Shaoxia, Do You Want to Buy It?

Initial review: 72 points Category: Martial Arts Status: Unsigned Serialized Number of words read: 59,000/59,000 This is a book that makes people want to laugh while reading it. There are many humorous words and some Internet memes included in the plot, making it feel relaxed and enjoyable. However, there are also many poisonous points, and those with weak resistance will definitely give up the book. One: Book title (5/10) Using a question as the title of the book, I personally think it is quite fresh. Internet literature is full of strange things, no, there should be more whimsical ideas. As long as it can achieve results, being unconventional is innovation and breakthrough. But I don't like the title of the book. Two: Introduction (7/10) This introduction perfectly embodies the essence of the word "Jian": "There is no cheat in the world. The more you buy, the more you become a Xia. A great Xia is a lifelong member." This is a super imitation of Lu Xun's big tone, and there is also a faint aura of Shen Teng. I don't know if I am thinking too much. Three: Opening: 14/20 The opening chapter is in line with the standards of the Internet world. Xiao Shuo was not only divorced but also assassinated by the woman's tribe, and his death was extremely tragic. Then comes the Wuyou with hanging system, is it a golden finger? Or two male protagonists? A little confused. With the help of Guan, Xiao Shuo, whose engagement was broken off, still wanted to marry his previous partner. It's just that the body died and needed to be resurrected. In order to resurrect the two temporarily disembodied souls, they began a journey of collecting wealth. Four: Plot setting: (14/20) An illegitimate child who was positioned as a waste lived a miserable life, and was assassinated after his engagement was broken off. A gamer died suddenly while playing games at home and traveled to the world where Xiao Shuo was. He became a disembodied soul with a money-making system, helping Xiao Shuo become stronger step by step. Five: Character setting: (14/20) Xiao Shuo is an illegitimate child who has always been submissive. His life is miserable. He wants to change but has no way or way. The assassination became a turning point in his fate. In the beginning, I asked Wuyou for help whenever I had a problem. Later, I slowly inspired my inner sense of responsibility and mission, and began to resist and want to become stronger. The step-by-step changes in this character are very reasonable. Wuyou's positioning is still unclear. Is he a golden finger? What's that belt hanging system? Accessories? He has always been the source of power behind Xiao Shuo, but he really wants to be resurrected and have a physical body. Is Wuyou, who has a body, considered a double male protagonist? The main reason is that the author has written a lot about both people, and it is still difficult to tell them apart. The foreigner priest is definitely here to be funny, and his presence enhances the humor of this article. Lu Li has a contradictory personality and is not lovable. Will that beautiful water ghost be resurrected by Wuyou? Six: Literary Talent: (18/20) The author's writing skills are very good, and he has the ability to attract readers to his words. His natural and smooth writing style makes people laugh while laughing and scolding. The occasional literary talents reveal the author's impressive background. The occasional addition of some dialects makes the characters more playful and energetic. Overall evaluation: Excluding the poisonous points, this is one of the best books I have seen so far. Of course, newbies will have problems of one kind or another when writing books. They need to find problems and solve them. It will get better and better in the future.

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This is probably the first time for the author to write a book, and his writing skills are not very good. After all, writing skills are developed through practice. I believe that the author's writing skills will get better and better. I have already joined a new book investment group, and I hope that the author can keep writing. Come on! 🙂

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