The Mortal Body of the Heroic Company

I can't watch it, I can't stand it, my aesthetics can't accept it, the changes are too big, Ge Xiaolun has not been worn yet, he has started to change the original work, and Liang Bing's character, the plot I watched made Liang Bing look a bit like a lady, and the author really treated her as a lesbian, and flirted with a beautiful girl when he saw her? People are interested in Rose. If, if, the Space-Time Rose gene was inherited by a man, it would definitely be the same.

? ? ? How should I put it? You assume that Lin is a veteran, right? War itself, a towering figure in the universe? Why did he become so awkward when he became a super god? Although he didn't fully awaken due to the environment in the early stage, didn't you also write that in order to save Qilin, the two personalities merged into one in order to gain strength? The writing is immature, and the protagonist's setting is a bit confusing.

Wasn't it called Veteran before? Why didn't you write that again?

The beginning of the article is uncreative and not attractive enough, and the connotation is too superficial and far-fetched. As a supernatural article, although it has achieved full imagination outside the plot, it is somewhat off-topic and does not serve the plot well. It is recommended that the author delete it or use it as an introduction. The advantage is: the author writes his own characteristics and dares to change and imagine! It has many unique plots and plenty of writing power! I hope the author can gain something from my speech. Come on＾0＾~＾0＾~Keep going♥

Tsk tsk, I opened the directory and found one body and two souls. Fuck, it's better not to have one. I really can't stand it if both souls are there. It's too poisonous.

To be honest, your typos didn't dissuade me, and those first few pictures didn't dissuade me either. But if you open a harem coquettishly, you might as well not open it. The heroine Yan could just write the others as comrades. Why do you have to open a harem? And it's very blunt.

The heroine Liang Bing is very good.

The introduction seems interesting, let's take a look.

This shouldn't be a single female protagonist. Very frivolous feeling.

Although Xiao Lun has invincible abilities in the anime, he doesn't know how to use them, so I've always wanted to see a protagonist who time travels into Ge Xiao Lun and defeats his opponents.

Why is it a bit strange when I read it earlier and then came to the part with Ge Xiaolun?

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? Don't they usually go on sale for 300,000 yuan?

After reading it for a long time, nothing attracted me. It was a complete copy of the original work, and it didn't leave any traces of copying. The writing is pretty good. Are you slow to warm up? I can't stand it after reading a few chapters.

Brother, the plot has been changed. The person Liu Chuang teased has become Morgana. Ge Xiaolun has awakened in advance. If Morgana is connected, it is with Qiangwei. What does it have to do with Qilin? Qilin's genes have nothing to do with Morgana. Is this a change to the plot? The changes are too big.

Author, can you correct the typo?

I have canceled this account and this book will not be updated. No time to write. Sorry readers.

There are too many typos. Can you check to see if there are any typos after coding?

I don't understand 🤫

So the heroine is Liang Bing? I feel ok.

Why is there no chapter 71 of the author? What did he write 😠

Can the author use another identity to write the protagonist of the novel? Travel to the Xiongbing Company to get genes. Don't write it as Ge Xiaolun, just write it with the author's own character. You can give it another name and character, which is a copy of your author's character. Go to the Xiongbing Company world and fall in love with the heroine Liang Bing to write a novel.

To be honest, I have no idea what on earth you are writing about? Was there a war written at the beginning? Later it was changed to Ge Xiaolun. I really want to know why your writing spans so much without even a little transition? Is there any relationship between the two of them? Well! Speechless!

There is no logic and the plot does not make sense