HP Approaches the Magical World

Click in and take a look, and you will find that it is an article without a female protagonist and no emotional adjustment. Although it is not what I like to read, I still want to encourage the author! Come on!

The purpose of reading novels is to make people relax and happy. The author writes very seriously, but I was very tired after reading it. The whole novel is full of philosophy and thinking, which makes me feel that I am at work again. It is really unenjoyable. The author should work harder, I may not be able to continue reading.

It's good to have ideas. What impact does your setting have on the plot? Is the setting reasonable? What do you want to express? To be honest, it's not enough, far from enough.

I've been reading Harry Potter fanfics for so many years... I haven't finished any of them with HP written directly in the name.

The problem with this book is that the author has too many private goods. From the perspective of the protagonist, I think it is right and I think it is OK. The meditation method that others think is dangerous cannot be learned. The protagonist thinks that I can do it and it is no problem. The materials for the legendary wizard's potion are too rare. The protagonist thinks that I can improve it. In short, all kinds of mysterious confidence. This is also the contradiction between many readers and authors. Authors always feel that their logic is self-consistent, but many readers feel that it is not. So the author always feels that others are arguing with him 🙂

This book is a bit smaller. Because at the beginning of the second or third chapter, the protagonist's views on the original three little ones were mentioned. The main idea of ​​the original text is: Stay away from the three little ones until you are able to protect yourself. Needless to say, this kind of deliberately mentioned foreshadowing will continue to be related to the original three little ones in the future content, and I guess that most of the authors will refer to the original text and make the second set of magical changes themselves. This seems to have become an HP routine. (In the same issue, the story of Generations or the prequel has already begun, and the layout of this book at the beginning seems a bit small in comparison) And then... The heads of the three little running groups that have remained unchanged for thousands of years, The carefully supplemented pure-blood family, The wand selection process that cannot be imitated and surpassed... This makes me feel that the author is not a person who loves HP very much. In fact, in addition to the 28 families, there are many other pure-blood families in the UK. Like the Potters. Furthermore, there are many pure-blood wizards in the 13 golden families in the United States, France, and Germany. If the author is willing to look it up, he can easily give the protagonist a reasonable identity and ancestry instead of... "Carefully original". I was persuaded to quit after the protagonist received the admission notice. The child who had never touched a magic wand began to plan his great ambition after receiving the letter. It's like saying hello to Goldfinger... It makes people want to complain inexplicably. It's understandable to cheat on the protagonist. But can you not use such an inferior method? I said that I was the best, so I worked hard, I was serious, I was self-disciplined... Then I happened to be, I was familiar with it, and I succeeded... Such HP is not mysterious at all. Under Rowling's rigorous conception, HP details have beautifully depicted a magical world. Those plug-ins and secondary designs that are given out of the blue are obviously not that easy to overturn the original text. Or, blatant cheating, limit the openness of cheating. Either be familiar with HP peripherals, carefully apply the original text, and fill in the gaps for Rowling. In fact, when Rowling wrote the fourth Goblet of Fire, British fan fiction was already popular. So Rowling left a lot of Easter eggs and loopholes in order to encourage book friends (and help her create popularity). But few authors are willing to think about it in detail, which I think is a waste. The description in the book is very detailed, but not exciting at all. The protagonist has high ambitions, but the pattern is not big at all. I don't like it very much, but I don't want to object to anything. I just simply expressed my opinion. Thank you, please don't argue.

You will really be deceived just by reading the introduction and preface. What does expanding the worldview mean? Expansion is not a mishmash. I really don't understand what the hell the meditation method is. It forcefully inserts things from other systems and other worlds. If you want to quickly improve the protagonist's combat power, you can start with bloodline or magic potions or magic riots. Bloodline is the original There are things that are covered but not expanded upon. So many points can be written I also love reading Western fantasy magic novels. I have been reading them for many years, including normal ones and logical ones. Even now, I am still looking for novels of this type. , Although there are almost no good works now, I think anyone who knows a little bit about HP and traditional Western magic knows that the difference between the two is very big. Western magic is said to be magic, but its essence is still materialistic.

Grindelwald: Someone once asked me, if I had a choice, would I choose my original path again? My answer at that time was no, I would rather be an ordinary wizard. But then someone asked me this question again, and that time, I answered yes. Because if I had not chosen that path, I would not have met you, fallen in love with you, or stood here begging you to let me continue to love you. I give this ring to you as a symbol of love and fidelity, and when I put it on your finger, I commit to you my whole heart and soul, and I ask you to wear this ring, which bears witness to the vows we have made today, on our wedding day. Dumbledore: Gellert, when I look into your eyes, what I see is my soulmate, a person who seems destined by God to bring two lives together. You are the most handsome, loyal and honest person I have ever met. I will I will give myself and my whole heart to you. You will accompany me with your love, humor and endless patience. You will unconditionally accept the real me and bring me warmth and security. In this life, I will be by your side as your partner. Albus, I am sure, it is us who are sure, thinking of you, no matter what happens, I will be by your side. Today, on our wedding, I promise you, I promise to be your partner in life. Helga's Marriage Speech: Then I will be honored to announce that according to the glory of the deep sea, in the name of the founder of Hogwarts and the living gods, I send you my blessings. The two of you have become a couple, sealed with a kiss.

Chapter 20, I felt drowsy after reading it, talking serious nonsense, I must go to school, but I didn't study magic well after entering, thinking about life every day, talking about all kinds of philosophy, then what are you doing in school? Isn't it good to think about life at home? The main author also said that if you don't want to disturb the original work, you shouldn't go to school, just think about life quietly at home. The original work doesn't need to be changed at all.

The protagonist comes to Hogwarts to learn spells and enhance magic power. Everything else is secondary. However, obviously the author does not have such awareness and adds all kinds of messy things to the protagonist to hold him back. After all, isn't the purpose of students going to school to learn? Are there still primary school students going to school to work?

As long as you don't know how to be a eunuch, people will disappear after writing. Even if the update is discontinued, please send a single chapter to ask for leave from readers. I will always have a monthly ticket for you! I can't keep up with twenty books at the same time. There are great masters and little transparent ones. The bottom line is no eunuchs! I love your books, the world you created, and you completed a part of the Harry Potter universe!

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 5, I'm so proud of myself! Even if you write a fanfic, you should still follow the original settings and basic logic!

Author, I like the way you set up the character of the protagonist at the beginning: he doesn't want to mix with Gryffindor and Slytherin, he doesn't want to be emotionally affected by other people, and he doesn't want to work hard for others like Dumbledore. One of the advantages of joining Hufflepuff is that he doesn't compete for the House Cup. But what did the protagonist do next? Make friends with your roommates, learn to show your magic power for your roommates, start a club, compete for the Academy Cup, help Dumbledore, and save Cedric. The author may have many ideas of his own when writing fan fiction, but at least he should not violate some of the settings of the original work. I think many book friends have mentioned it in this chapter so I won't go into details, so I'll skip it. So the author can't go back and forth when writing his own works, right? The protagonist first said that he wanted to keep a low profile, and then showed his strength for his roommate, but the roommate gave the protagonist nothing to do? Didn't the protagonist promise to concentrate on magic and not be affected by others? If all good intentions were rewarded, would there be any misery in the world? The spell is very powerful and it is passed down from my family. There is obviously a better way to solve the problem that is more in line with the character's characteristics, but a method that completely goes against the character's personality is used. Why is this? The protagonist wants to leave the salvation of the world to the protagonist group, but why does he suddenly want to improve the strength of Hufflepuff and then the magical world? I think the above issues completely violate the character setting of the protagonist from the beginning.

I've only read around chapter 60, and the author's secondary settings and magic modifications are fine, but don't you think the various explanations and settings are too tight? It's like eating three days of food, and it feels like you have to cram it all into one meal. In fact, you can have some daily snacks in the middle.

I've read Chapter 20 and can't stand it anymore. . Can anyone tell me what's going on later?

After reading more than twenty chapters, the book can usually be read during a book shortage. By the way, the author is really arrogant

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

After reading the first few chapters, there are some common elements in HP fans 1 Eastern elements 2 The principal's paranoia about everyone's Legilimency 3 Similar comparisons of "Which is more powerful, Muggles or wizards?" I thought this was a flaw

I gritted my teeth and reached chapter 60, and I really couldn't stand it anymore.

In my personal opinion, among the numerous hp fan novels from Qidian, this fan fic, which has only a dozen chapters and has just begun, is already above the standard! Come on, author, maintain this level, persevere, and you will surely stand out!

Author, let me tell you a story! The following is the text. Once upon a time, there was a creature called a carrying spirit. They take pleasure in making excuses and have fed on the emotions of angry people. If the person you see him taking advantage of is not happy, he will be happy. It is inevitable that a few of these creatures will pop out from the crowd. They look like humans. But there is much more world-weariness in the heart than normal people. Why does this kind of arrogance appear? Because they think this way: Ah, it's unpleasant and uncomfortable. Uncomfortable. Why do others write like this, why does he write like this? Not to my liking. What a joy to argue! Why should you get angry with such a person? Because they have degenerated from human beings into arrogant ones. After all, such people are in the minority. So what? Don't be angry. Keep writing.

It's a good book, but it's a pity that it has to be written in a gay tone.

After reading more than 130 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that what the protagonist was doing was meaningless.

"Hogwarts Fans"

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that I discovered it a little late, but it's just right to read it a little bit thicker*⸜( •ᴗ• )⸝*

I feel like the protagonist has a bit too much inner drama

After reading thirty chapters, except for some daily cleaning, it is more like a philosophy book. Discussions of life and death, soul and reincarnation.

It's well written, I'll keep following it.

This is a very smart author. Shen Yun is a low-key, luxurious and connotative approach. Isn't it good for him to make a fortune in silence? I haven't read much, but the underlying content of this book is pretty good. Added some more settings and increased the upper limit. The origin of wizards is not clear at all in the original work, and wizards are a species with a high lower limit and a high upper limit. Dumbledore and his equipment killed a second-level wizard. If the setting were true, the story would be just a bunch of noobs pecking each other. The hidden thread of Dumbledore's battle of wits with the air.

The author seems to have forgotten some settings that have been explained clearly in the books, such as the Marauder's Map, which was clearly stated in the third part. They got it when the twins were in first grade. For example, Squib just can't use magic, but he can still go to Diagon Alley. After all, even Muggles can do it. Squibs have knowledge of the wizarding world, they can see things that Muggles cannot, and can use certain magic items and magical creatures that can help them. They can enter the station. And wizards among Muggles are the descendants of Squibs and Muggles.