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The writing style is okay, the writing is average, the plot develops too fast, and less detail should be written. Although the author wants to express it, the writing style cannot hold up. As the saying goes, if you are good, you should do what you can. The author's writing style needs to be improved and needs more practice. I suggest the author reflect on it and read it a few times.

Good book, already collected! The more you write, the better. I hope to recycle it!

Alas, after comparing this book with the first Douluo Dalu and the animation that I watched a little bit, I found that the plot is similar. I don't understand the meaning of the book of war in it, but it is very similar to the Contra system. The author is really cute, but he blindly imitates, but he falls behind. After all, it is unremarkable, and there is an author ahead of him to bring it to its peak. I don't know what the author thinks, unless the author can surpass it.