You've Already Been Reborn, and You Still Treat Your Buddy Like a Slut?

As a reader who has read a lot of urban rebirth articles, I sincerely give the author a piece of advice. He actually wrote about this woman in a very romantic way at the beginning. She fell in love during college and later got married, so the male protagonist must decisively cut off from her and not be separated from her. Otherwise, this will dissuade readers. If you want to whitewash her in the later stage, then her character should be to hang on to the male protagonist and study abroad... Most readers will also accept the whitewash in the later stage. Since you set her up as this persona, the male protagonist must break up with her completely. She will be a tool from now on. The more successful the male protagonist is, the more she will regret it. This is a refreshing point for readers. There are a lot of urban rebirth articles that start like yours, and many of them are not handled well, resulting in very poor results. Battle of the Sky was very popular back then because the author was able to capture the excitement of the readers. The woman who broke off the engagement was a tool. The more powerful the protagonist was, the more she regretted it. The readers were very happy and wanted to follow it.

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to be so perfunctory about the younger brother? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The elder brother has a weak body and bones, so just get more rest. It is the younger brother's fault that he is urging the elder brother so much. Yes, hurting my brother's body also makes my brother feel distressed . Unfortunately, what does it have to do with my brother's health? Come, the author reads to me My solemn oath: From today on, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games, not hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive to create brilliance, take pleasure in coding, and steel can be tempered a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, worthy of the future As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Code writing is my calling. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently I am a keyboard in the dark, a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night. Update quickly, how can you sleep at your age? Follow 😡

The heroine reminds me of the heroine of another novel, Feng Shunan

There are so many rebirths, why are they all selling milk tea at the beginning?

The competition in the urban channel is too fierce. There are many things that are not well written in this first book by a new author. I would like to give a kowtow to all readers. If you have any opinions, please directly criticize the author in the comment area! Then this book really needs to be read! ! I hope you readers don't keep books! Please! !

Liu Shiyan

Going to cut? Updates are so weak

I'll recommend it to you, keep updating, and I'll spend money on you once it's on the shelves.