The Poet of the One Piece Straw Hat Crew

Can you please write some details? I feel like I just wrote about the general process without any detailed description.

The author can write more details. The flowing plot is very boring. You can write down every detail and what has been said. Then you can read the poems by yourself, such as poetry appreciation collections, as long as the meaning is similar. If you want, you can change it yourself. You don't have to write it yourself.

Update, brother, I just saw it today. You haven't updated it in four days. I saw that you still have an old book with a million words. Please don't be a eunuch.

Update, brother, I just saw it today. You haven't updated it in four days. I saw that you still have an old book with a million words. Please don't be a eunuch.

After reading a few chapters, I just want to say that the author can describe some details. For example, you also mentioned your father's attitude towards the protagonist. He wants the protagonist to learn the aristocratic temperament and wants the protagonist to become a nobleman. Here you can add that the father has a big psychological shadow on the protagonist when he was young. Then when I was crying alone, the butler comforted me, so as time went by, I respected the butler very much. Then my father went to give gifts to the Celestial Dragons. Instead, my father went to sea to buy a devil fruit and was targeted by pirates, and he was killed by the pirates. And for Luffy's invitation to the protagonist, you can change it to "This guy's smile is the same as the guy from two years ago. It seems that they are bound to win the Pirate King" and the like For Zoro, in the early stage, Zoro is a swordsman, so he said to Zoro, "Huh? Are you a swordsman too?" And then write the feeling of not knowing each other without fighting. Then compare and grow with each other

If my predictions about the protagonist's fruit abilities and appearance are correct, you shouldn't have described them according to this picture. This is the picture I saved in my photo album many years ago

It would be nice if the protagonist used an umbrella sword.

Why does it feel like a running account?

Putting aside the content, I was disgusted at the beginning. Do you directly want to kill your father? Just think that he puts pressure on you to learn aristocratic etiquette. What a disgusting thing.

The subject matter of the book is quite good, and the concept is good, but it can describe some details and don't just brush everything over.