Planning a Different World

I think it would be better for the author to revise the previous settings 1. The person summoned by the goddess is his own master, which is a poisonous point 2. Too much reality is written. The behind-the-scenes flow can be written without reality, and you have written too much reality in the previous dozens of chapters 3. At the beginning, at least one of the female protagonist and the male protagonist needs to be portrayed, which is more interesting and the description is too peaceful.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel pretty good. I drew a preliminary map and will add it after reading it 😁 Some places are not described in detail, which is limited by my personal ability, resulting in conflicts in some issues. The map is for reference only┐(´-｀)┌

I've found that a lot of behind-the-scenes game streams are very nice to players and are purely about letting players play the game well. However, this kind of game will never develop. Reasons... 1. Resurrection has a cost. 2. Task rewards have costs. 3 There are so many sand sculpture players. The cost will increase as the level increases. Generally, there is no limit. How to develop if there are no resources?

Tell me what you think after watching it. The author's writing is good. Express yourself clearly. There is currently no suspicion of water word count. Now that I see it, I feel that it is well written and there is nothing poisonous about it. Although the player's IQ owes a little fee, the writing is generally very good. Rare food and grass 😃 four-star praise

I can't figure out a problem. If we want to play foreign games, we can only translate them online. Or if we have learned English before, even if there is a translation, it is translated by a domestic team. But when our games go abroad, we need to translate them...

... This is a free-range book world with two main tool people (male and female protagonists). True·herding sheep (player). . Seemingly chaotic, macro-control does not give people the feeling of chaos. Awesome!

Drawn carefully*ଯ( ॢᵕ꒶̮ᵕ)ॢഒ*☽˟

What is the position of a goddess? At first I thought she was a mascot, responsible only for her beauty, then I thought she was a tool, someone who summoned brave men to issue tasks. After reading a few chapters, I felt like she was a dragster who used her divine power to exchange for wine, which made me feel a little dizzy.

Reminder: Please ignore VR and automatically create virtual reality game warehouses, optical brain helmets and other equipment, otherwise the plot will become anti-intellectual from the beginning.

There is one thing I have to say. The writing is okay, but if you want a goddess to be the protagonist's wife, it may be a bit poisonous: 1. Although she only summons the soul and gives the body, in Chapter 29, the goddess pats the male player on the shoulder and has some physical touch (the key is that the male protagonist does not have this benefit yet)! 2. In the same chapter 29, the goddess took out a book from her chest (did she take it from the gap in the feeding area? Yes...) By the way, it is best not to have too much expectations for the heroine Gesia. This goddess has various physical contacts with players and other races (taking a book from her chest to a male player, patting the male player on the shoulder, touching the male elf's head, it seems that the male elf almost exposed his feet...)

Every time Ye Xiaohan appeared, I felt so cold that my toes gripped the ground in embarrassment. The author wanted to portray some kind of genius girl, but he didn't have the ability to portray it, so the result was just an ordinary elementary school student with cheats. Quite a downgrade to the book

Come on! Author🙂

I feel like it might be much better if I don't have that goddess.

To be honest, I persuaded that goddess to quit.

Infinite resurrection, is it necessary for stupid players? Do locals play a bigger role? Using earthlings will do no good except to satisfy the YY hearts of diaosi readers.

Is it so easy to sign a contract now? I want to invest and have signed a contract after reading more than ten novels 😅

It's a pity that there is no picture, so I added one randomly.

A very good novel. I haven't seen a novel that suits my liking for a long time. Please support me with the four monthly votes I got after voting this month (I want to add more)

After reading Chapter 10, the protagonist is too high-profile. The company also went to game shows. Don't you know what's going on with your game?

If the player's soul is extracted or swallowed by creatures from another world in another world, wouldn't he die directly in reality?

The ending is too rushed. In fact, some real-life bugs can be ignored, because everything is in the game world, and the plot is actually well written. However, the fattening of the beginning and the end is not good. The author who reads patiently will find the charm of this novel

I can watch it, but the fighting scenes are about 0. There is no specific fighting at all. It's just two people coming into contact, and then it's over. Fighting is the most exciting part of the game. Even if you can't write, it can't be nothing.

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I've read quite a few chapters. This book should be a follow-the-trend article about otherworld games. You can be a bit uncertain. It's exciting to read what readers like. The breaking point. Yours is too bland. In other words, the modern technology affects the game in the process. It's a little bit refreshing. Others are too bland. I can't hold on anymore.

The protagonist is in the real society The game is also released in the real society The game is 100% realistic. I don't believe that no one will be interested in it and attack the protagonist If they do What will the protagonist do? The old-fashioned urban novel has appeared, why not throw the protagonist into the city If you don't do it... It's crazy

Tell me sincerely and do it well. There are more than ten typos in almost every chapter, which looks really awkward. They slipped away and stopped serving.

I really can't complain. Each of the 10,000 players can be resurrected an average of 100 times (equivalent to 1 million). You still let the enemy play with a ball. Personally, I don't recommend writing two worlds, because you can't control it at all, and the combat scenes are only 10% at most. Are you still letting minors play the game?

The author has opened a new book, if you like it you can read it. Help vote

I've finished reading it, it's very good^ω^

The data is a mess (readers are advised to ignore it). The overall style is pretty good, but not detailed enough! 😃