The Sword Spreads Evil Across the Heavens

The plot in the early stages developed too fast, and many things were passed by in one stroke. The protagonist seemed to be a genius. After all, he was able to fight the villain soon after practicing martial arts. However, the villain's opponent was too weak, and almost everyone the protagonist met would suffer unknown consequences. If you really want to enter Taoism with a sword, it would be very difficult. Especially now that the protagonist doesn't know the difference between magic and immortality. The description of the fight is not detailed enough and is too short. The writing is okay and the writing style is average. But overall, the early development is rapid. If the protagonist is really what the introduction says, after all, people don't want to change, but what they encounter Various events and misfortunes will force you to change. Come on, the author, don't forget your original intention and keep it up. It is recommended to read more novels of the same type and learn from them. After all, the world advocates immortality. If you want to fall, you have to do it. Why should you do this? I suggest the author not to think too simply.

Come on! Let's encourage each other and have collected it! Remember to recycle

It feels pretty good, but the downside is that it's too ordinary. For example, it is difficult to stir up a splash in a river At first, it feels a bit like a routine article It lacks some highlights, but the writing style is not bad

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