Paladin Douluo

I feel that the subject matter is quite good, but the main character is like a retarded person. I couldn't stand it after reading 5 chapters 😅

What the hell are you writing? The first three pictures are completely unclear. What are you writing? The introduction and content are completely unclear. I don't know anything. The first three pictures are very important. Are you good at writing them? It directly affects whether your back looks good or not.

There are too many complaints, which seriously affects the reading experience.

Very beautiful! I want more, so I registered specifically to post this comment.

The idea is very good but there are too many poisonous points. One is that there are too many complaints (in the first few chapters), and some of them are even irrelevant to the plot. . The second is that the protagonist is not an ordinary person 🐴 He started to be unserious right after his death. Will you die if you write a sad part? And he kneels down when he sees people. . . Isn't Gou like this? I thought it was the main character who was friends with Tang San and the others, and it didn't necessarily have to be the strongest, but it had to look like a person at least, right? First time seeing Tang San, kneeling and kowtowing X3 First time seeing the master, kneeling and kowtowing X3 First time seeing Xiao Wu, kneeling and kowtowing I have seen so much. Brothers who want to read more should consider it carefully

Pig's Foot awakened his martial soul at the age of five, and practiced peerless martial arts. At level 20, he absorbed the soul rings and soul bones sacrificed for 100,000 years. At the age of 12, he was only at level 28. Is he really awesome? The author is really good at writing! Just write it down and include private goods, it's all nonsense, farewell 😰😰

In Chapter 3, Mother Fox died, and the death of a character who was not well-characterized in the first place was not very touching. But your front foot is dead🐴 and your back foot is Chapter 4: The murderer who complained about you🐴 was not good at trapping you? ? ? ? The fox who has raised you for so many years is just a tool? Is it used to deliver milk, sister, and soul ring? Not to mention the bitterness and hatred, at least don't mindlessly complain about your enemies, right?

He knelt down inexplicably, first for Tang San, then after a few chapters he knelt for Xiao Wu, md, is there any need to be so humble? It's really disgusting, why don't you take your seat? Are you losing all human dignity? Not to mention the future, in terms of plug-ins, they are not weaker than them, even in the beginning, who is afraid of whom?

When I saw the author saying that the first novel he followed was "Douluo Dalu", I remembered that the first novel I read was "Warcraft Sword Master: Another World" written by Tiancan Tudou, and I read the book version, which was full of memories. 👍

The ship girl was forced to come in, look at it and persuade her to leave.

He is so wet that I almost got cancer from embarrassment. Did the author lick too much water?

What a bunch of stuff, I just didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. You, a modern person who has traveled through time, know how to do kung fu? Goldfinger didn't even say anything about Beiming Divine Skill.

It's this kind of writing style that you think is funny again. Is there any successful precedent for this kind of writing style? I love writing like this no matter what. It's okay to write once in a while. It's the whole story. It's so embarrassing. Just write a good story. If you don't learn from so many successful cases, that's what's really funny 🤭

The introduction is barely understandable, but your writing in the first three chapters is a bit bad. In the first picture, Wuqiang briefly introduces the protagonist's life experience after time travel, which is similar to that of Tang San. But you didn't introduce how he traveled through time, and then how he got to "Douluo Dalu". It's okay if you don't write about these. Anyway, there are many authors who didn't write the second one. Then you said that he was obsessed with Jin Yong's novels, and then you said that he remembered some martial arts. Ah, there are so many flaws that I can't finish them all at once, so let's start with these. Although the author's coding is not easy, the author begs you to be more careful.

What are the fan fiction novels now? Sole Wuhun, Pan Wuhun, Keyboard Wuhun, Gourd Wuhun, Pink Eye Wuhun, Cataract Wuhun, Soul Ring Wuhun, Banana Wuhun, Bread Wuhun, Flame Spirit Girl, Kizaru Wuhun, Zuo Zhu Wuhun, Six Paths Wuhun, Weed Wuhun, Inflatable Doll Wuhun, referred to as Douluo Wuhun, the top fifteen hybrid awesome plug-in systems to become a god, only have a chance to become a god. It is only for reference of fellow Taoists, slowly try to figure it out, fellow Taoists, I will go,

As an author, you are not suitable for writing novels. What did you write about? You don't know what you are trying to do, you don't know what you want to do? Can't the protagonist's name be changed? Doctor Hu, don't you feel uncomfortable calling Dr. Hu? The first few films have been self-directed and self-acted. I wonder if I can still write a novel properly?

Look for me! There is too much nonsense in this book, and it is just a product of the author's tongue-in-cheek, for his own entertainment, and no one will scold it. Like me, after trying the poison, I decisively gave up and couldn't read it! I don't even bother to write about it, so let the author enjoy himself

Don't lick the protagonist. So licking! ! !

This is the first time I comment on a book. I honestly have no idea what the author is writing. It feels like I am amusing myself. Since it is a skill in DNF, you might as well give him a DNF Paladin system. Then he was adopted by the Nine-tailed Fox and sacrificed after the Nine-tailed Fox died a few years later. Since it is all Paladin skills, why not give him a DNF system, right? We readers won't say anything, but the way you write makes it feel like you are just amusing yourself. Messy

Why do I feel that this Douluo novel with many fans is not as good as the previous one with few fans...

The previous chapter was okay. I have high poison resistance. I skipped a few chapters. The remaining arsenic mixed with grass was barely edible. 🤫 The self-stimulating ingredients are high. It is recommended to skip and watch. From the author's perspective, don't think too much It's a pity that the past life was messed up when I saw it. I couldn't understand it and stopped. If you have a chance, please continue watching.

Okay... I'm going to vomit blood first

This book is not very immersive, maybe the protagonist is not handsome!

Because of the lack of books, I could barely hold back from vomiting for the first hundred chapters. After one hundred chapters, I decided to leave.

It's very messy and the main line is not very clear It just feels like I'm having fun with myself

Chapter 69: I really didn't get through it at first

The author is really good. I can't say anything after writing it like this. If a woman doesn't recognize you, she'll just follow a man. So what? A good male protagonist must write about emotions. If you want to simply write and write, that's fine. You are unhappy. You have to write about feelings. So the writing is a mess. The only way to save it is to delete it and change it again.

The author thought that he was very capable and could write something humorous, but the result was that the humor was not a little poisonous but a lot.

It took me a long time to react and he called the doctor

It should be renamed Douluo: My Self-Happiness