The Path to Building an Immortal Cultivation Clan

The background setting is good, but the protagonist is too self-righteous. He wants to revive his family in three or five years. He always feels that he has traveled through time in a systematic way and looks down on the indigenous people. If it is really going to be written, I hope it will give him a big setback.

I found a seedling of the Xianxia family, come on!

There are only 6 monthly passes, which is a bit disappointing. I'll give you 2 monthly passes. By the way, I'll give you a more detailed post.

The protagonist doesn't even have a wife or children, so what kind of family is there for cultivating immortals? It feels unworthy

The writing is pretty good, but I'm confused that the protagonist hasn't broken through the Foundation Establishment after 200 chapters. Also, Wang Lin's character is involved in pornography, gambling and drugs. I'm worried that the protagonist of your book will get 404 before he reaches the Golden Core 😰😰😰

It's a good book. The drawback is that the protagonist's strength needs to be improved, otherwise it would be too embarrassing. He is already on an equal footing with the big sects. Even building the foundation is not very weak. Anyway, keep going and support it with monthly tickets.

No, the character of this protagonist is okay, but I really don't want to talk about his strength. First of all, his identity is that he is a major in the East and his cultivation level is less than the golden elixir. Later, he was suppressed by various people one after another, such as an old aunt or an old idiot. Now, a clan member beats him and directly licks him? He has the strength, but this attitude is too bad. The clan leader is too unworthy, and his ambition is so disgusting. Isn't it normal? Protagonist, you have to pretend to be 13 and have a solid foundation. Although there are setbacks, this seems to be a one-sided abuse of the protagonist. The setbacks should be the protagonist's experience. The current situation makes the protagonist look like a jumping rat... The author still needs to consider it...

After reading more than 20 chapters, the author's writing style is still good, and I didn't find any bugs in the early stage. Maybe it's just me. To be honest, I can't accept the character of the protagonist. I always feel a little uncomfortable watching it. A bit too self-righteous and unable to listen to others' advice. I haven't read it yet, but I'll forget it because of my own reasons. I can't accept the protagonist's character.

Let me make a suggestion for the next book. I strongly urge the author to design a portable planting space for the protagonist!! If there is a planting space, there will be the potential to become a god! Be sure to use more space when writing about the protagonist!! This book wouldn't be good without space!! If there is space, why don't some books become popular? There is just no room for planting! If there is room for planting, it will definitely become popular! If you don't believe it, you can read the book Ambrosia Supplier. This book is very popular! Because this book of grass jelly suppliers has planting space, some planting spaces will become popular!!!

So slow!!!! Update it quickly!!!!