as her husband). The rest I feel is that the pickled fish is salty, vegetable and superfluous, well, except for that There are only a few remaining (holy) girls. Among the other women who have come out now, I feel that if the devil wants to go to the realm of God, they will definitely not be able to go, unless the author opens a path for them. They will be a big help in their future growth. There are two of them, the Queen Mother and that Yuna. The others are useless and will only play a role in writing the story.

Come on author! This novel is really good. I read one or two of them at night and I still have more to say.

Extras Before the first world demon king traveled through In a small village in the human world, two middle-aged men carrying firewood sat on a tree stump and looked at the sunset and chatted. "Do you think the junior brother will kill the master?" "How is it possible? And how can the junior brother be stupid if he is chosen by the master? He should have discovered the master's identity." "Haha, think about what the master looked like at that time. I just want to laugh. He may really think that we didn't find out his identity. Do you think the master said the same lines as last time?" "No, I should change a few sentences, but it should still be so awkward." "Hahaha" the two looked at each other and laughed, and then fell silent together "I miss the master," a man sighed and said, "I miss his sweet and sour fish." "Me too I miss the master. Why don't we form a fake revenge team when the junior brother comes back this time to see how the master is doing?" "This can be done. Then we will call all the brothers to give the master a surprise." Suddenly, darkness enveloped the whole world. After a few seconds, the darkness dissipated and the two of them stood up at the same time "The master's aura disappeared." The man closed his eyes and felt the energy signal in the air. He breathed, then opened his eyes suddenly, and said "It's an angel" with suppressed anger "Go?" "Go" The two people rose into the sky, turned into light beams and rushed towards the Demon King's Castle. The same light beams appeared all over the human world, converging towards the same place For the man who took care of them in every aspect on the way For the man who changed their destiny Brave? No, they always know in their hearts that they only have one identity, that man's apprentice If you go and never come back, you will never come back.

As I watched it, I suddenly realized that this was a story about a domineering president doting on his wife on a female channel.

Why does this thing appear when searching for trainers? I just want to find some books to read! ! ! ! !

When you meet a girl, no matter how she provokes you, she will never fight back. Is she the devil? I have learned a lot 😁

To sum up, it looks good, but there are too many typos. Then there are times when I can't tell where the camera is going. Will vote for it

Hello everyone😊, I am the author of this book who doesn't often leave messages. Please forgive me for this late reply. I didn't expect that this book could be successfully signed. It's really not easy for me, so I will cherish this signing opportunity and work hard to finish it (I have to earn back the postage anyway). Finally, I hope you can leave more messages and point out the shortcomings of this book. Thank you everyone😜

Thinking about it, it has been almost two years. Compared to Reina's experience, the Tang Monk in Journey to the West is simply weak. My mother was expelled from the family when she was a baby, my twin sister was taken away, she was cursed as a child and abused by the world. Finally I met the master. Every time I study, I am in the middle of life and death. Fortunately, I have an optimistic (cute) attitude. Normal people would have been depressed a long time ago. Entering the union also experienced a life and death crisis (the birth of the Queen Mother). Thinking about it, the master could not completely guarantee Reina's life safety. After that, he traveled around the world and experienced more dangers. He narrowly escaped death several times in the Sea Clan. In the end, although he gained a huge amount of magic power, he also left huge hidden dangers. I also experienced crisis on Wude Island and learned how to change the soft dragon. Participating in the fighting arena, I don't know how many beatings I received. On the way to the Gaoshan tribe, we went through many hardships. The memory is sealed, and the way to find the master is blocked by others, and the compass is forcibly taken to save the world. He and Mr. Ball broke into the Tower of Eternal Life, devoured the evil in people's hearts, and lost the water bag and magic robe left by the master (learned space magic for the first time). Entrusted by the elves, she met the master's clone on the road. In order to solve the hidden dangers in her body, she almost died in the magic battle and exhausted the magic power left in her body by the master (she controlled the magic power in her body and learned the tower). Fighting the Aragami of Chaos Insects, I almost died, using magic power to construct my broken arm, lost blood, and injured body. In the end, Mr. Ball sacrificed himself to solidify the magic power that made up Reina's body. Fighting evil gods at the edge of the world, completely mastering the changes of the soft dragon, preliminary mastery of space magic, mastering simple curses and illusions, and losing the fire stone left by the master. Meeting the brave White, he was deceived and used once. Finally, I met the demon king's army, but was dragged by the dwarf princess to explore the secret realm. She almost died because she was betrayed. Being forced to teleport away from the Demon King, he was hunted by all mankind for several years, and learned the magic conditioned reflex. Finally, he finally met his master, but he was caught by the Queen Mother and almost killed. At the last moment, I saw the master and awakened my memory. But I don't want to say goodbye again. Afterwards, he experienced a battle with evil spirits. He was defeated by a powerful ancient warrior and almost died. The opponent was scared away by the mark of the demon king, and Rena teleported away. Save the Gaoshan clan and fight the evil spirits again. Win the desperate battle, master the divine power of the Gaoshan clan, and have the method to kill high-level evil spirits. He went to the Wusen Empire to ask for help, but all turned out to be a wall. In the end, he was deceived by Hala to help fight in the war. The battle with the evil god was lost, and the battle that decided the fate of the world was lost. Fortunately, sister Reina gave her life in exchange for a chance. Up to now, the peak power of human martial arts, the soft dragon, can be transformed, the tower of advanced methods of using magic power, the peak power of human swordsmanship has been transformed, and the strongest power of the warrior has merged and returned (countercurrent). With magic conditioned reflex dodge, proficiency in space magic, and the use of the power of the World Tree, Rena's strength has surpassed that of previous heroes. Along the way, I lost the magic robe, kettle, Mr. Ball, the master's magic power, flint, magic book, and shoes left by the master. I also lost the power of the World Tree, the power of the trident, the power of the deep sea, and the power of the God of Destruction Bow.

Have ideals, have faith, and refuse to admit defeat. (Stayed under the sea for 100 years)

It's nice to watch, but it's a bit frustrating to watch. Is this devil pretending to be a pig or has he really turned into a pig...

The accident finally came. Unfortunately, I don't even know any of your contact information. I can't imagine what happened to you, what is your current situation, why did you abandon a book that you had written for so long, and why did you delete your second book, which was obviously not bad. I have no way of knowing the ending of the story. Reina's journey to find her master can only be carried out in my imagination, but my imagination is so bold and presumptuous that it may be far from the real ending. I tried to find words from the words, carefully searched for settings one by one, tried to make the world I imagined as close as possible to the world you created, tried to find a beautiful and reasonable ending for Reina, tried to discover the past of Demon King Richard in a few words, and tried to let Reina help Richard get rid of the shadow of childhood in the future I imagined, and let his little apprentice warm his heart. Unfortunately, I can't do all this, not because the beautiful future is too far away, but because the unreasonable world is too fragile. He has built the world in his mind countless times, modified the world's settings countless times, carefully put patches on the fragile world, and picked out the logical and self-consistent basic settings and tragic scenes from the traces left by the author. However, due to lack of ability and too little background information and settings, the world was built and broken again and again. Every time I was delighted with the construction of a "perfect" world, the world fell apart every time when time started to flow. I was unwilling and helpless. I was unwilling to see an incomplete story, but I was helpless about the construction of the story. The lack of character background and unknown world settings made it difficult for me to build a world. I can only let it become a permanent regret

The protagonist seems to be very powerful as written above. He is not just attacked casually, his magic power is sucked dry by others, he cannot detect shape-shifting demons and half-demon, he is able to BB and never takes action when encountering trouble, and his combat power system is broken.

2 Years 😭

It's been 3 years. They say that if you remember me, there will be repercussions. When will you come back?