Negative Aggression

It can be seen that the author is very serious about writing a good story. The story is sincere and each character has a distinct personality, which is the most rare thing. Different from the assembly-line formulaic writing, there is no mess of embarrassing and exciting points, which is both an advantage and a disadvantage - just reading the story and not making readers happy will not work either! A few more suggestions, I hope they will be adopted: 1. Pay attention to typos 2. Add some psychological activities and descriptions of character expressions, the characters will be more three-dimensional and more immersive That's all I can think of for now, go for it!

It was too boring to vote for myself, so I stopped. In the third chapter, I wrote that I was suffering. I fought with myself at home for a day, and I was studying how to make a reasonable fight. Only 800 words were squeezed out. For a person who has only fought with my brother since childhood, oh, and also fought with other people twice, but always ended in failure, he really has no fighting experience. Maybe boys will think it is very naive, and no one has been able to discuss it so far, so I am just enjoying myself!

There is also a company called Orange Entertainment, so I'll change it to Grape. 😠

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After reading Chapter 33, I just couldn't stand it any longer and felt very sad. The author's writing style is very good, but the plot has too many loopholes. First, in the beginning, it has been determined that the protagonist Yao Manchuang acted bravely when he saved Lin Manchuan, but later he had to pay for the medical expenses himself. In fact, the society in our country is not that unbearable. Second, when the organization came into direct contact with Yao for the first time, they could meet him in countless ways, but they chose the most difficult method of kidnapping. Third, there are so many masters in the organization, but the one sent to kidnap the protagonist is a useless fat man. Fourth, a national organization offers five insurances, one housing fund and a monthly salary of 20,000 yuan in order to recruit the only person who has contact with extraterrestrial life. There are also Yao's refusal to recruit, the coincidence of his blind date with Lin slowly, etc. Is this why the author gave up this book? I hope your new book will be better.

It is a floor plan.

This protagonist's name is the same as mine, except for the surname 😰

After seeing it on the shelves, I finally couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the atmosphere in the article was very depressing, but not very exciting. This will lead to many people not being able to continue without seeing it on the shelves. Another point that needs to be emphasized is that in China, there is no need to wait 24 hours before calling the police if someone is suspected of being missing, let alone the police refusing to file a case on this basis. The author may have been misled by TV series or novels in the past, but should not spread this type of misinformation.

The plot is very tense and attractive. The writing is just okay, but fortunately there are no major problems with the plot logic. It's a pity that I just don't like it. The character creation is okay, not top-notch, but at least the character is established. It's a pity that it's not pleasing to the eye. The author seems to really want to write a story with great care, but the problem is that it's not fun. When it comes to the sense of immersion, I feel speechless when I assume the role of the protagonist. It's difficult to immerse myself in the supporting roles because they all have distinct personalities. I am also very helpless, author, how can you be so cunning? It can be seen that the author has worked hard, but it seems that the hard work has not been implemented. If you want to read novels to understand the various aspects of life and the sufferings in the world, why not read classics?

Never mind 37. Just post it on 21st and save it for tomorrow.

After watching it for a while, it's quite interesting. Come on, duck. After investing a bit, although the achievements were basically completed and there was basically no profit from the investment, it was still a waste to leave the quota there. It's a good book, but its popularity is a bit low. You should calm down and update steadily. Take good care of you.

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