Lord Madara, Please Read It Again.

The beginning was good, but when I saw Itachi appear and there were so many vests in the back, I felt jumpy, just like the infinite flow. I feel like the author can't handle this kind of book that combines youth literature and online writing. It's really against the rules to force it into writing. I don't know if it's a problem with my level or something else, but I can't see any main thread in the book. It should be that the author just wrote whatever came to his mind. After reading the beginning, you can feel that the author should have thought carefully when he started writing this book, but I couldn't understand what he wrote later. I always felt it was poisonous, and I gave up after reading more than 90 chapters. Just express a vague opinion.

It's quite to my liking, the plot of the clones is really good, and this kind of interaction is quite interesting.

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The subject matter is really novel, and the plot is also very good. The last time I saw such a sweet plot was in Ninja World Writer. Unfortunately, that book got 404. Come on, author, you must not be a eunuch.

Can you set up a female protagonist?🙂🙂🙂

The protagonist wants to be a teacher to end his war career. This is true, but have you underestimated the so-called ninja world? Many ninjas are still cruel. The protagonist's own strength is useless in some crisis moments. Goldfinger still has to wait for others to notify him. Sometimes you are still in class. Is this possible for you? I don't believe that a school can let you be a teacher in the toilet for a day without anyone suspecting it.

Awesome and interesting. The existence of novels is to make up for some regrets.

I can't bear it anymore! Being a Itachi is so boring! What ruins Itachi's setting and sense of immersion is mainly having so many people messing around in the same world. If it's an infinite stream, there will be a God's perspective to reduce the discomfort. You are in the first person!

I don't know if I can continue writing a novel like this. I've read two novels that were also girly in this way and I couldn't write them down.

It's finally on the shelves, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Everything can be transformed into a girl

After waking up, it is oneself who undergoes sexual transformation. Tsukuyomi World is just that she (he) is unwilling to face the facts! →_→

I want to read this book, and I thought about it for a long time, why is the protagonist so nice to these girls? Is the protagonist kind? Justice? Holy Mother? Bad guy? The protagonist is the body of another girl who is simply greedy. Just ask why the protagonist only kills Kisame? Because Kisame is not a beautiful girl, how did Deidara and Scorpion survive? Because she is a girl. If she were a boy, do you think the protagonist would spread their ashes?

Tuge, I have cancer, late-stage lung cancer. I have undergone several chemotherapy treatments, but nothing has worked. Now I am waiting to die slowly at home. I only have the last three or four months. Before I die, I just want to finish reading this book of yours.

Later, the protagonist deepens the bond with Naruko and the others, and then the Tsukuyomi ends. The protagonist tries hard to return to the Tsukuyomi world, but finds that it seems to be just an illusion, and there is no way to go back. The protagonist begins to despair and recognize the reality, and decides to give up. After a long time, a golden twin-tailed ponytail appeared in front of the protagonist. Speaking of what I said, if you leave, I will not go back to be Hokage. I want to find you, and now I am here

I really liked reading it at first, this kind of heartwarming romance. But it feels a bit wrong to transform into u to comfort Erzhu. . Later on, I felt like U was the protagonist, and the waistcoat promoted the plot, which was okay, but having such a warm relationship with the heroine always felt like a doppelganger novel. Am I too sensitive? Anyway, it feels quite awkward.

Added to bookshelf, looks great now

I accidentally thought of this book again after many years, and I couldn't help but feel sad.

No wonder the title of the book is called Madara, I beg you to continue the monthly reading. After canceling the monthly reading, I found that the girls have turned into foot-picking men, so I begged Mr. Madara to continue the monthly reading with snot and tears.

It seems to be really cool. From the moment I saw the turtle that traveled through time and space, I knew it was going to collapse. There are not many people who are not cool with bringing things from Boruto into Shippuden.

So this is the novel that macho men should read?

Although I stopped reading it after Ning Ning's Rebellion, I often come to the book review section to read it. Author, if you see my book review, I also implore you to read my review. Your writing style and writing style are relatively good. Compared with most people, you are very good. However, I think your outline and overall situation are not well done, and you have not considered the subsequent development. If it is a behind-the-scenes stream at the beginning, writing sweet stories between the protagonist and Naruko, Ningning, Tiantian, etc. (Sorry, I forgot about Sasuke), then it can be written smoothly. The author, you turned the behind-the-scenes into the bright side midway, letting Uchiha Itachi fall in love with the female Itachi, and letting Sasuke take control. There are already some signs of collapse here, because this is not a good ending, and it must hurt and deceive others and yourself. The next step is to start to downplay the protagonist herself and other female characters. When you get to Time Turtle, the book collapses further, because you have brought into another time and space, and it is also the original time and space. This is a very dangerous move, because it will make readers fall into confusion about the characters of the original Naruto and the author you wrote, and your writing will definitely be affected to a certain extent. In the end, when Payne and Xiaonan died and Ningning defected, I thought the book entered a complete collapse.

I saw some girly pictures on the Internet. Although the book is cool, I think it's good to share with you 😄 Uzumaki Naruko Uchiha Sana Uchiha Tobi Hatake Akane Hyuga Nene Gaara Jiraiya Inuzuka Kiba

I didn't want to watch it after I used the clone to go to bed with Yuan. I thought the clone was a failure. It is better to add character abilities to yourself. Are you going to use Uchiha Itachi to fuck Sana? Give up, give up.

The protagonist is so angry! As long as it's a woman, do you care about it? Asa baptizes the male protagonist?

The author was sitting in the police station, with the dazzling lights shining on his pale face. Facing the police's questioning, his handcuffed hands weakly covered his collapsed face "I'm sorry, I know she should be a boy, but, but..." "Naruko is so cute!" The author shouted as if he was giving up on himself "I regret it now, very much regret it" [Dog Head Saves Life]

Novels like the girly version of Naruto and Sasuke, this kind of novel! ! ! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I simply can't refuse!

The taste has changed, it no longer has the same taste as at the beginning... Following up to chapter 209 and chapter 220, that is, reading 11 more chapters to see the situation. If it still makes people feel stomachache, I can only give up... After all, I am not here to torture. By the way, the author's style is very suitable for female videos. Pure Love** has a special feeling of female videos... The only reason why I keep reading this book is because the setting is relatively novel... People on the Other Side. I don't know if other authors have written this kind of setting, but this is really the first time I have seen this kind of setting. Personally, I think the failure is that I used the setting of Boruto and started in other time and space. It's better if you can't kill Black Zetsu from the beginning. After all, most of the Black Zetsu in Naruto stories are Xiaoqiang who can't be killed no matter what. It turns out that you can kill people here, but you just kill one person after another. Then you might as well write about two black Zetsus working together, causing trouble together, and saving their respective mothers together! Also, if possible, the plot should not be too complicated, not too confusing, and it is not a mystery. I read novels in the light novel (two-dimensional) category to relax, not to squeeze my brain... PS: Personal suggestions and personal opinions are for reference only. Please continue to write according to your own ideas.

I have something to say to the author. This book relied on its warm and cozy atmosphere to attract me at first. The plot was also very good, and the descriptions of various sexually rebellious characters were also good. Until Neji came out and Boruto's time-travel machine appeared, the plot of this book became more and more broken. I don't know if readers who are also attracted by the heartwarming romance feel the same as me. What I look forward to is romance, what I look forward to is the emotional development of Itachi and Toi, what I look forward to is the emotional development of Masumi and Ning Ning, what I look forward to is the emotional development of Masumi and Naruko. Instead of a bloody Naruto world. Thank you. If you don't agree with me, just treat this paragraph as a complaint from a different reader.

This book is really good, I can't put it down. I started reading it a few years ago. Is there any similar book about grave sweeping?