Super Copy World

The idea is pretty good, but the outline is a bit scattered and there is no main line (except for the protagonist's main practice or the important turning point of the dungeon plot, which does not require so much space, and the content will be the same as a running account). The plots in important dungeons also need to have their own main line (mainly focused on the protagonist's cultivation layout and planning, supplemented by character interaction, which does not require so much space). The most important thing is that the author needs to make up more lessons in human relations, sophistication and emotional intelligence. It may also be that the author does not have much social experience and cannot flesh out the characters. In particular, some of the dialogues are too awkward and forced to make jokes, which is the most fatal. It is easy to make the character full-bodied. You can create characteristics - personality traits, clothing characteristics, special hobbies, or performance art 🤭. Novel is not a composition. It requires not only writing skills but also a lot of knowledge to fill in the characters. The author can write it as an autobiography of the character (a person's life is very long, and the narrative is endless. The things that are most clearly remembered on the timeline are the main line of the story, and other experiences are filler). In general, this is a top-notch article by Xiaobai. The author can make it an average work

This book has a lot of ideas, but the writing is not good and it's a bit of a noob.

The setting is so bad that no other copy can work, and the protagonist can take over the world by himself. Also, is it possible that there is only one nation-state in this world and it always emphasizes national honor? . . If you don't even have an opponent, where is the sense of honor? ? ?

I'm going to give some spoilers. According to the author's description, 1. The alien's strength should be around the peak of level 5 to the beginning of level 6. If it's too high, the earth can't bear it. If it's too low, you can't tell who invades whom. 2. The Earth's copy system should be a subsystem, because the Earth system can only reach level 7, and it gets the lucky talent. It was mentioned at the time that the maximum level is 12, so after level 7 it should be the universe chapter, and the strength of level 7 can be roughly calculated. Level 8 is in the universe, and it is very likely that the earth cannot bear it, so level 8 is probably a star explosion, and level 7 is probably able to destroy the continent (I speculate based on the information I know, don't criticize if you don't like it)

I stopped reading because I was afraid of being poisoned and being punished by heaven and earth if I didn't do it for myself.

Let me do the math: I'll guess at the author's plan. One dungeon has 50,000 words, paving the way for two dungeons at each level. It is expected that after the seventh level dungeon, the extraterrestrial battle will begin, 2×50,000×7=700,000. Read more about the background of this book and don't complain if you don't know the plot. If you don't like watching, just go out and turn left. No one will force you to watch. Come on, author! Progress is a bit slow now. Low-level alien creatures can enter the infiltration point first and start the plot first. If you stick to it, this book will become a hit.

After reading ten chapters, I just want to say that the protagonist is stupider than a mentally retarded child. Was he mentally retarded before time travel? He also asked others for food. Who would believe him if you said he was not mentally retarded?

Hey, I can't stand it any longer... There are so many poisonous points, what kind of opening Lugia? Reporting things that everyone knows to the country (looking confused)...

No conflict, no confrontation, no villain. The author congratulates himself!

What is the problem with Chapter 6? Did you drag it out a bit or come into the game first? And you said it yourself before without creating a mythical beast. How can you draw a mythical beast to be funny? ! ! !

😭😭😭 Click on my avatar to see the introduction. I wish you will become a god quickly**

It can be persuaded to quit in less than ten chapters, talent, create a dungeon, you can't even have the three holy birds in the first level dungeon, and you can't catch it if you have it. According to the difficulty of the dungeon, the first season animation, the level starts, the level limit is 50, the weakening skill effect is like a fast earthquake of 100,000 volts, the upper limit of super power can be communicated with the super system, Mewtwo Dream is cancelled, the three holy birds cannot be captured, pass the level to become the champion, defeat the fixed NPC, just like the game, you can pass the level with 6 elves with level 50 attribute skill restraint

The time ratio for level 1 copies is 1:100. I feel like I don't even need to clear the dungeon. Conducting research directly in it will become stronger faster than using points to redeem things. And at this ratio. It's basically equivalent to immortality. Starts at age 10. One year equals more than 300 years. You don't need to live more than 20 years to have three thousand years of experience. This is how you practice martial arts. Practicing spiritual idealism directly is faster than anything else.

It's so childish. It's so embarrassing to watch. There's no sense of empathy at all. It's super embarrassing. The Pokemon part is so embarrassing. It's a bit like writing an essay with a friend.

I thought I was a king but turned out to be a bronze. It's so easy to make a copy and it's your turn. You are the only smart person in the world and you think that everyone else is just wood. This IQ is still at the age of 10.

Can the author of Naruto not introduce the characters? It's so annoying to watch. Who doesn't know about Naruto now?

This book is written for kindergarten children😅

The dialogue is too awkward and the plot is too cliche.

Um, I thought the subject matter was good and novel? Now that I have read the Elf chapter, I feel like it is an infinite stream that has been re-skinned and is trying to sell its skin. (It seems to be a universal dungeon, but in fact it is the protagonist himself. It is like replacing the system of Zhutianliu with a cj dungeon system. It is said to be a universal dungeon but it is actually a one-man show.

Ugh, running to a level 4 world to be Tang San's servant at level 7 has lost his mind.

I don't even watch Pokmon. As for the new system of martial arts, why don't you first use Fengyun Zhuxian and others to perfect a path to reach the sky? As long as you practice your system, it will definitely continue to bring you benefits. Look at the system you wrote, Pokémon? Think of it as pet style, then Jin Yong's heroes, martial arts style, then Naruto, ninjutsu style? Bloodline? The donkey's head does not reflect the horse's tail

Chapter 72 Wang Yuyan probably persuaded a large number of people to retreat.

Brother, come on, work hard! I am also a late night snacker. Persistence is victory.

It's too yyy and has a running account with no plot. .

The author hasn't played Legend in decades? The dragon-patterned sword and the bone jade are just one level apart from the dragon slaying. Can you forget it?

The copy and the reality are passable. As the author, forget about your life experience. Just wait until you can leave your name in history and then publish an autobiography.

I gave up when I saw that I was a brother to Linghu Chong. Although the writing is not very good, the concept of the book is still very good! But I don't like Linghu Chong.

I'm a reader of books, and this novel sounds weird. How should I put it? It's probably stiff, and there's a lot of nonsense. I don't want to read the combat plot. I have to say it twice about the skills. The subject matter is good, but the writing is very discouraging.

As soon as I saw that I could redeem characters, I was immediately poisoned.

Why write about Japanese devils? I can't stand it anymore when I see it.